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Donovan Zoi Aug 04, 2004, 10:35 PM This poll was created to amend Article I of the Constitution. If this Legislation is approved, it will replace the current Article I. This law seeks to lower the number of YES votes needed for passage of an amendment, while still requiring a clear majority of participants to do so.
Article I - Current
Article I. Census, and Amending the Constitution
1. The census shall be defined as the average number
of votes cast, dropping fractions, in each of the
contested elections in the most recent general
election.
2. Ratification of Amendments to the Constitution
shall require each of the following:
a. A poll which is open for at least 96 hours, which
states the text of the proposed new section(s),
the text of the section(s) being replaced, and
posing the question in the form of yes / no /
abstain.
b. A majority of yes votes.
c. A number of yes votes greater than or equal to
2/3 the census current at the start of voting on
the amendment, dropping any fraction therein.
d. The Amendment poll must first be posted as a
"proposed poll" in the discussion thread created
for the Amendment. The proposed poll must exist
in the discussion thread for 24 hours prior to the
Amendment poll being created. This gives adequate
time for review and changes.
Article I - Amended Changes in boldface
Article I. Census, and Amending the Constitution
1. The census shall be defined as the average number
of votes cast, dropping fractions, in each of the
contested elections in the most recent general
election.
2. Ratification of Amendments to the Constitution
shall require each of the following:
a. A poll which is open for at least 96 hours, which
states the text of the proposed new section(s),
the text of the section(s) being replaced, and
posing the question in the form of yes / no /
abstain.
b. A 67% majority of Yes votes over No votes, Abstain
notwithstanding.
c. A total number of votes greater than or equal to
2/3 the census current at the start of voting on
the amendment, dropping any fraction therein.
d. The Amendment poll must first be posted as a
"proposed poll" in the discussion thread created
for the Amendment. The proposed poll must exist
in the discussion thread for 24 hours prior to the
Amendment poll being created. This gives adequate
time for review and changes.
Please Vote one of the following options ~
YES - You want to amend this Article of the Constitution
NO - You reject this Article
ABSTAIN - You have no opinion
This poll will remain open for 4 days
Relevant discussion can be found here (http://forums.civfanatics.com/showthread.php?t=95244).
Comnenus Aug 04, 2004, 10:39 PM Thanks for your hard work on this amendment, DZ, and to all others who have made the effort to get this Article amended. We can only hope enough interested citizens are willing to cast their votes.
Donovan Zoi Aug 04, 2004, 10:42 PM Please ignore the glaring error in the Poll question. It should obviously ask whether Article I should be ratified.
And I am of the opinion that it should be. At this time, we have three laws up for vote that are winning by considerable margins, yet all three still run the risk of falling short of the large amount of YES votes currently required by Article I. Let's change this so that the peoples' voice can not only be heard, but carried out as well.
If you only vote in one amendment poll, let this be the one.
Donovan Zoi Aug 04, 2004, 11:06 PM Thanks for your hard work on this amendment, DZ, and to all others who have made the effort to get this Article amended. We can only hope enough interested citizens are willing to cast their votes.
The pleasure is all mine. :) You too deserve a round of applause for your dedication to our ruleset. Now let's lobby for this bill! :rockon:
Chieftess Aug 05, 2004, 05:59 AM What about the quorum? Also, with a high census count (55 average?), what if participation drops off mid-game, as it often does? I think 1/2 the average might be better, or atleast the number to meet.
Cyc Aug 05, 2004, 07:45 AM What about the quorum? Also, with a high census count (55 average?), what if participation drops off mid-game, as it often does? I think 1/2 the average might be better, or atleast the number to meet.
Well, CT, if you had read any of the discussion, you would know that DZ's proposeal can drop the approval rate to a possible 45%. Too bad...
Comnenus Aug 05, 2004, 09:49 AM Just a reminder to please VOTE!
ravensfire Aug 05, 2004, 09:59 AM Sorry, but I must disagree with this proposal.
The decision to not consider Abstain votes in determining the majority ignores the decision of those citizens. If you're going to count the vote for the quorum level, you can't just turn around and ignore it in the next step.
This is the Constitution we're talking about here people. This is supposed to be hard to change, proposals should be able to overcome both opposition AND apathy. We're getting dangerously close to a bloated Constitution again - this isn't going to help.
