Kicked outta school, need some opinions here!

[Warhead5654]

You screwed up bad. Just apologise and repeat the damm grade again
From what I can gather it seems you dont have enough attendance to clear the grade requirements. Just accept it and move on

im a B+ student, the VP himself told me i would only fail high school, i provewd him wrong before

 

[Warhead5654]

Get through school, then document their transgressions against you -- with hard solid evidence. Survive school, out them with the evidence in the future.

great, this was the opinion i was looking for.

 

[Warhead5654]

Dear _____

I do not understand why I have been called to this meeting when, to my understanding, the issue had already been resolved when I showed ________ my completed work. While I realize it may be rude for me to ask questions about orders rather than just following them, I ask because I feel it is necessary to ensure fair treatment for a student such as myself. After I learned why the orders were given I complied with the orders given to me. So at that point I considered the situation was dealt with so I do not understand why this meeting is taking place.

I was once told "Don't think you're any more special than any of these students here, you're just like everyone else". If this statement is true, then why am I being treated differently now? Since the second semester I have been going to meetings about my work and behavior over minor, trivial things. Yes, I did have some difficulties in November which I admit was entirely my fault, but I have changed my life since then. I've redeveloped my behavior to the standards set by the school and my school work has exceeded the contract standards. I have several teachers who can verify that I am a good student now.

What I am hoping for is for some teachers (administrators?) to stop holding my past against me. I am no longer the student who skips class everyday and misbehaves. But since some teachers (administrators?) still think I will be doing those things they treat me differently than the other students and this attitude from the teachers (administrators?) causes me to have to defend myself and makes it look like I am causing problems.

I still do not understand exactly why I was expelled. And now I was put back into a class I do not want to be in and this will cause me to be short 2 credits. When a school demands excellence from it's students, I think the students should expect excellence from it's school. It does not look good for the school when I was told I got deleted from the system!

Conclusion: I feel that a student does not have enough representation when having to deal with the school administration or meetings to ensure the student is treated fairly.

Sincerely,
_______ AKA warhead5654
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Note: I put (administrators?) because I wasn't exactly sure who the OP was referring to. I re-worded his argument trying to make his case the most favorable for him that I could (even if I didn't believe him or agree with him). And I dropped out all of the racist claims made in the OP as that would surely not help him.



Yeah, I think that's what really happened.

im going to use that letter, buddy

 

[Warhead5654]

Bamspeedy has it spot on.

I don't think that "sucking it up" is a viable option, nor is it fair. You have to state your case, I would be disappointed in you if you didn't. Be honest with yourself, and if you truly think you are in the right, then you should not admit to being wrong (of course, there is a very large grey area between right and wrong and you may be somewhere in there).

However, how you state your case is very important. If you want reason and respect from others, you have to show that you can give it too. The letter written by Bamspeedy above is a good example of that. It makes the very point you want to make, but it is written in a dimplomatic way that will be more acceptable to those you are tyring to send the message to.

If you undertand this point, you have already taken your first step to becoming a lawyer.

i compared the 2 letters, mine was in an angry tone

 

[MobBoss]

Multi-Post is your friend! Heh.

 

[ParadigmShifter]

Here's a version in Jive which I think sounds much better, yo.

Dear _____ I do not dig it why ah' have been called t'dis meetin' when, t'my dig itin', de issue had already been resolved when ah' showed ________ mah' completed wo'k. Ya' know? While ah' realize it may be rude fo' me t'ax' quesshuns about o'ders rada' dan plum followin' dem, ah' ax' cuz' I feel it be necessary t'ensho' man fair treatment fo' some student such as mah'self. Afta' I learned why de o'ders wuz given ah' complied wid de o'ders given t'me. So's at dat point ah' considered da damn situashun wuz dealt wid so's I do not dig it why dis meetin' be takin' place. I wuz once told "Duzn't dink youse any mo'e special dan any uh dese students here, youse plum likes everyone else". If dis statement be true, den why am ah' bein' treated differently now? Since da damn second semesta' I gots been goin' t'meetin's about mah' wo'k and behavio' upside mino', trivial doodads. Yeah man, ah' dun did gots some difficulties in Novemba' which ah' admit wuz entirely mah' fault, but ah' have changed mah' life since den. 'S coo', bro. I've redeveloped mah' behavio' t'de standards set by de farm and mah' farm wo'k gots exceeded da damn contract standards. ah' have several head homeboys who kin verify dat ah' am some baaaad student now, so cut me some slack, Jack. Whut ah' am hopin' fo' be fo' some head homeboys (administrato's?) t'stop holdin' mah' past against me. ah' am no longa' de student who skips class everyday and misbehaves. But since some head homeboys (administrato's?) still dink ah' gots'ta be hangin' dose doodads dey treat me differently dan de oda' students and dis attitude fum de head homeboys (administrato's?) causes me t'have t'defend mah'self and makes it look likes ah' am causin' problems. I still do not dig it 'esactly why ah' wuz 'espelled. And now ah' wuz put back into some class ah' do not wanna be in and dis gots'ta cause me t'be sho't 2 credits. When some farm demands 'sellence fum it's students, ah' dink de students should 'espect 'sellence fum it's farm. It duz not look baaaad fo' de farm when ah' wuz told ah' gots deleted fum de system! Right on! Conclusion, dig dis: ah' feel dat some student duz not gots enough representashun when havin' t'deal wid de farm administrashun o' meetin's t'ensho' man de student be treated fairly. Slap mah fro! Sincerely, _______ AKA warhaid5654

http://www.rinkworks.com/dialect/

 

[Bill3000]

im going to use that letter, buddy

No, that's your draft. Get help from adults in the real world to look over it to see if it's good enough.

