ok here's what i noticed-i can't keep a good story for more than a week. so what i'll do is i'll post a new story every sunday, and post 1-7 updates, or "chapters" a week. if the story is good enough to continue after that week, tell me and i'll start a thread 4 that story. note: some stories will be non-civ related and based off of completely random things from alien invasions to alternate history to civ games i play. ok so yeah post as much feedback as possible: comments, criticism, how much you hate my writing or if you like it so yeah.