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Emperor of Earth
Join Date: Mar 2011
Location: Terran Empire
Posts: 71
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Rise of the Ottoman Empire
Well this is my first story so I hope it works out well
Rise of the Ottoman Empire there was the set up screen...Chapter One: In the Beginning... Spoiler:
then the loading screen... Spoiler:
and then... "Awaken Suleiman" Who, who is this? "It is I, the player, your master, and for this game... Hmm what should I call myself" God? "Goodness no, of course not, I am not God, and you shall never call me by that, you shall refer to me as either, master, player, or Marauder M." Ok Go... I mean Marauder M, but why do you want me to call you that? "Long story short, its my Steam username" What is steam, and what is a username? "Never mind that now Suleiman the game is starting, and you are going to lead my chosen people to greatness in this game" Ok, you're the player. Spoiler:
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The obvious lurker
Join Date: May 2009
Location: Finland
Posts: 759
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Nice start!
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Emperor of Earth
Join Date: Mar 2011
Location: Terran Empire
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I am so very sorry for not having an update today, my little brother was on the computer all day, I am not even posting this from a computer, it is ob my iPod, I hope I will be able to get in an update tomorrow after school, again very sorry
![]() -Terran Emperor AKA Marauder M
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The obvious lurker
Join Date: May 2009
Location: Finland
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I'd say it's no problem as some storytellers take a week or more to update. Of course, it would be interesting to have an update every day but by all means write when you feel like it. No-one forces you to update daily if you simply cannot.
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Fighting Tyranny
Join Date: Nov 2009
Location: New Lunar Republic
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lurker's comment: Subscribing.
Don't try to update your stories everyday if you have to force it. I'll take quality over quantity any day.
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Celtic Fury- The 13th Most Read Civ 3 Story (As of May 24, 2012)
Chapter XVI: The Descent of Russia and the Supremacy of Armored Warfare Civilization III Corner: A S&T Times Column ![]() "TIS A LIE! THY BACKSIDE IS WHOLE AND UNGOBBLED, THOU UNGRATEFUL WHELP!" Bottom Line of Sig Currently Being Renovated |
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Emperor of Earth
Join Date: Mar 2011
Location: Terran Empire
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Chapter Two: Istanbul, Not Constantinople "Suleiman" Yes Marauder M. "You shall found your first city here, and it shall be named Istanbul" Why not Constantinople? "Because Constantinople is a Byzantine name for one and for two the name for this chapter is Istanbul, Not Constantinople." Ok kinda a criptic message, but I will ignore it for now. "Very good Suleiman, you are learning, but your people need direction in what they should build, make them build a scout." Spoiler:
Ok Marauder M "Now we also have a warrior, make him explore to the north." A Ok, player, wait what is that? Spoiler:
"Oh hey, its a city-state I wonder who it is." Wait Marauder M what is a city-state? "You will find out in about 3... 2... Spoiler:
Hello I am the governor of the city-state of Bucharest, we are a very cultured people, here is 30 gold, NOW GET OUT OF OUR LAND!!!!! "1... Dang it He interrupted me!" Man he was kinda, um.. CRAZY! "Well he is a Hostile city-state, but don't worry they will be assimilated in due time to our glorious empire." ![]() Wait what was that? "The Smiley? Don't worry you will learn about that when we get the Internet." End of Chapter Also I have great news, I just got the Korea/Wonders of the Ancient world pack, so now I have all the DLC Yay
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Emperor of Earth
Join Date: Mar 2011
Location: Terran Empire
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Crap I keep forgetting and procrastinating this thing, I will have have an update soon, probably Wendsday, I have a crap ton of reading I have to do for class I need to do tomorrow, sorry for the wait, I will try to do better when everything dies down a bit.
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Deity
Join Date: May 2011
Posts: 2,149
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Haha love how you have a interacting with suileman WIll watch this hope you finsih it
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Emperor of Earth
Join Date: Mar 2011
Location: Terran Empire
Posts: 71
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well, im updating World of tanks, and watching Antvenom on my ipod, might as well post an update.