Problems I see with the current proposal:
1. Ignores citizen who vote abstain
2. Introduces a new strategy for the opposition - the null vote. In times of a high census, it is better for those opposed to a proposal to NOT VOTE, and create a vote total below the quorum.
Solution:
1. Eliminate the Abstain option. You are either for, or against the proposal. This is the Constitution we're talking about, not a city placement. Time for another tired, useless tradition to go.
2. Drop the minimum quorum to 50% of the most recent active census. If half the people speak, that should be considered the Voice of the People, allowing the Will to be determined.
3. Proposal must have 66% of those vote supporting it to pass.
Results - those opposed to the prpposal are, in fact, better off voting Nay because the quorum is moderately low. This eliminates the null vote strategy. The 2/3 requirement still puts the level of acceptance high, requiring any proposal to have significant support to pass.
-- Ravensfire
Comnenus Aug 05, 2004, 10:33 AM The decision to not consider Abstain votes in determining the majority ignores the decision of those citizens. If you're going to count the vote for the quorum level, you can't just turn around and ignore it in the next step.
I am sorry that you feel that way, but of course, we are each entitled to our opinions. Perhaps you see abstentions differently than the framers of this Amendment. To abstain is not to give an opinion. It can not be construed as either a yes or a no. Therefore, in counting the total vote it is counted, but in counting a show of support or no support, it must be discounted.
Of course, you are always welcome to write an amendment yourself.
Cyc Aug 05, 2004, 10:55 AM Ravensfire, where the heck were you 3-4 days ago? It's a little late now for constructive criticism. Now you'll have to wait until the next amendment is done.
BTW, isn't this what you accused other people of doing in the last Demogame? Waiting until the amendment was posted before contributing?
blackheart Aug 05, 2004, 11:14 AM What would be funny is if this amendment failed by one vote short of a majority :lol: :lol: Why you ask? Because not everyone voted.
I voted yes, and you should too!
ravensfire Aug 05, 2004, 12:42 PM Ravensfire, where the heck were you 3-4 days ago? It's a little late now for constructive criticism. Now you'll have to wait until the next amendment is done.
Incorrect. I can work to have this defeated given the problems I perceive with this proposal.
BTW, isn't this what you accused other people of doing in the last Demogame? Waiting until the amendment was posted before contributing?
Why yes, yes it is.
-- Ravensfire
superpelon Aug 05, 2004, 01:58 PM i voted.
just so people wont bother me about not voting
Comnenus Aug 05, 2004, 02:12 PM Thank You, Super!
Bobby Lee Aug 05, 2004, 03:01 PM first of all i wish to point out that voting against an ammendment because you feel it is flawed even if you did not participate in the discussion is not wrong. We dont all have time to participate in these discussions.
Furthermore I actually agree with ravensfire, he makes some very good points. I'm for sending it back to discussion to be changed. To those who say it can simply be ammended, Can YOU guarantee that? It is better to have this voted down so that it can be fixxed than it would be to have it voted in and then not fixxed or even to risk not having it fixxed. We do not need another flawed governmentmental policy.
Comnenus Aug 05, 2004, 04:07 PM Check the language of the original. It is what is flawed. It calls for a majority of yes votes and 2/3 of the votes must be yes votes.
The amendment would make that 2/3 of the voters with an opinion need to vote yes, and at least 2/3 of the current census need to cast votes. A much better solution, IMO.
CivGeneral Aug 05, 2004, 04:18 PM If this gets passed, the amendments should be passed along quickly and will see less instances of failed proposals :).
Donovan Zoi Aug 05, 2004, 05:04 PM Way to go, RF and zorven. Where were you two a few days ago?
And did either of you read the introduction to the amendment? Right now laws are already nearly impossible to pass due to the requirement of YES votes to equal 2/3rds of the active census(currently 38).
Let me put it plainly to you since apparently much gets lost in the small text:
This amendment improves on the existing law and is necessary during this Constitutional crisis, where current articles flirt with failure despite receiving almost 90% of the votes.
That alone should be enough to support this amendment. I would have been more than glad to hear your opinions for the 10-odd days that the discussion thread was open, but now that this amendment is subject to the constraints of the very law it is trying to replace, I feel that this display of Monday night quarterbacking is woefully misplaced.
I would be delighted to defend the verbage of this amendment once it is passed here. But please, for the good of Japanatica, do not undermine this effort to realistically adopt original articles that haven't even been ratified yet.
