imperator1961
Last of the Mohicans
I'm excited that you're doing this. This looks like a very good start.
These are the things I notice that could use improvement:
- The mahout's dhoti changes sizes & shapes several times throughout the animation
- The tip of the elephant's ear appears & disappears
- The trunk should be curled up a bit more. Otherwise it is dragging on the ground.
- In some frames the foreleg is noticeably angular. This might be a shortcoming of the model you are working with.
- The barding doesn't move at all. Makes it look like it's hard as a board & the elephant is on a see-saw.
- The walk is very jerky at this point.
Thanks for the suggestions. I have corrected all the things. As for the run animation it's very hard to do. I'll do all my best, but I cannot granted a good result.
I'm planning to do almost two era elephant, one with a musketman (17th C) and another wit a fusilier (18th c); but with the images you post here of an elephant cannon, I think I will made also a kind of this.