Chapter 3: Care for a cup of tea good chaps? "Suleiman, I'm back." Oh thank goodness, I thought you died! "Wait why did you think that I died?" Because you haven't posted anything in two weeks. "Wait Suleiman, only I can break the fourth wall." Oh sorry "Also I just didn't want to do any posts for a bit, I'm lazy ok!" Wait don't get mad at me, I did nothing wrong. "I wasn't mad at you, I was talking to the audience. Oh ok. Wait what is that little hut thing over their, is it another city state? Spoiler:
"Oh crap, that is a barbarian encampment, man i hate those things!" Are they friendly? "They are Barbarians, they are most definitively not friendly, but our turn is over, their is not much we can do about it now can we. No, wait, turn? You mean that this world is full of turns, I thought it was real time, not some sort of stand still universe that jumps forward in time every turn! IS THIS ALL JUST A GAME TO YOU?! "Wait Suleiman, Calm down, but actually yes this is just a game to me, but could you really imagine a game like this in real time, how would it work, sure the multiplayer is in real time, but it sill has turns to divide up unit movements and tech advancement." I did not understand any word of what you just said, any ways it looks like Istanbul has just built a Scout. "Excellent, send him south." Spoiler:
What should I do now? "Move the warriors up north, and attack the Barbarian Camp. Are you sure that is a good idea? The HUD says that it will be a minor defeat. "Yes, and what did I say about breaking the fourth wall?" That only you are allowed to do it. ![]() "Thats right, now do it." Spoiler:
Well this means our turn is over right? "Not yet we still need to pick somthing for Istanbul to build, how about a worker." A Ok. "Ok lets see how our scout is doing." Spoiler:
BWAHAHAHAHA I CANT BELIEVE THE ONLY THING DOWN THERE IS MORE WATER, HAHAHAHAHA"SHUT UP SULEIMAN! Even I did not know that there would be nothing down there, anyways just send him north-west now." Ok ok, sorry, i'll do it just, it was so funny HAHAHA ![]() "Ok now attack the encampment again." Spoiler:
Hey we won, And our warrior got a promotion! What should we get? "well he is no longer in combat, so we don't need him to be fully healed, i'm thinking drill." Drill it is then. Spoiler:
"Hey it looks like we can adopt our first social policy now." Ok what are those. "Its basically our government and what our government stands for and what we do. I think we should adopt tradition, it will be good for the early game." Ok, I hope you know what your doing. Spoiler:
"Don't worry I do." I sure hope you do, well we finished archery. "Lets go for Animal Husbandry now." Spoiler:
Wait whats that, it looks like a barbarian encampment, without any barbarians. "Ooh a goody hut, lets send our scout into it and see what it gives us ."Spoiler:
BWAHAHAHAHA ANIMAL HUSBANDRY, BUT DIDN'T YOU DECIDE TO RESEARCH THAT LAST TURN, HAHAHAHAHA."Why yes I did, but this is a good thing, now we don't have to wait for it, and then get the hut which would make all the turns pointless, plus now we can research another tech, lets go for mining." Your wish is my command. Spoiler:
Hey look another unit, but it doesn't look like ours or a barbarians, then who's is it? Spoiler:
"Hello I am Queen Elizabeth of England, and we are pleased to meet you." Well that was fairly anti-climatic. "Meh, she always is, but hey at least we now know we are not the only Civilization on this continent." Well that's true. End of Chapter well for the lack of updates, here is a super long chapter for you to enjoy, hope you liked it. I will try to be better with the updates from now on k.
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My Youtube:The Marauder M In the event of the UN being an inconvienence, invade the UN. -Mosher Oh, why does life have to be so ironic? -Sweetie Belle Don't try to be a great man, just be a man. And let history make its own judgments. -Zefram Cochrane The self-proclaimed Emperor of Terra, King of Mars, and Protector of Luna. Last edited by Terran Emperor; May 25, 2012 at 11:09 AM. |
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The obvious lurker
Join Date: May 2009
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There's no goody hut picture, only the animal husbandry pic twice.
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Emperor of Earth
Join Date: Mar 2011
Location: Terran Empire
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oops i will fix that right now, sorry bout that
Ok its fixed now, sorry about that, i should have checked it, i derped.
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My Youtube:The Marauder M In the event of the UN being an inconvienence, invade the UN. -Mosher Oh, why does life have to be so ironic? -Sweetie Belle Don't try to be a great man, just be a man. And let history make its own judgments. -Zefram Cochrane The self-proclaimed Emperor of Terra, King of Mars, and Protector of Luna. Last edited by Terran Emperor; May 25, 2012 at 11:10 AM. |
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Truth is a lie
Join Date: Jun 2010
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Nice!
