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Psychic_Llamas
Jun 14, 2006, 06:22 AM
Ok, This thread is going to be where i post and diplomacy texts that i do, and also any one else who wants to can have a go too, any help is welcomed (especially for races that are a little more obscure ie Cathay, Ind etc)

@ Woodelf, Could you post a list of ever leader (and race) you have diplo for, and every leader (and race) you still need for? i lost track of where i am:mischief:

woodelf
Jun 14, 2006, 07:18 AM
Damn you beat me to it. :blush:

I might start a new thread P_L so I can update it as we go along (since only the originator can edit). I'll get that out shortly.

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 14, 2006, 07:26 AM
Ok, not too sure what you mean by: "(since only the originator can edit)."
But ok all the same ;)

woodelf
Jun 14, 2006, 07:34 AM
Sorry. I meant the first post. This way I can keep track of all of your work. :p

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 14, 2006, 07:37 AM
I might start by compiling all of the stuff i did before, ill do that in italics so you know what was done before OK?


Previous diplos:
Orion

Declare War--"Beware mortal, for I am comming for thee, with The Hunt at my heels!"

First Contact--"Well met mortal. Are thy friend or foe of The Forest?"

Refuse to Speak--"A mortal dares to confront me! Begon before I send my Hounds after you!!"

Peace--"Winter is nearing, and thy armies and mine need rest. What say thee to an end to this violence?"

No Peace--"Not even the Winter of Woe could prevent The Wild Hunt from chasing thee the worlds edge."

Greetings Friendly--"Greetings friend, come, walk with me through the Halls of my Court."

Greetings Furious--"For thy sake thee had better have a good explanation for this disterbance."

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger--" Athel Loren seeks the aid of Her allies, and thyself is the only one worthy of such a title."
--" We have been good to thee as equals for centuries, now, about my payment..."
--" Give Athel Loren what She wants and we will not need to take it from thee...forcefully..."

Accept Offer--"I on behalf of the Asrai, I accept this generous offer."

Thanks--"Thank you"


Ariel

Declare War--"Beware mortal, the Forest is on the move. Soon thou willst be norishment for the trees!!"

First Contact--"Well met. Are thy a friend or a foe of The Forest?"

Refuse to Speak--"A mortal dares to confront me! Begon before i make you play with my sprites!"

Peace--"The Woods groan for peace, and i am obliged to ask... Dost thou accept?"

No Peace--"The atrocities thou hast done against the Asrai will never be forgotten, we have long memories, and thee can count on the fact that we will fight to the death!!"

Greetings Friendly--"Greetings friend, come, sit with me under the canopy of Athel Loren."

Greetings Furious--"For thy sake thou hast better have a good explanation for this disterbance."

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger--" Athel Loren seeks the aid of Her allies, and thyself is the only one worthy of such a title."
--" We have been good to thee as equals for centuries, now, about my payment..."
--" Give Athel Loren what She wants and we will not need to take it from thee...forcefully..."

Accept Offer--"I on behalf of the Asrai, I accept this generous offer."

Thanks--"Thank you"


Settra

Declare War--"You are warned, the desert shall come after you, and the carrion and Khepra beetles will feast."

First Contact--"What are you?"

Refuse to Speak--"Be Gone..."

Peace--"My country has had enough."

No Peace--"You dare ask for peace after what you have done to my lands! Dont make me laugh! No, seriosly, dont make me laugh, my head might fall off..."

Greetings Friendly--"Greetings friend, come, walk under the sun with me."

Greetings Furious--"You dare affront my divine self! You had better have a good excuse for this..."

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger--" My will be done!"
--" My will be done!"
--" My will be done!"

Accept Offer--"Thank you, now go."

Thanks--"..."


Khalida

Declare War--"You are warned, the desert shall come after you, and the Carrion and the Asp will feast."

First Contact--"What are you?"

Refuse to Speak--"Be Gone..."

Peace--"My country has had enough."

No Peace--"You shall not live to see death. I will make sure of it."

Greetings Friendly--"Greetings friend, come, walk under the sun with me."

Greetings Furious--"You dare affront my divine self! You had better have a good excuse for this..."

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger--" Please, aid those beneath you, we need your help."
--" We have long been friends, care for a little trade, my poison for your..."
--" I will be careful not to poison your food if you accept."

Accept Offer--"Thank you, your generosity will be remembered."

Thanks--"Ta."


Nipponese diplomacy text, i think its pretty universal:

Declare War--"The Land of the Rising Sun has had enough, Prepare for war!"

First Contact--"Konichiwa, namayawa nun desca? Are you friend or foe?"

Refuse to Speak--"You have no honour, i refuse your envoy."

Peace--"We seek peace from this bloodshed...My honour as been disgraced..."

No Peace--"Iiya yasuragi! You will not see peace untill the Rising Sun has set!!"

Greetings Friendly--"Greetings friend, come, sit and have some Sencha, with me."

Greetings Furious--"What is this, You should not have come here. I hope you have a good excuse for this..."

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger
--" I am disgraced for asking but, could you aid us in times of need?"
--" You are an honourable friend, and i trust you hihgly, "
--" I will be careful not to send my ninjas...I-mean-envoys, yes envoys... to your palace if you accept."

Accept Offer--"Supashi-bo, maro gaibun ware, your generosity will be remembered."

Thanks--"Supashi-bo, thank you."

Diplomacy for Aenarion:


Declare War--"As sure as Asuryan has touched my soul, and i have been marked by Khaine, Indraugnir and I will personally lead the White Host to your door step, and slay you."

First Contact--"Greetings young one, be you an ally of the Asur?"

Refuse to Speak--"My time is too presious to wast on young fools such as yourself, now begone."

Peace--"Peace, Peace i say! Never have i fought one as determined as yourself!"

No Peace--"I have fought the Chaos Gods incarnate, and you think i will stand by and watch as you slaughter my people!!!"

Greetings Friendly--"May the Light of Asuryan shine upon you friend, please accept my hospitality. Care for some refreshments? i recomend the lemon-berry tart."

Greetings Furious--"What is this, You should not have come here. I hope you have a good excuse for this..."

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger
--" The Asur have always admired stronger powers, such as yourself... would you care for a little negotiating?"
--" May I borrow some of that friend?"
--" Give the Asur what we ask, and we will not have to force it out of you."

Accept Offer--"Thank you, your offer is generous. May Asuryan guide you."

Thanks--"Thank you."

Diplomacy for Finubar:


Declare War--"As my forebarers have before me, i vow i will wage war on those who follow Chaos, and all who oppose the Asur, you included!"

First Contact--"Greetings young one, be you an ally of the Asur?"

Refuse to Speak--"My time is too presious to wast on young fools such as yourself, now begone."

Peace--"Peace good friend! I am more a trader than a fighter. This war is pontless is it not?"

No Peace--"I refuse peace with you! Your fetid race will never see the light of day, or smell the sea again!"

Greetings Friendly--"Ah, Good portends have brought you here i see, what is it you need?"

Greetings Furious--"What is this, You should not have come here. I hope you have a good excuse for this..."

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger--" The Asur have always admired stronger powers, such as yourself... would you care for a little negotiating?"
--" May I borrow some of that friend?"
--" Give the Asur what we ask, and we will not have to force it out of you."

Accept Offer--"Thank you, your offer is generous."

Thanks--"Thank you."

