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subject:the attack on china by the japaneze

sorry sire i have important news!
what is it general?
the japaneze attacked us!
may god save us....
alright make the icbms ready to launch
sire yes sire!
and another thing,general.
what sire?
with what did they attacked us?
oh with a warrior.
A WARRIOR!?!:eek:
general are you stupid or what?
wtf are you saying sire?
:confused:
you wake me up in a important meeting to say that we are attacked by a warrior!
oh sorry sire...
no sorry general!!!
get a modern armor and crush them and leave me alone!
sire yes sire!



comment anyone?
1)should i go on with the story?(gets a nice plot twist;) )
if i made a mistake in my grammer im sorry but i am not english and its hard for me to write it(hey i am only 14!)

with the japaneze crushed and mao getting more and more money everything looks fine.
suddenly a missile flys right in to maos office and kills everything
the building explodes and suddenly german panzers are rolling inside the capital.hitler the german ruler captures the capital and burns it down:cry: .the poeple are saying everything lays now in the hands of general nazi goreng
:rolleyes:
he activates the icbms and start bombarding the whole german empire.then suddenly.....a gaint earthquake.everything shatters and when he looks up in the sky general nazi goreng see his own destruction.:nuke: 150cruise missiles are launched 75 icbms and 500 tactical nukes are flying against each bit of the empire.
now every chinese is dead.crumbling against the street dying bleeding barfing.the german counter attack was devastating.what was once a great empire is now a dorren wasteland.no ruler of china everything is polluted there are german panzers in the streets.
how must this go on?
you will read it in my next chapter



i am eager to hear other poeple opinions about this story:)

Sorry to disapoint you, but I've heard better stories. And it jumps around too much.

Originally posted by Chieftess
Sorry to disapoint you, but I've heard better stories. And it jumps around too much.
hey i know but its my first story
i have plenty of time to learn;)

i will try to make a new plot out of it:lol:

the last chineze poeple stand up from their ruined homes.
and they have now patriots and they have a plan.....
with the last city untouched( a small island) they prepared them self for war. making modern armor and transport ships.
when they have 5 transport full of modern armor.they storm the dorren lands.and they have succes crushiong panzer after panzer
they take control of 17 cities. almost the whole ancient empire of china.hitler tries to make modern armor but they dont have the resources.(some nukes he hitler
:nuke: :nuke: :nuke: :nuke: :nuke: )
finally they free themselves from the slavery of the nazis.
and they sart a warmachine with a formidable power.making 30
modern armors per year.the new leader of the chinese lol hai lol
took al their armors and rushed right to the capital of nazi germany.with 150 modern armors by berlin the capital of germany
they destroy berlin and take hitler and chop of his right arm:goodjob: .and all the modern armors are spreading terror in nazi germany and soon germany is destroyed and every city is razed.


man that is a bad story mayby should i think a little bit more about my story....:cry: :mad:

im sorry people for wasting your time to read this.

it was my first i am very sorry:(