I'm dismayed that I didn't see whichever posts @Blue Monkey is referring to, but, irrespective, I'm delighted that you're back!
I also checked out your website, and like both it, and what I've read
so far. One quick suggestion: change from 3rd person to 1st person on your landing page. It's very well written, yet it is also plain that "he" is "you." It will also immediately change a fine style "imitating" a passive voice to a more "active" one. You have a good story to tell: make it personal.
Although very different in intent, etc., I suggest reading the (admittedly brief) 'About Me" at: ! Paying Attention ! I also use the first person, throughout every article.
- So, now back to both your well being and you're writing -

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I also checked out your website, and like both it, and what I've read

Although very different in intent, etc., I suggest reading the (admittedly brief) 'About Me" at: ! Paying Attention ! I also use the first person, throughout every article.
- So, now back to both your well being and you're writing -


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