Diplomacy for Malekith:


Declare War--"Your time is up, i am coming for you."

First Contact--"What have we here? Another 'glorious' opponent I suppose?"

Refuse to Speak--"Oh, yes, sure come on in, make yourself at home. GO AWAY NOW."

Peace--"Make no mistake, the Druchii are not retreating, we are only advancing in another direction..."

No Peace--"Ha! You think a race as magnificent as the Druchii will give in to a pathetic mortal like yourself? Dont make me laugh."

Greetings Friendly--"Greetings worthy opponent of the Druchii, what news have you?"

Greetings Furious--"You might as well state your business, but make it short, or I'll make short work of you..."

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger
--" Do you think you could spare that for an old friend?"
--" The Druchii have long been equals to yourself, and we have long been by your side. But now you must pay the rent, I think I'll have one of those..."
--" Give it to me now."

Accept Offer--"Thanks, I needed that."

Thanks--"Whatever..."


Diplomacy for Morathi:


Declare War--"Prepare yourself mortal, for soon the skys will darken and lquid fire will rain upon your towns, and the soil upon which you stand will turn against you and your crops will fail... Prepare yourself for War..."

First Contact--"What have we here? Another 'glorious' opponent I suppose?"

Refuse to Speak--"Oh, its you, i was told someone important wanted to see me, and my slaves had to interupt my... 'beauty treatment'... now go away before I make you. My bath awaits me.

Peace--"Make no mistake, the Druchii are not retreating, we are only advancing in another direction..."

No Peace--"Ha! You think a race as magnificent as the Druchii will give in to a pethetic mortal like yourself? Dont make me laugh."

Greetings Friendly--"Greetings worthy opponent of the Druchii, what news have you?"

Greetings Furious--"You might as well state your business, but make it short, or I'll make short work of you..."

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger
--" Do you think you could spare that for an old friend?"
--" The Druchii have long been equals to yourself, and we have long been by your side. But now you must pay the rent, I think I'll have one of those..."
--" Give it to me now."

Accept Offer--"Thanks, I needed that."

Thanks--"Ta."

woodelf
Jun 14, 2006, 07:42 AM
Fair enough. Keep compiling here and we'll keep track in the other thread. That way others can see the progress and also offer suggestions to new lines of diplo they want me to add in XML.

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 14, 2006, 07:44 AM
Ill do some new diplomacy for orcs and gobbos tomorrow, etting sleepy andmaybe they wond sound too good;)...but maybe they will sound better, being unsophisticated greenskins and all... oh im too tired

woodelf
Jun 14, 2006, 07:47 AM
I'll do a better job of organizing the other thread while you sleep P_L. Dream of orcz and greenies.

Ploeperpengel
Jun 14, 2006, 07:51 AM
For Cathay and Ind you could stick close to their earthly resemblances for now, I think. I don't want you to work yourselves to death here:D
You don't need to finish all off it on one day. I might get out of task at that pace:lol:

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 15, 2006, 02:40 AM
lol, don't fret, its fun:):)

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 15, 2006, 03:04 AM
Heres da greenies:

Diplomacy for Azhag:


Declare War--"Time for some fun Boyz. WAAAAAAAAGH!!!!"

First Contact--"Ooh, wot dis den? More 'eds to bash eh?"

Refuse to Speak--"*Yells and runs toward you menacingly*"

Peace--"Zog that! Stop it now! *headbutts nearby orc for emphasis*"

No Peace--"Once me ladz are back in line you can say goo'by to ya 'eds!"

Greetings Friendly--"'ello again, you wont some roast gobbo?"

Greetings Furious--"Wot you want?"

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger--" Dya tink i can ave dat?"
--" I wont dat one."
--" Gimme."

Accept Offer--"Thanks."

Thanks--"*grunt*"




Diplomacy for Grimgore:


Declare War--"WAAAAAAAAGH!!!!"

First Contact--"'ello den, are you a Humie or wot??"

Refuse to Speak--"Waaaagh!!"

Peace--"Zog that! Stop it now! *headbutts nearby orc for emphasis*"

No Peace--"I'm gonna stomp 'em to dust. I'm gonna grind dere bones. Im gonna burn down dere towns and cities. I'm gonna pile 'em up inna big fire and roast 'em. Im gonna bash 'eds, break faces and jump up and down on da bits dat are left. And' den i'm gonna get really mean."

Greetings Friendly--"'ello again, you wont some roast gobbo?"

Greetings Furious--"Wot you wont?"

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger--" Dya tink i can ave dat?"
--" I wont dat one."
--" Gimme."

Accept Offer--"Thanks."

Thanks--"*grunt*"

Ploeperpengel
Jun 15, 2006, 03:21 AM
Lovely the boyz!:lol:

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 15, 2006, 07:50 AM
Diplomacy for Grom:

Declare War--"WAAAAAAAAGH!!!!"

First Contact--"What are you? "

Refuse to Speak--"Go away or ill chop ye 'ed off 'n' eat it!"

Peace--"We gives in, you win this time."

No Peace--"Come on you lot! Fight like real Gobbos!"

Greetings Friendly--"'ello again, you wont some raw troll? No? ok more for me den."

Greetings Furious--"Wot you want?"

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger--" Dya tink i can ave dat?"
--" I wont dat one."
--" Gimme."

Accept Offer--"Thanks."

Thanks--"*grunt*"




Diplomacy for Skarsnik:


Declare War--"WAAAAAAAAGH!!!!"

First Contact--"'ello den, are you a Humie or wot??"

Refuse to Speak--"I'm gonna feed ya to Gobbla if ya dont go now."

Peace--"yous cant kill all da gobbos!"

No Peace--"Which one of yous is da Bossman?"

Greetings Friendly--"'ello again, you wont some roast snotling?"

Greetings Furious--"Wot you wont?"

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger--" Dya tink i can ave dat?"
--" I wont dat one."
--" Gimme."

Accept Offer--"Thanks."

Thanks--"*grunt*"

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 16, 2006, 04:28 AM
Diplomacy for Thorgrimm:

Declare War--"The time of retribution is upon us! the Dwarfs will soon savour their revenge upon your wrong-doings! Prepare for war!

First Contact--"Who are you? Just a minute while I check the Dammaz Kron...

Refuse to Speak--"Curses to you!!"

Peace--"Do not think you have won this war (your name), you have been entered in The Dammaz Kron, we shall remember this moment for eternity..."

No Peace--"We can never forget your treacheries two-faced-(your name). You have gone down in the Book of Grudges for eternity until vengence is ours!"

Greetings Friendly--"Greetings friend of the Karaz Ankor, care for some our finest ale?"

Greetings Furious--"You are lucky I forgot to enter you in the Dammaz Kron, if I had you would be dead. Now state your business so i can write your name...

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger--" Do you think I could have that?
--" The Dwarfs and (your race) have long been friends and equals, and we have helped each other in thick and thin. Care to help us out again?
--" The Dwarfs seek retribution, will you give it to us, or will we take it?

Accept Offer--"The Dwarves accept your gracious offer"

Thanks--"Ta.

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 16, 2006, 04:36 AM
Diplomacy for Archaon:


Declare War--"The End of Times is neigh mortal! Prepare to die!"

First Contact--"More sacrifices i see."

Refuse to Speak--"Doom on you!"

Peace--"YOu have only delayed eternal damnation, for it is inevitable."