Please stop by again soon............
Immortal Aug 05, 2004, 05:09 PM Well Im sorry you poor individuals breaking your back over trying to get these constituional articles can understand how I felt when 3 articles failed by 1 vote. DZ, Commenus, Cyc.
And guess what? 2 of those 3 aborted articles are up for JR, and they are simple to deal with.
ravensfire Aug 05, 2004, 05:16 PM Sorry, DZ. I will agree that my timing is poor.
However, I stand by both my statement AND my vote. I'm distressed that you would call someone out BECAUSE of their vote. That's a Bad Thing. If this public poll thing is going to start more people doing that, and using public pressure to get people to vote their way, people will stop voting how they feel, and vote how to stop public pressure. To be blunt, that tactic sucks, DZ. I'm disappointed you would pull it.
As I said in my comments - I don't like the proposal. It IS better than the current law, but I don't like it, and will not support replacing a bad law with another bad law.
I urge ALL citizens to vote NO to this proposal. Replacing a flawed concept, rushed through, with another flawed concept is NOT good law. Reject this, and bring it back to the discussion thread so we can create a GOOD law.
-- Ravensfire
zorven Aug 05, 2004, 05:38 PM As I said in my comments - I don't like the proposal. It IS better than the current law, but I don't like it, and will not support replacing a bad law with another bad law.
That about sums it up for me.
Donovan Zoi Aug 05, 2004, 06:00 PM Actually, RF, I am calling you out on your public statement. I have no intention of abusing the public poll feature should it be allowed.
That said, my apologies to zorven. It was most unfair of me to do exactly what ravensfire accused me of. I will be more wary of this in the future.
Now, if I must defend the amendment here, I will start by stating that Abstain is essentially a neutral vote. If we were to force it to be used against the 67%, then it would essentially become a NO vote. So that is what Abstain is all about. It allows those who do not have an opinion on a matter to reflect such while still applying to the census.
As far as the turnout clause, this is a vast improvement on the YES only clause. And as the game dwindles down, 2/3rd of the census is not too much to ask once that census stands at something like 40. Do we really only want to hear the opinion of 20 people to alter our Constituution? As you yourself have stated:
This is the Constitution we're talking about here people. This is supposed to be hard to change........
This proposal reflects the best of both worlds by requiring a clear majority of decided(and therefore informed) voters from a reasonable turnout. And I am not sure that removing Abstain is a great idea as it would force a citizen to make an uninformed choice.
There, this is the response you should have received. I apologize for my lack of tact earlier but there is much to be resolved this month, and a failed amendment here will make it that much harder to accomplish.
Of all people, you should know this feeling....... ;)
Comnenus Aug 05, 2004, 06:02 PM Well Im sorry you poor individuals breaking your back over trying to get these constituional articles can understand how I felt when 3 articles failed by 1 vote. DZ, Commenus, Cyc.
And guess what? 2 of those 3 aborted articles are up for JR, and they are simple to deal with.
Yes, and Immortal, I for one wholeheartedly thank you for all the work you put into trying to get a Constitution in place. It seems to be a thankless job, what with all the important discussions taking place like what to name the first province, etc, etc. But I'm am sure I speak for at least a few when I say: :goodjob:
Immortal Aug 05, 2004, 06:04 PM If abstain applies as a percentage added to the no vote total against yes vote total, I move abstain be removed from polls entirely.
Donovan Zoi Aug 05, 2004, 06:04 PM Well Im sorry you poor individuals breaking your back over trying to get these constituional articles can understand how I felt when 3 articles failed by 1 vote. DZ, Commenus, Cyc.
It's what we are trying to fix, Morty. I do not want all of your suffering to go for naught. :D
Donovan Zoi Aug 05, 2004, 06:06 PM If abstain applies as a percentage added to the no vote total against yes vote total, I move abstain be removed from polls entirely.
In this law as written, it does not.
Immortal Aug 05, 2004, 06:10 PM I mean for EVERY poll Donny.
Black_Hole Aug 05, 2004, 06:14 PM I mean for EVERY poll Donny.
its right here:
A 67% majority of Yes votes over No votes, Abstain
notwithstanding.
Abstain is neutral
I for one totally agree with this aricle! And rf/zorven, if this gets passed it will be easier to change this aricle later to improve it... overall this is better than the one before which is the important thing.
