I like the introduction. It seems as though laws must first be rules and amendments must first be laws. Is this so and is that they way we want it to be?
I would strike the last sentence from the preamble and change the last word of the (new) last sentence from *Phoenatica* to *Phoenatics*.
Article D: I think we are going too far in stripping the constitution here. The areas of authority of the leader and governor positions should be outlined in the constitution. The authority of our officials must be anchored in the constitution. Without a constitutional basis then laws or even standards could be implemented that drastically change the duties of government officials.
Article E: I think we should consider basing terms on number of game turns played rather than the real calender. A term could be (for example) 80 turns long with the election process begining after 60 turns have been played. There is a turn calculator that can be used to easily determine what game year it will be 60 or 80 (or any number of) turns from any given year. Using the turn calculator it would be easy to know at what game year to start elections and the next term.
Article F: Are deputies considered to be in a leadership position? This article is vague but is it too vague? Does *No person shall hold multiple government positions simultaneously.* get the point across better? Or is this article not meant to change our current practice of allowing a person to be a leader and deputy at the same time?
Article G: Is the majority based on the census mentioned in article I? I must confess that I haven't been through all the laws and standards of "C" and thus don't yet understand the workings of the judiciary and legistlative branches. However, I think amendments should need 3/4 majorities of citizens to pass. Polls for amendments could be left open indefinately. I think laws should take a majority of citizens to pass. Standards should be made by government officials. As always these officials should endeavor to determine what it is the citizens want and then implement it but I do not think they should be made to gather a majority just to pass a standard.
Article I: Again, I suggest we consider basing terms on a fixed number of game turns played rather than a calender month. What is the quorum used for?
Articles J & K: No comment yet since I'm not sure of the mechanics of the legislature. Though it does seem to me that the council or cabinet departments are part of the executive branch while the citizens are the legislative branch.
Article N: No one, not even the all powerful moderators should be able to make laws contrary to the constitution. Unity cannot be imposed on the citizenry if they are divided (unless of course one faction is eliminated). Perhaps article N should read *The constitution, laws and standards of Phoenatica can never be contrary to the rules and regulations of the Civfanatics forums. Moderators may veto any such constitutional amendments, laws or standards* or something along those lines.
Well, now I must go over the code of laws.