End of Empires - N3S III

And this post as well!

This doesn't mean I'll get it done much faster than normal (though I hope to get it finished before Wednesday), I just saw the opportunity.
 
A Quick Introduction to Bhehinar.
Spoiler :

Bhehinar is an Avaimian language, almost directly descended from the family's common ancestor, Avaidi; with the majority of the differences between the two languages derived from the movement of the Avaimian people over time. The collapse of the Empire of the Great Ming is widely accepted as the initial cause of the displacement of the peoples bordering the Enthur. While not one of the original tribes to suffer, the Avaimians were thought to have been displaced by those displaced, and as such were forced to move southwest by the stronger tribes. After their location stabilized, along the lands lying between the Two Rivers, the language received great influences from their southern neighbors in addition to their new Ming-descended neighbors.


Region thought to be the origin of the Avaimian people shown in brown.

The language of the northern portion of the continent, Bhehinar is the official language of the Evyni empire, with minor dialects spoken in Cotisi and among the peoples lying to their south. In addition to these, descendants of the Avaimian family are spoken widely in the north, a product of the movement of the people over time. Most of these languages differentiate greatly, most often concerning the pronunciation and presence of the vowels. Despite their vocal differences, many of the languages share the same vocabulary, granting greater reconciliations for their written forms.


Area where members of the Avaimian family are spoken, with Bhehinar in burgundy and the southern dialects in red.
Avaidi family members shown in tan.

When pronouncing a word, emphasis must be placed upon the vowels as many of the words are very similar in sound yet very different in meaning. An example of this are the words Ayn and Áyn, the first meaning “and” while the latter means “turtle”. Although there are a few minor sound shifts when combined, these are rare and as such are committed from what is widely considered the “proper” Crier. This version of Bhehinar has ten vowels and twenty recognized, independent constants.

{A}- [ɑ] as in father.
{Á}- [eɪ] as in bay.
{Â}- [ɑs] or [ɑz] as in pass or razz.
{E}- [ɛ] as in bed.
{É}- [i ] as in feet.
{Ë}- [ɛ] modified.
{I}- [ai] as in ride.
{O}-[oʊ] as in h[/b]oe.
{Ö}-[oʊ] modified.
{U}- [ju] as in dew.

{B}- as in but.
{C}- as in see.
{Ch}- [tʃ] as in chew.
{D}- [d] as in do.
{F}- [f] as in fool.
{G}- [ɡ] as in go.
{Ght}-[t ] as in sought.
{H}- [h] as in ham.
{J}- [dʒeɪ] as in jay.
{L}- [l] as in bell.
{M}- [m] as in man.
{N}- [n] as in no.
{P}- [p] as in pen.
{R}- [r] as in run.
{Rh}- [ɹ] as in rhye.
{S}- [ʃ] as in sure.
{Sch}-[sk] as in school.
{T}- [t] as in two.
{V}- [v] as in voice.
{Y}- [j] as in yes.


As a language. Bhehinar almost exclusively places weight upon the first syllable of the word unless the presence of a strong vowel. These vowels, properly {â], {ë}, or {ö}, are most commonly found within verbs or words of foreign origin, and when presence shift the weight to their surroundings. { Â} is found almost exclusively within verbs, save for a few adjectives of foreign origin, and denotes a blended sound, such as in the word thân (“to speak), pronounced “THAZ-n”. The character {Ë}, while found sometimes in place names, is more often the marking of a verb ( Sër, “to eat”) and when present denotes that the character is pronounced independently of its followers, thus allowing “Seh-r”. The final strong vowel, {Ö}, is found in the conjugation of verbs and in adjectives. Unlike the character { Ë}, the {Ö} serves two functions depending upon its location within a word. In most adjectives, such as cönl, cool, it comes as the first vowel and breaks the word as does {Ë}, allowing “coe-nl”. When the {Ö} falls as the second vowel or less, it performs the opposite and places the weight upon the remaining sound; for example while the the verb Jagös, is pronounced “Jah-GOES”, one of its forms, the present third, is jagos and is pronounced “JAH-goes”

A defining feature of the Avaidi family is that its descendants all lack a word form constituting the plural, that is that all their nouns and such are always singular unless noted by a modifier. To place in more understandable terms, while English adds an {s} to denote more than one object, such as taking cat to cats, a modifier must be used in Bhehinar to note more than one object. An example of this would be taking the word Segha, “song”, to segha iehn, literally “many song”, to denote more than one. While Bhehinar features a plethora of words without a definite number; such as many, some, a few, little, etc.; more often if a definite number will be provided if possible. So instead of segha iehn, you would more often receive segha chiu, or “five songs”.