Immortal Aug 05, 2004, 06:16 PM Blac_Hole, be extremely careful when you are reading these articles, I know, I helped write them.
This article applies ONLY to amendment of constitutional articles, not citizen polls or the like.
Donovan Zoi Aug 05, 2004, 06:17 PM Oh, you mean how it affects that number with the funny little symbol on the far right of the choices? I have written that out of the equation. Only YES votes and NO votes will be applied when determining the 67% threshold. :D
Black_Hole Aug 05, 2004, 06:25 PM Blac_Hole, be extremely careful when you are reading these articles, I know, I helped write them.
This article applies ONLY to amendment of constitutional articles, not citizen polls or the like.
yes and if this article is approved it would be easier to edit this article again in the future(since this article applies to constitutional amendments which editng and article is :crazyeye: )
DaveShack Aug 05, 2004, 06:41 PM The correct solution for citizen polls is to announce at the opening of each poll what the criteria is. It can be highest vote total wins, or it can be top two options go into a runoff indefinitely. I prefer highest vote total.
In RL, Abstain is normally used to show that someone was present but has a conflict of interest with voting either yes or no. There isn't really an abstain in election style votes, which is the model we are following for all of our votes, not just elections.
I voted yes on this one because contrary to what ravensfire said, it is not replacing a bad law with a bad law. It is replacing a bad law with an imperfect one, but if this amendment passes it will make it much easier to amend it again compared to what happens if this amendment fails.
Comnenus Aug 05, 2004, 07:02 PM I wouldn't call the existing Article a "bad" law. It it simply flawed in the way it is worded. This amendment makes the threshold clear. If some people don't support it, that is understandable as we will always have disagreements. I do support this amendment, and urge all citizens to vote YES!
Comnenus Aug 06, 2004, 07:42 AM Okay, so there's a great possibility that some very much needed articles to the Constitution are going to be defeated today, despite being overwhelmingly supported by the voters. If that happens, it is just one more nail in the coffin of the detractors of this legislation. Article I was never meant to make it impossible to add to or change the Constitution, but that has been the effect. Here we have more than 2/3 of the voters casting their votes, but in each case the proposed articles stand the chance of being defeated by less than a handful of detractors. Now, I believe that we are each entitled to our opinions, but this is not democracy. It is Tyranny of the Minority. If you care anything about the future of Japanatica and this DG, please vote YES on this amendment to Article I.
Cyc Aug 06, 2004, 08:15 AM The problem with the Constitution Amendment process is not caused by the original version of Article I. The problem is caused by the unethical election recruiting practices of some of our fellow citizens. These people feel it's necessary to recruit all the friends they've made over the years (in such relevant forums as OT) and have those friends vote for them, just so they can get more votes than the other unethical person who is using the same recruiting practices. 66 or 67 votes in an election is sinful. I used to say the same thing about an election that had 51 votes in it. AND IT WAS! We don't have 66 people in the Demogame. You can't tell me the transient population that signs the Citizen Registry and dissappears, never to be heard from again actually come back here to vote during a 4 day election. I've seen this same thing for 4 Demogames now, and have tried to rectify the situation in countless ways. The voting scandal we had in the MA election wasn't one citizen pulling a DL and voting twice, it was that everytime one candidate would get a vote, the other would recruit one more, which would prompt the other to recuit one more, in an endless cycle. There was also no telling how many DLs there were, as TF only had to go back far enough to discont the vote total and declare a winner of the first election. He may have only gone back two voters. This kind of scandal is what causes our problems today.
When these "fair weathered friends" leave after fulfilling the voting duty, our "active citizenry" shrinks by some 50% (maybe not that much). So you see it's not the original version of Article I that's the problem, it is the unethical voter recruitment policies that many of our citizens use. Fix that problem of the "good ole boy club" (or girl) and you will be able to use the 2/3 figure for citizen approval in Constitutional Amendments.
Comnenus Aug 06, 2004, 08:50 AM Well, Cyc, as you say the problem has been ongoing for some time. It doesn't seem like it is going to be fixed, so the problem becomes one of writing an article that allows us to play the game where the actual participants have a say in how it is run. It is a damn shame when 3 or 4 people can hamstring us from making needed changes that are obviously supported by the majority.
off soapbox now, running over to play FascismGame 1. :mischief:
ravensfire Aug 06, 2004, 04:15 PM As far as the turnout clause, this is a vast improvement on the YES only clause. And as the game dwindles down, 2/3rd of the census is not too much to ask once that census stands at something like 40. Do we really only want to hear the opinion of 20 people to alter our Constituution? As you yourself have stated:
This proposal reflects the best of both worlds by requiring a clear majority of decided(and therefore informed) voters from a reasonable turnout. And I am not sure that removing Abstain is a great idea as it would force a citizen to make an uninformed choice.