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Emperor of Earth
Join Date: Mar 2011
Location: Terran Empire
Posts: 71
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thank you very much
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My Youtube:The Marauder M In the event of the UN being an inconvienence, invade the UN. -Mosher Oh, why does life have to be so ironic? -Sweetie Belle Don't try to be a great man, just be a man. And let history make its own judgments. -Zefram Cochrane The self-proclaimed Emperor of Terra, King of Mars, and Protector of Luna. |
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Emperor of Earth
Join Date: Mar 2011
Location: Terran Empire
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Hey sorry about the lack of updates, but I have an explanationation, my computer actually crapped out about a week ago, so to fix it my mom decided ti do a complete wipe of everything on the computer, I saved the save file on a flash drive though so the story will go on, however the computer draped out on us halfway through the purge, having already deleated some of the needed to boot the computer, we ordered a boot disk and we are trying ti get the computer fixed, hopefully I will be able to post an update sometime next week.
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My Youtube:The Marauder M In the event of the UN being an inconvienence, invade the UN. -Mosher Oh, why does life have to be so ironic? -Sweetie Belle Don't try to be a great man, just be a man. And let history make its own judgments. -Zefram Cochrane The self-proclaimed Emperor of Terra, King of Mars, and Protector of Luna. |
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Emperor of Earth
Join Date: Mar 2011
Location: Terran Empire
Posts: 71
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Well, I have bad news, the computer crapped out so badly we actually have to ship it back to HP to have it fixed, it probably won't be back for another week or two, so this story is officially on hiatus until then, I WILL FINISH I PROMISE, I just have to wait for the computer to get back. Again so very sorry about the lack of updates, just don't waist your day waiting for updates.
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My Youtube:The Marauder M In the event of the UN being an inconvienence, invade the UN. -Mosher Oh, why does life have to be so ironic? -Sweetie Belle Don't try to be a great man, just be a man. And let history make its own judgments. -Zefram Cochrane The self-proclaimed Emperor of Terra, King of Mars, and Protector of Luna. |
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Emperor of Earth
Join Date: Mar 2011
Location: Terran Empire
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Chapter 3.5: Gods and Kings "Hey Suleiman, Guess what." Is your computer back, this flash drive is very stuffy and I would like to get out. "Actually yes, it is back, so yay for that." Woo, now I finally can get out of here and get back to ruling ."Well not yet." Not yet, what the heck do you mean!? "Well do you know what happened yesterday?" No, why? "Well the Gods and Kings expansion was released yesterday." And what does that mean? "Well I was thinking that my readers could take a vote." A vote, a vote for what, seriously we haven't learned about Democracy yet, heck we don't even have the Liberty social policy opened yet. "No the people of the Empire don't get a vote, the people reading this thing get to vote on whether I finish this game in vanilla or if I should restart in Gods and Kings, so what do you say, should I continue this game, or should I destroy this world and stuff Suleiman in carbonite and have him rule a new Ottoman Empire with the features of Gods and Kings? WHAT I DON'T WANT TO BE STUFFED INTO CARBONITE, IT DOESN'T FEEL GOOD! NOOOOOOOO........... so guys your choice should I finish this story or restart in Gods and Kings? Honestly if we weren't so early in the game I wouldn't be giving the choice but since we are, do you want to see Suleiman rule in a new game with the great new features of Gods and Kings? I honestly think it would make for an interesting story.
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My Youtube:The Marauder M In the event of the UN being an inconvienence, invade the UN. -Mosher Oh, why does life have to be so ironic? -Sweetie Belle Don't try to be a great man, just be a man. And let history make its own judgments. -Zefram Cochrane The self-proclaimed Emperor of Terra, King of Mars, and Protector of Luna. |
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Prince
Join Date: Feb 2010
Location: california
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I vote restarting with Gods and Kings, entertaining read by the way
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Deity
Join Date: May 2011
Posts: 2,149
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Restart with gods and kings you can have more itneraction with city states so more dialog
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Chieftain
Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: UK
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I would say restart with Gods & Kings. Really like the story by the way.
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Emperor of Earth
Join Date: Mar 2011
Location: Terran Empire
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so majority consensus says, restart with gods and kings, i was actualy out of town (and away from all forms of internet) and i have alot of work to do for my college classes, so expect an update
wednesday, don't worry i will have more frequent updates after then
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