Because they often defy the normal pronunciation rules, the minor Bhehinarian numbers are listed below:

Éyn (eeyn)- One
Édar (eedar)- Two
Éigh (EE-aigh)- Three
Aegh (AH-eh-gh)- Four
Chiu (Cha-ai-ew)- Five
Soghteos (Soe-ghteh-oes)- Six
Istea (Ais-teh-ah)- Seven
Énuit (Een-ewai-t)- Eight
Imote (Ai-mot-eh- Nine
Uteán (Ewt-ayn)- Ten
Utéyn (Ewt-eeyn)- Eleven (Ten-one)
Utédar (Ewt-eedar)- Twelve (Ten-two)
Utéigh (Ewt-eeah)- Thirteen
Utaegh (Ewt-ah-gh)- Fourteen
Utioh (Ewt-ai-oeh)- Fifteen
Utoghtás (Ewt-oe-ghtays)- Sixteen
Utistea (Ewt-ais-teh-ah)- Seventeen
Uténuit (Ewteen-ewai-t)- Eighteen
Utimote (Ewt-ai-mot)- Nineteen.
Édtéan (Eed-tee-ayn)- Twenty
Étéan ayn Éyn (Eet-eayn ahyn eeyn)- Twenty-one (Twenty and one)
Étean ayn Édar (Eet-eayn ahyn eedar)- Twenty-two (Twenty and two)
Éitéan (Eeai-tee-an)- Thirty
Éitéan ayn éyn (eeai-tee-an ahyn eeyn)- Thirty-one (Thirty and one).



*Note: The maps were not mod approved, so I could be wrong :).
 
When are the orders due?
 
Storytime!

Spoiler :
The Golden’s Task:

“I trust all went well for the three of you” King Julion, Lord of all Leun, asked of the three captains assembled around him. The four middle aged men and the lesser multitude of servants, scribes, and maintenance men sat in a large chamber of the King’s Ischya residence. The large chamber was relatively empty of furniture except for a table of roughly draw maps and charts to the side, near the large door at the entrance and four large chairs that were brought into the center, one chair facing the other three.

The residence, King Juilon’s Ischya residence, while very much modest in comparison to the other grand palaces of the civilization of the far west, was still a site to behold when one come upon the complex, which only bowed down to the King’s rather unused Palace in the capital in terms of grandiose for buildings located in Leun. This was due to the fact that the King preferred to be out in his kingdom and the numerous city sates that constituted Leun rather than stay in isolation in the palace and listen to endless reports of how this or that was done. That was as his father had done.

He yearned to be out with his people, make them think that he truly cared about everyone, which he did, and he made it duty to use his extensive memory to learn the name or surname of everyone he meet. This was unsurprisingly an insurmountable duty, but the King still remembered the names and faces most of the small group of captains that he had under his trust. That was what allowed him to let the three captains to relax more than if the King simply asked for a report, but he introduced, each in turn to, the captain of the 2nd oldest Soliman, Odysseus, the captain of the 3rd oldest Golden, Rustinous, and captain of the newly commissioned Augustos, Polyos. And true to the King’s tactic, the captains divulged more then even Juilos thought.

All three immediately reported, no, rather blurted out nonsense, or what seemed to be with all three rapidly speaking in such close proximity. He was initially a tad surprised and annoyed at the sudden unprofessionalism displayed by the three men, as he could not account for it, was it the site of himself, for the small navy of Leun was consistently working to rescue this fishing ship or escorting this Leun trade fleet, it was nonstop work and between traveling overland and commanding his own personal ship, Juilos rarely had a chance to speak an actual discussion with his commanding subordinates after the initial celebration of a the launching of a new ship or the annual 3 year review. A review which Juilos has regretted ever since he proposed the plans to his father Augustos when he was a mere teenager due to complications in accomplishing it.