There, this is the response you should have received. I apologize for my lack of tact earlier but there is much to be resolved this month, and a failed amendment here will make it that much harder to accomplish.
Of all people, you should know this feeling....... ;)
I quite well know this feeling. I'm greatly disappointed that the game was forced to start, again, before everything was ready.
To be really honest, part of me says something along the lines of "Be careful of what you ask for!" w/ this article. The people originally wanted these standards - look what it got them.
I will stand by the my proposal, especially w/ the difficult to change concern you raised. I will also highlight the problems I have with the current proposal.
The quorum is the determinant of if the poll can represent the will of the people. 50% is reasonably high, and handles the problems Cyc reminded everyone about w/ friends voting only during the elections. It also neutralized the null-vote strategy. When you introduce a strategy of not voting so quorum isn't reached, that is a subversion of the process. Any process much encourage, even reward, people to vote. Setting a quorum of 50% means that will generally be reached, encouraging citizens to vote their viewpoint on the issue. The current proposal has a fairly high quorum, and does not reward those without strong viewpoints. There is minimal reason for those opposed to an amendment, or neutral towards it, to vote. Indeed, a decent opposition (say 20%) would be better off NOT voting. This would almost certainly cause the proposal to fail quorum, rendering the vote null.
Set the quorum at 50%.
The percentage to pass determines the direction of the will of the people. By setting this at 67% of the total votes (including abstains), we are verifying that the WoTP strongly prefers the amendment. We're talking about a change to the Constitution here. If you can't convince someone this is a good idea, then you must count them as against the proposal. When you change status quo, you must convince people that change is good. The current proposal ignores those that have not been convinced either way - tossing them, and their vote, aside. For a lower law, I have no problem with discarding abstains. This, however, is the Constitution.
Set the percentage for approval to 67% of the total votes. Keep the bar high, requiring supporters to create a sufficiently popular idea.
-- Ravensfire
Donovan Zoi Aug 06, 2004, 05:36 PM @Ravensfire - Well, after seeing the travesty of the defeat Articles O and E, I hope you can see why this Article should be passed despite its "flaws." With hard data that now leans in support of your argument(we only cleared census by 3-4 votes in both polls), I will be glad to work with you to rectify the wording here.
But in the interim, this law needs to pass badly. Can I please ask that you do what you can to support this law with the knowledge that it can be revisited in an amendment discussion almost immediately? If this does not pass, then we have at least another 4 days to make this work, followed by another 4 days to resubmit the 2(or 3?) defeated laws. So another election will roll out with no election law in place.
BTW, I did what I could to delay the impromptu start of the game(announced 4 days beforehand), but to no avail. Since then, a handful of us have been tireless in our efforts to right our laws. Please feel free to join us. :)
Black_Hole Aug 06, 2004, 06:01 PM we need this passed badly... O and E failed by 1 vote!, altho 90% of the people voted for it... that is very bad...
Raven1er Aug 07, 2004, 01:58 PM I voted YES
Black_Hole Aug 07, 2004, 02:01 PM I voted YES
thankyou! we have 8 hours to get 2 votes!
Black_Hole Aug 07, 2004, 02:30 PM oh yeh! this article is ratified
now the other 2 articles shouldnt be as hard to ratify
Comnenus Aug 07, 2004, 02:40 PM Congratulations, DZ! And thank you to all the people who voted Yes on this amendment.
Cyc Aug 07, 2004, 03:15 PM I too would like to thank everyone who voted Yes on this proposal.
Congrats to DZ and Comnenus!
CivGeneral Aug 07, 2004, 03:58 PM At last, no more Deadlocked Amendments :D
mhcarver Aug 07, 2004, 04:48 PM Thank god or whatever holy beings you may worship maybe now we can actually make Zarn's election official and actually have provinces
Sir Donald III Aug 09, 2004, 03:13 PM Problem: The Constitutional Sticky Thread has not been updated to reflect this ammendment.
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