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That is a LOT better. I told you it is worth a try. I would make his/Darius' body a bit wider now and apply lighting. Also extend some of the cloth next to his left shoulder so that is covers it. Also some part of his clothes have unnatural edges.

Fix those details and this is a great leader right there
 
Finished the Leaderscreen and will work on Ajsjeg next. (Can't do some of the other requests as they lack a lot of references.)
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