No Peace--"Peace? What is this word of which you speak? i know only doom and destruction.

Greetings Friendly--"I like you, so for that, when the world is mine you shall be the last to die."

Greetings Furious--"you are lucky you caught me in a good mood, state your business and go."

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger--" I want that."
--" I've come to collect my rent."
--" I think I'll take that."

Accept Offer--"This will help much in your demise, now go so I can plan the next phase of the end of the world..."

Thanks--"Mhmm..."

woodelf
Jun 16, 2006, 05:44 AM
Nice stuff P_L. I'm finally going to update the other thread. Keep em coming.

Duke van Frost
Jun 16, 2006, 10:35 AM
:goodjob: I love what you did for the Greenskinz I think I can remember this "And then I gonna get really mean" thing from somewhere. This **** runs down the hill hierarchy is really good captured (roasted Gobbo -> roasted Snot - but raw troll for Grom :lol: )

Great piece of work, as the rest is also, those things give the right feeling to the mod.

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 17, 2006, 01:01 AM
Hey thanks Duke. im going to do Vlad and Nagash next, then Mazdamundi and Tenehuini. well see where we go from there.

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 17, 2006, 07:57 PM
Diplomacy for Vlad:

Declare War--"Your blood will soon be mine, and so will your soldiers... time to die."

First Contact--"Another for my ranks..."

Refuse to Speak--"Doom on you!"

Peace--"Zis fighting must cease, for now I must recall my ranks..."

No Peace--"You vant peace? I dont zink so, not untill I haf your blood at any rate.

Greetings Friendly--"Come, come, care for some blood? No? Ok, more for me zen."

Greetings Furious--"BAH! Now look what you did fool! My sweet blooded virgin has run away! what am i supposed to have for lunc..., wait, you'll do fine..."

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger--" I vant zat."
--" I've come to collect my rent."
--" Give me your neck..."

Accept Offer--"Zank you for your generous offer."

Thanks--"Thanks."


Diplomacy for Nagash:


Declare War--"soon your armies will join mine, all living creatures need to die at some point... your point is now."

First Contact--"Another for my ranks..."

Refuse to Speak--"Doom on you!"

Peace--"Death does not affect me as it does you mortals, i will be back..."

No Peace--"Soon the world will be mine, with you in my ranks...

Greetings Friendly--"Come, come, care for some blood? No? Ok, more for me zen."

Greetings Furious--"What can be so important that you need to disterb the greatest Necromancer in the world?!"

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger--" I want that."
--" I've come to collect my rent."
--" You will give me that now."

Accept Offer--"...go now..."

Thanks--"..."

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 17, 2006, 08:15 PM
Diplomacy for Mazdamundi and Tenehuini:


Declare War--"*a strange, voice appears in you mind* "You are not part of Our Masters' Plans, You will be removed from the equation..." "

First Contact--"Croak! what are you?"

Refuse to Speak--"Croak Croak Croak!!!!"

Peace--"*a strange, voice appears in you mind* This fighting is senseless, me-thinks peace is in order."

No Peace--"Croak! no peace for you! to have displeased Our Masters, for that you must be sacreficed on our alters.

Greetings Friendly--"*a strange, voice appears in you mind* Come, let us pray to The Old Ones together..."

Greetings Furious--"CROAK!!

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger--" Croak! Could you spare a donation?"
--" We request assistance, Croak!"
--" You need to appease Our Masters, they request that..."

Accept Offer--"Croak! Thank you for your donation."

Thanks--"Thanks, Croak!"

Duke van Frost
Jun 18, 2006, 11:02 AM
from Vlad:

Greetings Furious--"you are lucky you caught me in a good mood, state your business and go."

I don´t think that furious and good mood go together to well, should be more recognizable that he is pissed.

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 19, 2006, 03:11 AM
very true, consider it changed;)

woodelf
Jun 19, 2006, 04:48 AM
Feel free to keep contributing as well Duke.

Nice work P_L. I'll update the other thread.

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 19, 2006, 05:03 AM
Ta, now who should i do next...maybe bretonnia and norse... dunno, ill se what i feel like;)

woodelf
Jun 19, 2006, 05:05 AM
Ta, now who should i do next...maybe bretonnia and norse... dunno, ill se what i feel like;)

Whoever we have units for. :)

Ploeperpengel
Jun 19, 2006, 05:11 AM
Ta, now who should i do next...maybe bretonnia and norse... dunno, ill se what i feel like;)
Tilea(MarcoColombo- Lucan and Luccini I'll trigger unplayable until we get good art for them), Nippon and Cathay would be the most pressing.

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 19, 2006, 06:04 AM
ok, nippon and cathay it is;) ill see to them tomorrow.

Ploeperpengel
Jun 19, 2006, 06:19 AM
ok, nippon and cathay it is;) ill see to them tomorrow.
Yes and Marco!

woodelf
Jun 19, 2006, 06:20 AM
Everytime I type in "Wu" I can't help think of Deadwood. :lol: He knows three words and I don't think we could use one of them, but it would fit the character of who I think about when I see Wu now.

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 19, 2006, 06:34 AM
Everytime I type in "Wu" I can't help think of Deadwood. :lol: He knows three words and I don't think we could use one of them, but it would fit the character of who I think about when I see Wu now.

whodidthewhatnow???

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 19, 2006, 06:54 AM
Diplomacy for Marco:


Declare War--"Well now, you appear to have some nice looking resources that i want. I shock myself to say this, but i think i'd rather argue about this on the battle field this time!

First Contact--"Greetings! Are you wise in the ways of trade, or are you more inclined to war?"

Refuse to Speak--"No, we dont want any, I already have one.

Peace--"Cease fire! This fighting is endless, would you not rather bicker over the bartering table?"

No Peace--"Pfft! I have my logistics planned for the next ten years, I will not stop this war because you did not plan properly!"

Greetings Friendly--"Hello there! would you be interested in perchasing this little trinket? No? Aw well, come lets discuss politics."

Greetings Furious--"You are not fun to barter with, and I dont care to trade words with you either. State what you want and go.

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger--" We seek a loan from our superior, do you accept?"
--" Care for a little deal friend?"
--" My ships need 'supplies' I suggest to 'lend' me some."

Accept Offer--"Hmm, Thank you for that."

Thanks--"Thank you."

Ploeperpengel
Jun 19, 2006, 07:03 AM
I like that one:goodjob:

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 19, 2006, 07:07 AM
Thanks, i quite like him too, i was going for balianese trader / eccentic hppy-go-lucky;)

Ploeperpengel
Jun 19, 2006, 07:13 AM
just a typo: it's battle field not battle feild;)

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 19, 2006, 07:15 AM
Doh! i always forget the "i before e except after c" rule!! *hits self on head*

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 19, 2006, 07:29 AM
(this is the edited version. is it better?)Diplomacy for Wu:

Declare War--"Are you mocking me! I declar war on you and your pathetic race!

First Contact--"*bows toward you* Greetings friend. Please, who may i ask are you?

Refuse to Speak--"Your presence does upset me. Go away before I make you leave..."

Peace--"Heping, heping! We only want peace, please, call off your soldiers and i will call off mine.

No Peace--"Bu heping ni xiee qui! You will not live to see tomorrow!"

Greetings Friendly--"Huanying! Come come friend, let us sit and talk, yes?"

Greetings Furious--"zhanli zhanfan! What do you seek in coming here fengzi? Say what you must and leave me in peace!"