“Captains, gentlemen! Now one by one, give me a short report of the issues or hopefully lack of them before you arrived here and please try to avoid the unprofessionalism that just, just erupted. You don’t have to be formal to me as others in my position require, but please don’t be like to common beggar, blurting everything out as if your life depending on it. Odysseus, lets hear your account first.”

“My King, Juilos, all went well from our departure from the waters several leagues north or Tars, nothing was of note. No.” Captain Odysseus suddenly stopped and quickly glancing at captains Rustinous and Polyos, started to lean in towards the King and brought up his hand to mouth to blocks any spoken words, but the King quickly announced to all three.

“ Odysseus… All three of you, confidentiality does not matter, for the reason so you will learn by the end of this discussion. Odysseus, continue.” Was what Juilos announced, still continuing his psychological campaign to earn their trust and loyalty, for the task which he set ahead for them will rely on nothing but their trust and loyalty to him. What wasn’t known to the King, however, was that his campaign was already ended in victory and if anything, he was tying up lose ends; this he realized by the behavior of the captains within 10 minutes.

After glancing at first King Juilos, then the captains seated to his right, Odysseus finally reported, almost with reluctance, ”We saw no Nahari warships, though we saw a patrol of Tars warships, if you want to call them that, for the were tiny in compared to ours. Though, do not be fool my King, there was merchants a plenty, more than I have ever personally seen. As we traveled farther and farther west upon the sea, more and more trade ships of all nations appeared on the horizons, though a large majority were Opulensi.” Odysseus concluded and followed his hands into his lap and waited for King to process the information and make a response. However, instead of providing praise as Odysseus expected, for he had fulfilled his order to the fullest, the King unknowingly disappointed by simply accepting the information and moving on.

“Thank you Odysseus, Rustinous, your report”

Rustinous, who had been pretending to listen but rather listlessly looked of into the distance trying to control his fiery temper which was very much annoyed with Odysseus’s droll report. Odysseus had a reputation of being pompous and prideful fool, making the most simple and/or pathetic of tasks seems like he was a Golden Men performing it, and the King actually believed him. Rustinous kept his cool and promptly answered the King.

“We surveyed the large southern island as you said my King and the prospector said that there is indeed a great possibility of silver and even gold on the island.” At the first moment that the word, gold, or even silver, left the lips of Rustinous, the eyes of the other 3 males lit up, especially those of captains yet to speak, Polyos.

“If you send a servant down to my ship, the Golden, docked down in the harbor and fetch my scribe, Ostmen, he can give you the written report of whole matter, but in his short description of it to me, he said that the volume of a trade stemming from those, lucrative resources, could be great.”

“More gold for all of us!” Odysseus exclaimed looking cheerful at the possible accumulation of wealth.

“We can speak of the Gold at a later time, please let Rustinous continue.” King Juilon wearily interjected.

“Thank you King Juilon, but I do not have much more to say, we were blown off course, which caused delays in getting here, which you probably noticed.”

“Yes”

“Actually, I do have a problem, and it worries me, sir, and it is a small rivalry that is slowly coming into bloom, between the conscripts of your naval conscription plan and the veterans. I didn’t detect the conflict until it was right in my face” said Rustinous with a chuckle, remembering back to the night when his third in command, Hastos, who was a good man, psychologically abused a rather heavier set, and lazier man of his crew, Argatos.

“Has this conflict started a physical conflict?” King Juilon asked after a second of quiet thinking.

“NO, no, my king, just, no a conflict, more a rivalry.” Rustinous blurted out in an attempt to quickly let the King not have time to wonder about he being the cause of this rivalry. For besides being a anger prone man, Rustinous was also a very stressed man, always fearing demotion, for his family was one of the original seafaring Leuns, and as he was the 5th son, he had a tradition to maintain, and to fail to remain a captain was to fail remain a Lusker, his family’s surname. So Rustinous was always on the look out, even for such trivial matters. Crewmen who had long served under Rustinous privately concluded that this look out behavior also caused the temper.