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger--" Would you care to lend me a loan?
--" Friends help Friends in need, can you help us?
--" I would like that, i expect you give it to me as gift.

Accept Offer--"Xiexie, you honour me."

Thanks--"Xiexie."

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 19, 2006, 07:46 AM
(not too sure about this one)Diplomacy for Jose'Paul:


Declare War--"The Lord will guide my forces, where your men have no one to follow, and you will surly fail. But prepare the best you can for war.

First Contact--"Welcome to the House of God. are you friend or foe?

Refuse to Speak--"Begone foul blasphemer!

Peace--"Please, the Lord has come to me and said that this war must stop! you cannot ignore Him.

No Peace--" You are as corrupt as thos Dons, and for that you cannot be forgiven. May you crops fail, your walls fall and your ears fill with wax."

Greetings Friendly--"Greetings, praises be upon you, let our Lords light shine on you! Come, walk this way friend."

Greetings Furious--"You have angered the Lord, and as such you have angered me. You will have a short life if you talk too much, now say what you must and go.

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger--" Our cause is floundering, we need your help.
--" Care to donate to our cause friend?
--" You cannot ignore the will of our Lord. You must pay him respect eventually, why not start now?

Accept Offer--"Bless you, the Lord will be pleased.

Thanks--"Bless you.

Duke van Frost
Jun 19, 2006, 08:22 AM
About Wu: I don´t think it´s to politically incorrect, but I would prefer some more right spelling (keep some words in the way you wrote them to give some flavour). But I think it´s a little bit to much - such spelling is better fitting for greenskinz IMO.

Hope I could express what I meant, though I´m not quite sure.

Ploeperpengel
Jun 19, 2006, 09:49 AM
(i hope this isnt too politically incorrect;))Diplomacy for Wu:

clare War--"Are you mocking me! I decwar war on you and your pafetic wace!

First Contact--"Aw hewwo! Who is this then?

Refuse to Speak--"Your pwesence does upset me. Go away before I make you weave..."

Peace--"Heping, heping! We onwe want peace wive you! No-more-war!"

No Peace--"Bu heping ni xiee qui! You not wive to see tomowwow!"

Greetings Friendly--"Huanying! Come come fwiend, sit and talk yes?"

Greetings Furious--"zhanli zhanfan! What do you seek in coming here fengzi! Speak and weave!"

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger--" Would you care to wend me a woan?
--" Fwiend help Fwiend, can you help us?
--" I would wike that, i expect you give it to me as gift.

Accept Offer--"Xiexie, you honour me."

Thanks--"Xiexie."


Oh no please not such a style. It's a good idea to put some chinese in(check an online dictionary for this maybe I don't like made up word) but Wu is an educated Man you made him talk now like a Dump Hillybillylike Dude from the east.
Well too far exeeded the chines touch.
Make him talk normal with a couple of chines words for Thanks, Hello etc. that would do I bid you.

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 20, 2006, 02:43 AM
Ok, i wasnt sure about himn anyway. i agree that he sounds too orcish. i will change the original post to have better english and drop the 'w's.

The 'chinese' is off a chinese-english dictionary, the words all mean individual things, but the grammar is shocking.;)

Duke van Frost
Jun 20, 2006, 03:18 AM
The 'chinese' is off a chinese-english dictionary, the words all mean individual things, but the grammar is shocking.;)

doesnīt matter - either nobody will recognize this, or somebody will complain and then we can ask him about it - thatīs one reason why you give betas to the public :lol:

woodelf
Jun 20, 2006, 05:54 AM
P_L - I updated the other thread. You're over 2/3s done! :D

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 20, 2006, 07:12 AM
Diplomacy for Jaffar:

Declare War--"Your corrupt state cannot last. I shall make sure of it, for I shall sail to your lands on a carpet if i must, and turn your lands to desert and take your women and children as slaves.

First Contact--"*servant speaking* His majestic highness, Sultan Jaffar, mightyest of all sorcerers. *strange fanfair sounds* Greetings, who might you be?

Refuse to Speak--"Enough, Go now. *to servant* Bring in the dancing slaves.

Peace--"I offer you a thousand slaves and treasure beyond belief if only you would reconsider this war.

No Peace--"Dont be a fool, I shall not retreat, I'm winning arn't I?

Greetings Friendly--"Well met, come let us walk among the oases.

Greetings Furious--"You do not belong here. Guards! Oh wait, the little man has a message, let him read it then throw him out guards.

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger--" I will give you my most sincerest gratitude if you would lend me some aid.
--" Ive come to collect my rent.
--" *servant walks in and begins reading off parchment* You are hereby fined, by the magnificent Sultan Jaffar, for existing when He did not give you permission to do so. Pay up withing the week, of He will collect it personally.

Accept Offer--"This will help a lot. Thanks.

Thanks--"Thank you.


Diplomacy for Tenehuini, Prophet of sotek:


Declare War--"Soon the ground beneath your feet will writh with the beasts of Sotek, they will overwhelm your villages and towns and flood your cities. Soon a new spawning will end...

First Contact--"Kai-inzi. No need to tell me who you are. Sotek has watched you for centuries...

Refuse to Speak--"Tenqtep nahuontl boqotta ectep chiccli!

Peace--"This war is over.

No Peace--"Sotek sees you... and that means his armies see you also...

Greetings Friendly--"Ti-inzi. Come, come, let us walk thought the pyramid streets of the Shrine of Sotek together.

Greetings Furious--"Sotek would strike you down now if you were not of any use to us. What is it you want?

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger--" A donation to our cause?
--" Friend, care to aid a close ally?
--" Sotek commands attention, give Him what He requires!

Accept Offer--"Inzi-inzi friend, your gift will greatly help us.

Thanks--"Inzi-inzi.

Duke van Frost
Jun 20, 2006, 02:32 PM
P_L - I updated the other thread. You're over 2/3s done! :D

Thatīs a very fast pace, keep it up, and then provide us with some Pedia info on the wonders and races :D

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 21, 2006, 02:23 AM
:lol: ok, ive only got the difficult ones left (the humans, because there all the same;))

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 21, 2006, 02:53 AM
Diplomacy for Louen:


Declare War--"I have fought victoriously against many worthy foes, that list is long, and i shall add you to that list now. Defend yourself!

First Contact--"Well met. Do you come in peace?"

Refuse to Speak--"Dishonourables such as you are not worthy of holding my court. Go, leave me.

Peace--"This battle is done. Let this war be past and peace arise.

No Peace--"Your courage is admirable for comming here under these circumstances, and i fear that peace iss still far off. Only when Bretonnia emerges the victor shall we call this quits.

Greetings Friendly--"Ah! Well met friend! Do you care for some light hearted sparing? No? Well then, let us talk and be merry!

Greetings Furious--"I may be close to my ninetieth year, but i am no fool. I am aware of your schemings, and disaprove entirely. State what you must ane go.

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger--" Please, we seek your help.
--" Could you lend us you aid friend?
--" I have already proven my power to you. Must i prove it again, or will you give us what we ask peacefully?

Accept Offer--" you honour me with such a gift. Thank you."

Thanks--"Thank you."

DutchJunkie
Jun 21, 2006, 02:59 AM
Thatīs a very fast pace, keep it up, and then provide us with some Pedia info on the wonders and races :D

I understand you make the pediatext Lama? I surely would like to help you with that. Do you only handle reace-description or also the text about the units?