This stressful look out and temper was duly noted by the King in earlier occasions with Rustinous, but he did not notice now, as that was Rustinous’ relived thought when Julion simply concluded with a:

“I foresaw possible resentment when I implemented the conscription, an open rivalry though… I did not see that occurring, but rivalries make the ones involved work all that harder. Right?

“Of course.”
“Yes”
“Yes sir.” Rung throughout the hall simultaneously as the three captains raced to prove themselves the best of the three to the king in their own small rivalry that had started to develop. If the king had known this, then their own behavior would have answered his inquiry.

“Then it should be of little consequence to us, if even that. Thank you Rustinous. Polyos, your report?” King Juilon stated and asked and turned his head to face Polyos, the quietest of the three captains. Of course, he had yet to formally give his report, but even so, he could have put his two cents in as had Odysseus. But Polyos was more a quiet, calculating man, a schemer as rumor had it.

“My patrols brought nothing out of the nothing out of the ordinary.” Was Polyos’ quick and curt reply.

“Ah, nothing is always good. Thank you Polyos.” King Juilon said in the same manner as Polyos. The three captains then leaned further into their seat, if it was even possible, as all three had presumed correctly that they had not be invited to this meeting just to talk of reports. They had been invited for something important and prepared themselves for the task King Juilon had set for them as the King himself took a deep breath and leaned backed in the chair eventually saying,

“Captains, gentlemen, as you may have assumed, I brought the three of you for a vital mission. Do any of you know of the recently established colony to the far north?” Juilon asked as 2 of the three captains leaned back trying to hide their blank and unknowing faces while the third, instantly delighted at the chance to outshine the others, said,” It was established, what… 6 years ago to help better encourage trade with the Acaya.”

“You lie Polyos” exclaimed Odysseus,” The Accan Empire is half way across the world to the west. How could we establish a colony even close to them?”

“No Odysseus, not Acca, Acaya” King Juilon quickly interjected in order to dispel any chance of an argument.

“Humph” Was all Odysseus replied.

“Well… I have not heard from this colony for 6 months and I fear that something negative has affected it, if it even exists any more.” King Juilon said with a shade of weariness, as if he had stressed over the issue for many hours.

“It was the Acaya” Odysseus nearly yelled as he jumped to his feet practically stunning the King.

“I concur” Rustinous added.

“We should take a fleet and kill them for their evil actions” Odysseus proclaimed, but King Juilon, finally regaining his sense, quickly spoke to stop any aggressive towards Acaya. “We will do no such thing Odysseus. The Acaya have shown no aggression towards us and we have and will continue to return the favor. Please sit down Odysseus.”

“But who else would have committed such a, a, atrocity as to kill the colony?” Odysseus said as he slowly sat back down trying to argue for his course of action.

“I do not know, that is why” King Juilon said and taking a deep breath, “I will be sending the three of you north with your ships to investigate the situation and if possible, correct the problem.”
 
The dome of the Sapphire City can be seen for miles. But that is not our concern. Nor are the rising walls of the great triangular citadel that men have taken to calling the Ark, for its' prow-like tower, pointing down the river toward Seis like the raised spear of a warrior. Nor is the great hexagonal arena, or the vast slave markets, packed with buyers and sellers alike. In fact, Magha is not our concern...but what lies below Magha is.

For countless thousands of years, the Sesh and the Jafa have carved deep gouges in the land, like a plow pulled by thousands of giant oxen. Before they open out into the lowlands near Tisesh, the rivers are still powerful with mountain runoff, but too wide to cross. And they have carved the Red Cliffs of Bahra.

Silver fish dart through the waters, daring the languid crocodiles to come closer. After a brief swell of reeds, the stony shore gives way to the cliffs, a harsh red stone, almost as if all the blood spilt in the Sesh had flowed here and collected, staining the earth for all time. There are places where the cliffs grow low, allowing spring floods from the Two Rivers to water the fertile plain between. But at Magha, where the white Jafa and blue Sesh are joined, these cliffs are at their highest. The city itself is a triangle, narrowing as the space between the rivers narrows, high above the rushing waters.

These red cliffs defied even the Silver Prince, whose scouts reported that no mass of horse could ever cross such a diffcult waterway, unless Taleldil himself could lift them through the air or build a bridge from the winds. Atraxes was forced to move his armies far upstream, fording the icy headwaters of the Sesh where a light coverlet of snow coated the ground, in order to storm down on the Bahran royal city as he had planned.

This city has now been a Satar place for several generations, but it was the wandering Ardavani ascetics who viewed the red cliffs as something more than the minor diversion or troubling nuisance that they were for the locals. Oracles and acolytes of Ardavan alike were both drawn to and repelled from the city: Drawn because the Redeemer was there, and repelled because of the noise and chaos of the place.

The red cliffs were a perfect solution. And so began the great tradition of oracular cliff-temples, which would last for many years.

Ardavan is a religion based on discipline and martial prowess. The mind and body are dual weapons to be honed, for the battles in this life and the tests of the next. So many Ardavani seek isolation for just that reason: To train their bodies and minds, outside influences must be purged.

So, as the great building of the monuments of Magha went on above, a quieter process continued below on the cliffs. Men were lowered down on ropes and slings, and before long wooden platforms were improvised. The discovery of the pulley from a passing Seshweay servant greatly improved matters. The quiet clink of chisels went on, day and night, as the cliffs were shaped and honed. Within some years, the first platforms had been carved out of the red stone.

The first few were simple surfaces carved into the cliffs, with the overhanging rock of the cliff above forming a low ceiling for what was really a small, box-like cave. After a minor collapse, a strict order from the Redeemer forbade the oracles from burrowing too deep into the cliff side. So, the oracles wandered. They searched for lightweight building materials of reeds and wood. And the construction continued, building out from the cliffs as opposed to into them.

Their homes were small niches inside the cliffs, with a small training circle for pre-dawn exercises in the dark within the earth. Then, the oracles of Magha left their tunnels, and wandered out into the maze of wooden platforms, stone walkways, rope bridges, and shrines that lined the cliffs, poking out into thin air above the rushing rivers. They made their dawn chants to Taleldil, practiced forms of agility and concentration, and joined their brothers in combat on the great platforms buttressed by mighty beams of wood from the mountain forests, that could hold twenty men or more.

While the cliff-temples became more beautiful and intricate as time went on, with reliefs from the Kaphai-Avai and images of Taleldil carved from the red stone, and shining, polished hardwood replacing the ramshackle boards of the first few shrines, the cliffs would be impossible to cross by any but an Ardavani or an exceptionally talented commoner. More than one acolyte fell to his death, countless feet below, for a momentary lapse in concentration on the morning walk to training.

It was on these cliffs that the Ardai were born.
 
History of Palmyra's Buildings.

The cities, villages, and towns of Palmyra have distinct building styles based on when it was built and who did so. They often were created by whatever material is at hand. In fact, it's possible to see that one building of one style can be m=next to another one with an entirely different one. It can also reflect who or what group of people live in the area.

The most ancient and the wealthiest style of buildings is the Walloong Mootoo which means cold stone which comes from the cool feeling when touched. It's made out a mixture of marble and clay which often has to come from far away areas to be built. It's home to the wealthy and or a place of religious significance. In addition the main government offices and administration are often housed within these buildings.



But the religious sites and shrines are similar to the Walloong Mootoo but depending where they are they can be much more ornate inside the building.
In the most important shrines the inside is often painted with rare dyes and covered in frescos of religious significance. In addition the most important ones often have not just Walloong Mootoo but also have a rare blue stone that's thought to be from a meteorite that had crashed into remote area of Palmyra in the very distant and remote past.



The interior of the buildings can very from shrine to temple often depending on what is around but also the importance of the religious site.

 
Originally Posted by Ninja_Dude
Backstabbing, conspiracies, general chaos. This is the most important update NK said. That should indicate that big things are going down.

Have I mentioned how glad that I am about being up here in the calm north :)?
 
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