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 21, 2006, 03:05 AM
Any help would be wonderful:D

at the moment im only doing races and leaders, also magic and religeon.

If you like you can do units, wonders, buildings, and any of the above.

but before you do, it would be a good idea to take a quick took at whats already done (so you dont do stuff twice by accident;) ) also that way i can get your opinion on what ive posted.
take a look at the "so what is this warhammer thing anyway" sticky, the religeon and magic threads if your interested.

anything you do will be highly apreciated, and thanks for the offer;)
just say what your interested in/ have the most info on, and well work out some way to split the work:D

DutchJunkie
Jun 21, 2006, 03:19 AM
Any help would be wonderful:D

at the moment im only doing races and leaders, also magic and religeon.

If you like you can do units, wonders, buildings, and any of the above.

but before you do, it would be a good idea to take a quick took at whats already done (so you dont do stuff twice by accident;) ) also that way i can get your opinion on what ive posted.
take a look at the "so what is this warhammer thing anyway" sticky, the religeon and magic threads if your interested.

anything you do will be highly apreciated, and thanks for the offer;)
just say what your interested in/ have the most info on, and well work out some way to split the work:D

I'll check your writing in 'so what is this warhammer thing anyway' asap, but i'm sure it's fine. I'll post the Beastmen fluff there too.

Where can i see which unit civilopedia entries already have been done? I can make the orcs, elves and empire UNIT entries for the next release .. or is that already done?

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 21, 2006, 03:41 AM
there is no unit pedia at all yet, so you can start wherever you like(but preferably high/wood elf/orcs for next release;))

DutchJunkie
Jun 21, 2006, 04:01 AM
there is no unit pedia at all yet, so you can start wherever you like(but preferably high/wood elf/orcs for next release;))

My to do list:
- post wonders and building ideas
- make Orc (and Goblin) civilopedia entries
- maybe Elven entries
- post beastmen fluff

and meanwhile I'll continue the mapmaking (but fluff is more fun .. :) )

PS do we have a unit list? info about the units that will be in the next update and or the game?

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 21, 2006, 04:04 AM
yes, check the unit design thread for unit lists for each race;)

Ok, my to-do list:
- finish leader diplomacy
- finish posting as much civ fluff as possible (minust beastmen)
- finish spell lists

now we should probably eitherstart a new thread or move this conversation to another, more apropriate thread.

woodelf
Jun 21, 2006, 04:32 AM
Don't forget the strategy text for units, buildings, ect as well. I find that usually gets skipped in mods.

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 21, 2006, 05:00 AM
ah yes, the strategy... hmmm, that could only be put in after playtesting though couldnt it?

woodelf
Jun 21, 2006, 06:47 PM
Well...each unit has a strategy so that's kind of general. The buildings get Sid's tips I think as well.

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 22, 2006, 02:06 AM
@ woodelf: did you get the diplos for Louen, jaffar and Tenehuini?
im doing a couple mor now. you can expect them by the end of the day at the latest

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 22, 2006, 02:51 AM
Diplomacy for Gilles:



Diplomacy for (name):


Declare War--"You are a danger the Realm of Brettonia, and you threaten our stability. Now, as one nation, we will defeat and drive you from our boarders.

First Contact--"Greetings. Be you the leader of another race of brigands, or one of chivalry and honour?

Refuse to Speak--"Dishonourables such as you are not worthy of holding my court. Go, leave me.

Peace--"I ask for peace, this war is pointless, But be aware that The Knights of Bretonnia could conquer the world were it not for our vows which bind us to protect our own domain and shield the poor and innocent from unwarranted hostility.

No Peace--"The lands of men will only be safe when you are dead and gone. And i have vowed to protect Man kind from you. Therefore, you MUST die.

Greetings Friendly--"Ah! Well met friend! Do you care for some light hearted sparing? No? Well then, let us talk and be merry!

Greetings Furious--"The guillotine awaits you if you do not speak fast.

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger--"Please, we seek your help.
--" Could you lend us you aid friend?
--" I have already proven my power to you. Must i prove it again, or will you give us what we ask peacefully?


Accept Offer--"I am honoured by you generosity.

Thanks--"Thanks."

woodelf
Jun 22, 2006, 02:59 AM
@ woodelf: did you get the diplos for Louen, jaffar and Tenehuini?
im doing a couple mor now. you can expect them by the end of the day at the latest

Yeah, but I already sent my files to Ploep since I'm busy part of today and he wanted them by tomorrow. After some playtesting I'll add in the rest of your text for the Public version.

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 22, 2006, 03:05 AM
Diplomacy for Baragor:



Declare War--"Bah! This war will be nothing compared to a war against the Sky-Wurms!"

First Contact--"Well met. Who are you to be wondering our mountain home?"

Refuse to Speak--"You are as vile as the Wind-Lizards themselves, and i will have nothing to do with you!"

Peace--"Peace seems a nice alternative to war at the moment dont you think?

No Peace--"I must fulfill my Vows as a Slayer, and a king. You will not survive this war."

Greetings Friendly--"Ha! Greetings Dwarf-friend! Come, come take a tankard of our finest dwarf brew!"

Greetings Furious--"You would die any other day fiend, but not today, say what you need before i change my mind."

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger--"Do you think I could have that?
--" The Dwarfs and (your race) have long been friends and equals, and we have helped each other in thick and thin. Care to help us out again?
--" The Dwarfs seek retribution, will you give it to us, or will we take it?


Accept Offer--"The dwarves are in debt."

Thanks--"Thank you.

DutchJunkie
Jun 22, 2006, 03:12 AM
Diplomacy for Baragor:



Declare War--"Bah! This war will be nothing compared to a war against the Sky-Wurms!"

First Contact--"Well met. Who are you to be wondering our mountain home?"

Refuse to Speak--"You are as vile as the Wind-Lizards themselves, and i will have nothing to do with you!"

Peace--"Peace seems a nice alternative to war at the moment dont you think?

No Peace--"I must fulfill my Vows as a Slayer, and a king. You will not survive this war."

Greetings Friendly--"Ha! Greetings Dwarf-friend! Come, come take a tankard of our finest dwarf brew!"

Greetings Furious--"You would die any other day fiend, but not today, say what you need before i change my mind."

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger--"Do you think I could have that?
--" The Dwarfs and (your race) have long been friends and equals, and we have helped each other in thick and thin. Care to help us out again?
--" The Dwarfs seek retribution, will you give it to us, or will we take it?


Accept Offer--"The dwarves are in debt."

Thanks--"Thank you.


Both Gilles and Baragor totally give the good feeling of the people they represent .. very nice!

woodelf
Jun 22, 2006, 04:06 AM
P_L - nice stuff as always. I'm editing the other thread with complete diplos and also in game diplos. Nice job.

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 22, 2006, 05:03 AM
:D thanks Woodelf, glad you like.
Akabar and Lucan are coming next.

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 24, 2006, 01:28 AM
Diplomacy for Lucan and Luccina: ( i was going for the whole physically identical, mentaly opposite approach to these twins. Lucan is a jovial, Hillarious guy, And Luccina is a more sombre and sensible girl.)



Declare War--" *Lucan* Haha! Oh, im sorry, I just pictured the look on your face when our armies are raiding you lands... Pffhahaha!! *Luccina* I'm sorry about him, what he means to say is: prepare for war.

First Contact--"*Lucan* Ah! Welcome. We are Lucan...*Luccina* and Luccina, Twin Rulers of Tilea. *both* Who might you be?

Refuse to Speak--"*Luccina* You cannot seriously expect us to pay attention to you. *Lucan* no, Certainly not, you are much too dull.

Peace--" *Lucan* I do not find this war terribly ammusing any longer. I suggest we stop it immediately. *Luccina* yes, for the sakes of both our people.

No Peace--" *Lucan* What do you mean, Peace? This war is just too fun, i shant dtop it just because you're dull! Right Luccina? *Lucan looks at Luccina who rolls her eyes.*

Greetings Friendly--"*Lucan* Ahaha! Welcome friend!! come come, let us gather around the table and tell Stories.

Greetings Furious--"*Lucan* Oh its you. What do you want Oh-Dull-One? *Luccina* Say what you must and leave."

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger--" *Lucciana* Please, we seek your help.
--" *Lucciana* Greetings friend. Would you care to give a close ally a little aid in times of need?
--" *Lucan* Hello there, would you care to give me that. I belive I want it. *Luccina* If you dont, well, we will see what happens if you dont. *smiles sweetly*

Accept Offer--"*Luccina* Oh, you shouldnt have!

Thanks--" *Luccina* Thanks.

Ploeperpengel
Jun 24, 2006, 06:25 AM
Heh, I like the declare war. We still don't have fitting ART for them though! Tell me if you encounter any.

woodelf
Jun 24, 2006, 06:32 AM
Very nice P_L.

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 24, 2006, 11:29 PM
They are (IMO) the WH version of Real world Apollo and Artemis. so you could try something like that...

http://www.personal.psu.edu/djk189/apollo_artemis.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v93/bohemianxqueen/artemis-kr.jpg

http://www.missouri.edu/~sbsnqf/AOM%20project/greekgods.html

those 3 sites have some pictures of Apollo and Artemis, you could use them as a last resort.

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 25, 2006, 04:04 AM
Hmmm... Ive been thinking about Akabar, and i cant for the life of me think of what his personality would be. I cant fing anything on the Inet either...perhaps we could use the defult India Diplomacy for him untill i or someone else comes up with something?

In the mean time, im going to go on with Karl Franz and Magnus.

Ploeperpengel
Jun 25, 2006, 08:17 AM
Hmmm... Ive been thinking about Akabar, and i cant for the life of me think of what his personality would be. I cant fing anything on the Inet either...perhaps we could use the defult India Diplomacy for him untill i or someone else comes up with something?

In the mean time, im going to go on with Karl Franz and Magnus.
Yes that's ok.;) Empire's more important anyway. Ind doesn't have much units yet. (Maybe you can steal some Diplotext from the Civ3 for Akabar- there Moghul King Ackbar)

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 26, 2006, 03:08 AM
good idea ploe, where's that then? care to post it?

Ploeperpengel
Jun 26, 2006, 04:29 AM
good idea ploe, where's that then? care to post it?
Don't you have the game yourself? You made maps for it after all:confused:

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 26, 2006, 05:39 AM
Oh! Sorry, i miss read your post:blush: no i dont have it anymore, uninstalled it to make room for Civ 4 and all its mods;) and i dont care to uninstall all that to re-install Civ 3 to get a couple of lines for Akabar;)

So would you please be able to post it if you have it and some time? i will mould it a little into something else, i just need the basic idea for his personalities etc.

Ploeperpengel
Jun 26, 2006, 05:56 AM
Well I don't know in what files they are and how to open civ3 files to search. I don't have time for it since still only finished 20% of the unitartrefs.
I reallly recommend you as I do everyone to install this mod since this couple of lines Diplo isn't the only info we need from that mod (wonders and buildings right now and also a couple of techs) and they soon have another patch with even more we can use.

DutchJunkie
Jun 26, 2006, 06:06 AM
Oh! Sorry, i miss read your post:blush: no i dont have it anymore, uninstalled it to make room for Civ 4 and all its mods;) and i dont care to uninstall all that to re-install Civ 3 to get a couple of lines for Akabar;)

So would you please be able to post it if you have it and some time? i will mould it a little into something else, i just need the basic idea for his personalities etc.

Well I don't know in what files they are and how to open civ3 files to search. I don't have time for it since still only finished 20% of the unitartrefs.
I reallly recommend you as I do everyone to install this mod since this couple of lines Diplo isn't the only info we need from that mod (wonders and buildings right now and also a couple of techs) and they soon have another patch with even more we can use.

I just installed it a couple of days ago to get some ideas fo this mod. If you can't install i'll try to find it tonight or tomorrow .. sorry but I can't do it sooner .. work .. work .. work .. :crazyeye:

ps: it's a promise that i try .. success isn't garanteed ;)

Ploeperpengel
Jun 26, 2006, 06:13 AM
I just installed it a couple of days ago to get some ideas fo this mod. If you can't install i'll try to find it tonight or tomorrow .. sorry but I can't do it sooner .. work .. work .. work .. :crazyeye:

ps: it's a promise that i try .. success isn't garanteed ;)
Thx, that'll do. Don't worry will be at least two more weeks before a public release;)

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 26, 2006, 06:49 AM
i could try re installing it, but my computers too old and needs more ram, these games are just too big, and both cannot run at the same time :mad:

oh well, i will take a look and see what i can do...:p

Ploeperpengel
Jun 26, 2006, 07:00 AM
i could try re installing it, but my computers too old and needs more ram, these games are just too big, and both cannot run at the same time :mad:

oh well, i will take a look and see what i can do...:p
Well I think all info needed is in the civpedia there. Either look at that in game(don't need ram for reading pedia) or in the gamefiles if you know where to find;)

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 26, 2006, 07:21 AM
*sigh* alright, but that will take a few hours of download... but then again i haven't played that in a year or so, it would be good to see how they've prgressed.

I will write some more diplos for other guys in the mean time, Here's Karl Franz. I dont particularly like him though. what do you guys think?

Diplomacy for Karl Franz:


Declare War--"Your land will soon know the benefits of civilization, we will cleanse this tormented land of your filth, and lead the Armies of the Empire to your door step! For the Glory of Sigmar!

First Contact--"Greetings! Are you a patron of the arts or a disciple of war? we need to know so we can organize my economy accordingly...

Refuse to Speak--"What are you doing here? we have no wish to hear from you or your envoys unless it is about your death. Now stop annoying me!

Peace--"Reikland seeks peace. We wish to focus our resources on more important things at the moment, such as Scientific and Magical progression.

No Peace--"No, we dont think we are ready for peace yet. Unless we are receiving audited reports, we believe we are winning, no?

Greetings Friendly--"Welcome to Reikland friend! You had best go prepare for this evening, for tonight we feast!

Greetings Furious--" *Karl Franz, pacing in front of his throne* Our Griffon's grooms report that they are low on fresh meat, now where can we... Oh, its you. *There is a pause where he glares at you and looks you up and down, then Karl starts to grin.*, You will do just fine. Whats that? You have a message? Can it not wait? No? Well hurry up then, you can tell us on the way to the eerie..."

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger--" Riekland requires assistance.
--" Reikland and (your civ) have long been allies, and not once have you aided us. We are begining to wonder if this alliance is in our best interest...
--" Our boarders are close (your name), and we are stronger, it would be in your best interests to give us what we request.

Accept Offer--"You have Reiklands eternal gratitude. Thank you.

Thanks--"Thank you."

Duke van Frost
Jun 26, 2006, 07:33 AM
cut off after "lets say next week"

Declare War--"I find that the Empire's boarders are too small, and I am claustrophobic, which is not terribly good for me. So I have decided to lead a military assult on your cities in... oh, lets say next week... So i expect you to be ready.


And for Karl Franz in general maybe you should always use "We" instead of "I" - sounds more majestic IMO


Here I think annoying instead of pestering would fit better:

Refuse to Speak--"What are you doing here? I have no wish to hear from you or your envoys unless it is about your death. Now stop pestering me!

delete the "uh" here:

--" I say, that would look awfully nice In Altdorf. I believe you might like to give it to me as a gift. Unless you want me to, uh, 'pick it up'?


All just my Impressions, I want him to sound like he´s highly educated, can hold back his emotion (even if he´s furious) and always sounds like he´s speaking to one of his minions except if you are his friend - that´s what I imagine the Empire to be.

Ploeperpengel
Jun 26, 2006, 07:40 AM
I don't like the declare War(maybe something like: your land will soon know the benefits of civilization, I will cleanse this tormented land of your filth! For the Glory of Sigmar!). The rest is ok maybe should be a little more pressing asking for assistance(remember you're either with the Empire or against it!)
And isn't it supposed to be Reikland not Reichland?

Edit: oh yes and We instead of I is good.

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 26, 2006, 08:03 AM
Yes, i agree with all of that, and your Declare War is very good Ploe, i added that and a little extra.
all the 'I's are now the imperial 'We's, but some seem a little out of place (lets see if you can spot it ;) )
the 'uh' is gone (to be honest, im not sure why that was there, i must just have been typing what i was thinking:crazyeye:
'Pestering' is now 'annoying'

i hope that sounds a little better, if you want anything else changed (on any of them, not just this one) just shout and it will be done;)

Duke van Frost
Jun 26, 2006, 08:26 AM
Sounds much better now :goodjob:

Iīll have alook at all the others tomorrow.

Do you want us to also report typos? Or are you taking care of that while putting them into the XML, woodelf?

woodelf
Jun 26, 2006, 08:28 AM
Typos, i instead of I, ect are all being done by me hopefully. If I miss some I'm sure our faithful public will crucify us. ;)

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 27, 2006, 03:25 AM
it would be good if you reported types here as well, because i could change them now, and save Woodelf some time;)

DutchJunkie
Jun 27, 2006, 01:29 PM
I just installed it a couple of days ago to get some ideas fo this mod. If you can't install i'll try to find it tonight or tomorrow .. sorry but I can't do it sooner .. work .. work .. work .. :crazyeye:

ps: it's a promise that i try .. success isn't garanteed ;)

:sad: can't find it :sad:

sorry ..

Ploeperpengel
Jun 27, 2006, 01:45 PM
:sad: can't find it :sad:

sorry ..
What?:confused:

DutchJunkie
Jun 27, 2006, 02:41 PM
What?:confused:

the diplo's for the Ind leader in Civ3 .. the diplo-txtfile is just huge! I searched it for Lama but couldn't find it ..

Ploeperpengel
Jun 27, 2006, 02:49 PM
the diplo's for the Ind leader in Civ3 .. the diplo-txtfile is just huge! I searched it for Lama but couldn't find it ..
you should get notepad++ it has a search function and is freeware. Just google for it;) the name is Ackbar I think or Moghul king.

DutchJunkie
Jun 27, 2006, 03:01 PM
you should get notepad++ it has a search function and is freeware. Just google for it;) the name is Ackbar I think or Moghul king.

mine got a search-function too .. but there are no names in the file .. only variables ..

Ploeperpengel
Jun 27, 2006, 03:03 PM
mine got a search-function too .. but there are no names in the file .. only variables ..
oh that's bad. well sh** happens.

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 28, 2006, 02:46 AM
I will finish instally Civ 3 today and play it, and chech out the in game civilopedia to see if i can suss some stuff out.

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 30, 2006, 02:18 AM
have given up on Akabar.:( sorry.

Started on Magnus the Pious, who will be quite hard to do also, if i want to portray him correctly, because he wa supposed to be a magnificent speaker, who used words in a way that made people he spoke to instantly agree with him. He is also increadably loyal to the cult of Sigmar (which is why he is called "the Pious") it may take some time to get his speach right, as im not the most charismtic of people;).
my point is: is anyone here any good with words? care to think up some unforgettable speaches that we could use for Magnus?

I will give it a go, but please post anything you have, as he is a little tricky.
TA.

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 30, 2006, 02:39 AM
how does this sound guys. is it inspirational enough? suggestions would be helpful.

Diplomacy for Magnus:


Declare War--"Follower of Chaos! Tremble before the mighty ranks of Sigmar's Host! There will be no more time for you to spread your evil, your hatred, and you shall never be seen on the face of this world again! Sigmar's Will is imbued within this army, prepare to perish!

First Contact--"Sigmar has blessed you, for he has led you Riekland! What say you? Shall you follow our cause?

Refuse to Speak--"Begone heretic! Your foul feet do not deserve to tred upon the ground that Sigmar has blessed!

Peace--"This is your last chance, accept peace and follow Sigmar with us, or Perish upon my blade and be cursed unto eternal damnation for evermore!

No Peace--"Peace will never reach your lands whilst I am Emperor! Sigmar will prevail!

Greetings Friendly--"Welcome to Reikland friend! Come, let us hunt some Chaos beasts together. It will be fun, no?

Greetings Furious--" So the heretic returns... You have more courage than I thought you had, coming to our lands under such circumstances. Now say what you came here for and then leave before the wrath of Sigmar strikes you down!

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger--" Riekland requires assistance.
--" Reikland and (your civ) have long been allies, and not once have you aided us. We are begining to wonder if this alliance is in our best interest...
--" Our boarders are close (your name), and we are stronger, it would be in your best interests to give us what we request.

Accept Offer--"Riekland will never forget the aid you have given Her in times of need friend..

Thanks--"May Sigmar look upon you kindly."

DutchJunkie
Jun 30, 2006, 02:43 AM
how does this sound guys. is it inspirational enough? suggestions would be helpful.

Diplomacy for Magnus:


Declare War--"Follower of Chaos! Tremble before the mighty ranks of Sigmar's Host! There will be no more time for you to spread your evil, your hatred, and you shall never be seen on the face of this world again! Sigmar's Will is imbued within this army, think you able to defeat it? I seriously doubt it!

First Contact--"Sigmar has blessed you, for he has led you Riekland! What say you? Shall you follow our cause?

Refuse to Speak--"Begone heretic! Your foul feet do not deserve to tred upon the ground that Sigmar has blessed!

Peace--"This is your last chance, accept peace and follow Sigmar with us, or Perish upon my blade and be cursed unto eternal damnation for evermore!

No Peace--"Peace will never reach your lands whilst I am Emperor! Sigmar will prevail!

Greetings Friendly--"Welcome to Reikland friend! Come, let us hunt some Chaos beasts together. It will be fun, no?

Greetings Furious--" So the heretic returns... You have more courage than I thought you had, coming to our lands under such circumstances. Now say what you came here for and then leave before the wrath of Sigmar strikes you down!

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger--" Riekland requires assistance.
--" Reikland and (your civ) have long been allies, and not once have you aided us. We are begining to wonder if this alliance is in our best interest...
--" Our boarders are close (your name), and we are stronger, it would be in your best interests to give us what we request.

Accept Offer--"Riekland will never forget the aid you have given Her in times of need friend..

Thanks--"Thank you."


skip "think you able to defeat it? I seriously doubt it!" .. the rest is very good, i especially like the way he use chaos and heretic words :)

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 30, 2006, 03:11 AM
Thank you DJ:D
ok i will remove "think you able to defeat it? I seriously doubt it!" any other suggestions guys?

woodelf
Jun 30, 2006, 05:11 AM
Maybe for Thanks say "Bless You" or something.

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 30, 2006, 06:03 AM
how about "you have pleased Sigmar"? or "May Sigmar look upon you kindly"?

DutchJunkie
Jun 30, 2006, 06:12 AM
how about "you have pleased Sigmar"? or "May Sigmar look upon you kindly"?

the latter one .. :)

Psychic_Llamas
Jun 30, 2006, 06:43 AM
ok, ivechanged it to "May Sigmar look upon you kindly" for now.

woodelf
Jun 30, 2006, 08:45 AM
Nice. That works.

Psychic_Llamas
Jul 03, 2006, 07:02 AM
Diplomacy for Haargroth:



Declare War--"War! War! The Hoards of the north will blow down upon you like an icy blizzard and strip you lands of crop and game, it will knock down your cities and walls, and then your head will be brough in upon a platter and we will burn it as an honouring to Khorne!! WAR AND BLOOD!!

First Contact--"The winds whisper your presence, who are you?

Refuse to Speak--"RAARGHARR!! Come back here you pathetic fool! I will rip your head from your sholders!!

Peace--" What is this war for? Your hide would fetch less than a rabbits pelt at Olricstaad. There is no point to this.

No Peace--"Even if your skin is worthless, I want it as a rug under my feet as an eternal remider of my victory over you!

Greetings Friendly--"Greetings friend, come inside from the weather, lets talk business around a fire.

Greetings Furious--"ARRGH! (your name) do not think you can get away with coming here like this! Say what you must, but if you show your face again, consider yourself a rug.

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger--" We are out of this, care to lend us some more?
--" We need this for the winter, careto help a friend?
--" We demand you relinquish this to us immediately, or wee will take it from you with force.

Accept Offer--"Thank you, this will help a lot.

Thanks--"Ta"


comments?

Psychic_Llamas
Jul 03, 2006, 07:14 AM
Diplomacy for Katarin:



Declare War--"The Winter Host will blow down upon you like an icy blizzard that will strip you lands of crop and game, it will knock down your cities and walls and freeze your rivers, and then, just when you though things we getting bad, I will come...

First Contact--"The winds whisper your presence, who are you?

Refuse to Speak--"I should rather speak to this skull I think.

Peace--" This war has lasted too long, I propose an end to these hostilities toward our two fair empires.

No Peace--"We cannot afford peace, winter is fast approaching and we need land to farm.

Greetings Friendly--"Greetings friend, come inside from the weather, lets talk business around a fire.

Greetings Furious--"*Katarin turns around shocked and points her left hand towards you manacingly* What give you the authority to come strolling into my throne room like this?! *a burst of icy air shoots from her fingertips and hits your feet freezing them in place.* Tell me what you came for and then i will decide whether to let you go or not...

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger--" We are out of this, care to lend us some more?
--" We need this for the winter, care to help a friend?
--" We demand you relinquish this to us immediately, or wee will take it from you with force.

Accept Offer--"Thank you, this will help much this winter.

Thanks--"Ta"

Psychic_Llamas
Jul 03, 2006, 07:21 AM
Diplomacy for Boris:



Declare War--"*The huge bear, Urskin, roars* Calm Urskin, you will have you time soon, for the armies of Kislev are preparing, and will soon be ready for war.

First Contact--"The winds whisper your presence, who are you?

Refuse to Speak--"sick-'im Urskin!!

Peace--" This war has lasted too long, I propose an end to these hostilities toward our two fair empires.

No Peace--"We cannot afford peace, winter is fast approaching and we need land to farm.

Greetings Friendly--"Greetings friend, come inside from the weather, lets talk business around a fire.

Greetings Furious--"If Urskin was awake he would have killed you right then. What do you want? speak quickly for I do not want to be held respnsible for your death yet.

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger--" We are out of this, care to lend us some more?
--" We need this for the winter, care to help a friend?
--" We demand you relinquish this to us immediately, or wee will take it from you with force.

Accept Offer--"Thank you, this will help much this winter.

Thanks--"Thank you"

Psychic_Llamas
Jul 03, 2006, 07:21 AM
is that all? Harrgroth, Katarin and Boris? who have i missed?

Ploeperpengel
Jul 03, 2006, 07:24 AM
Got Akabar?

Psychic_Llamas
Jul 03, 2006, 07:28 AM
Oh no. forgot about him too. will try him now.

Psychic_Llamas
Jul 03, 2006, 07:38 AM
Diplomacy for Akabar:



Declare War--"*elephants trumpeting in the background* Prepare your forces, for the Indic Army is coming!

First Contact--"Good day to you my friend, who might you be?

Refuse to Speak--"No! Go away form me at once! I would rather clean the elephant pens than talk to you!

Peace--"Peace! Peace good friend! I have had enough of this war! Let us use our time more constructively. I, for example, have always been curious about the ways of the Yogi...

No Peace--"What do you mean 'Peace'? Our Yogi Masters have only just completed training their apprentices to masters themselves, they need to be tested, and this war with you is the perfect opertunity to do that!

Greetings Friendly--"Welcome to my palace good friend. Care to join me to my harem?

Greetings Furious--"Who do you think you are? I was quite happy before, and now I am disgruntled. Say what you came for and go away.

Demand Tribute Weaker/Equal/Stronger--" Please help a friend in need?
--" I am interested in this. May I have it?
--" That would look much nicer in my city than yours. I think you should give it to me, for its own good.

Accept Offer--"Oh Thank you very much.

Thanks--"Thank you.

Ploeperpengel
Jul 03, 2006, 07:46 AM
Heh, not to hasty. You got some typos there. Maybe change the no peace three times elephants is too much with elephants. They are also Elementalists(Djinnies) and Philosophers not just elephantlovers;) Otherwise I like it.

Ploeperpengel
Jul 03, 2006, 08:51 AM
Kislev is lovly!:goodjob:

Psychic_Llamas
Jul 04, 2006, 02:10 AM
Edited some spelling errors, and changed the No Peace in Akabar.

@ Ploe: arnt Araby the elementalists, not Ind?

Ploeperpengel
Jul 04, 2006, 10:26 AM
Edited some spelling errors, and changed the No Peace in Akabar.

@ Ploe: arnt Araby the elementalists, not Ind?
Ooops yes, sorry I mixed this up somehow:mischief:

Psychic_Llamas
Jul 05, 2006, 03:25 AM
changed the No Peace again to be a bit more Ind like;) (i hope)

woodelf
Jul 28, 2006, 05:28 AM
Finally got them all in. Great stuff P_L. :thumbsup:

After playing briefly last night I realize how much this adds. Especially when the Boyz come calling!

Psychic_Llamas
Jul 28, 2006, 06:32 AM
Cool, thats good news, now we can put all this aside (again:p) and carry on with the play testing;)