 

[azzaman333]

Get a lawyer to determine whether you actually have been discriminated against before you try and take it to the man.

Otherwise you're best to apologize.


Although, if you're able to pass all the assessments, I wouldn't see any real reason for an attendance issue to force you to be kept back a year.

 

[Lone Wolf]

im a B+ student

You certainly don't sound like one.

 

[mrt144]

Here's a version in Jive which I think sounds much better, yo.

Dear _____ I do not dig it why ah' have been called t'dis meetin' when, t'my dig itin', de issue had already been resolved when ah' showed ________ mah' completed wo'k. Ya' know? While ah' realize it may be rude fo' me t'ax' quesshuns about o'ders rada' dan plum followin' dem, ah' ax' cuz' I feel it be necessary t'ensho' man fair treatment fo' some student such as mah'self. Afta' I learned why de o'ders wuz given ah' complied wid de o'ders given t'me. So's at dat point ah' considered da damn situashun wuz dealt wid so's I do not dig it why dis meetin' be takin' place. I wuz once told "Duzn't dink youse any mo'e special dan any uh dese students here, youse plum likes everyone else". If dis statement be true, den why am ah' bein' treated differently now? Since da damn second semesta' I gots been goin' t'meetin's about mah' wo'k and behavio' upside mino', trivial doodads. Yeah man, ah' dun did gots some difficulties in Novemba' which ah' admit wuz entirely mah' fault, but ah' have changed mah' life since den. 'S coo', bro. I've redeveloped mah' behavio' t'de standards set by de farm and mah' farm wo'k gots exceeded da damn contract standards. ah' have several head homeboys who kin verify dat ah' am some baaaad student now, so cut me some slack, Jack. Whut ah' am hopin' fo' be fo' some head homeboys (administrato's?) t'stop holdin' mah' past against me. ah' am no longa' de student who skips class everyday and misbehaves. But since some head homeboys (administrato's?) still dink ah' gots'ta be hangin' dose doodads dey treat me differently dan de oda' students and dis attitude fum de head homeboys (administrato's?) causes me t'have t'defend mah'self and makes it look likes ah' am causin' problems. I still do not dig it 'esactly why ah' wuz 'espelled. And now ah' wuz put back into some class ah' do not wanna be in and dis gots'ta cause me t'be sho't 2 credits. When some farm demands 'sellence fum it's students, ah' dink de students should 'espect 'sellence fum it's farm. It duz not look baaaad fo' de farm when ah' wuz told ah' gots deleted fum de system! Right on! Conclusion, dig dis: ah' feel dat some student duz not gots enough representashun when havin' t'deal wid de farm administrashun o' meetin's t'ensho' man de student be treated fairly. Slap mah fro! Sincerely, _______ AKA warhaid5654

http://www.rinkworks.com/dialect/

FLAWLESS VICTORY!

 

[Alpine Trooper]

You certainly don't sound like one.

we r sumtimes slow in canada eh but we pass everyone in canada 2 b fair eh

 

[Aegis]

Slap mah fro!

 

[Heretic_Cata]

Accuse them of touching you in naughty places and your letter will have more weight.

 

[nonconformist]

Slight syntax error fixed:


Dear _____

I do not understand why I have been called to this meeting when, to my understanding, the issue had already been resolved when I showed ________ my completed work. While I realize it may be rude for me to ask questions about orders rather than just following them, I ask because I feel it is necessary to ensure fair treatment for a student such as myself. After I learned why the orders were given I complied with the orders given to me. So at that point I considered the situation was dealt with so I do not understand why this meeting is taking place.

I was once told "Don't think you're any more special than any of these students here, you're just like everyone else". If this statement is true, then why am I being treated differently now? Since the second semester I have been going to meetings about my work and behavior over minor, trivial things. Yes, I did have some difficulties in November which I admit was entirely my fault, but I have changed my life since then. I whistled for a cab and when it came near the license plate said fresh and it had dice in the mirror. If anything I can say this cab is rare but I thought 'Now forget it' - 'Yo homes to Bel Air' I pulled up to the house about 7 or 8 and I yelled to the cabbie 'Yo homes smell ya later' I looked at my kingdom, I was finally there to sit on my throne as the Prince of Bel Air
Sincerely,

_______ AKA warhead5654

 

[nivi]

Oh gawd, copy-pasta in CFC? Thats just not right.

 

[Godwynn]

well i got suspended from school for 2 weeks, heres why

I was suspended because i asked WHY.

I have improved it for you.

MY MARKLAR!

Why should marklar be in a marklar? marklar am getting punished for a resolved marklar. ( marklar had been resolved when marklar had shown _____marklar my completed marklar; marklar was to be in marklar as usual) marklar is very clear that the marklar was caused by the marklar. Sure marklar Was being rude by asking why, but marklar’s the only way for a marklar to earn fair marklar from the marklar; marklar feel marklar have a marklar to know why, especially when the marklar are completetey out of marklar to even call this marklar. marklar would have complied with ____ marklar, after learning the marklar as to why.
marklar was once told QOUTE:”Don't think marklar any more special than any of these marklar here, your just like marklar else”. If this marklar is true, Then why am marklar being treated especially? Since The second marklar, marklar have been making daily visits for PETTY marklar!(didnt finish a couple of marklar on my marklar, marklar wanted to hold marklar back even though marklar know marklar goes homes for marklar, marklar alright to mess up his marklar because mine was bad.)
Ok, marklar used to misbehave and skip marklar in marklar. marklar Redevoleped my marklar to the marklar of the marklar, Most of My marklar is finished, and marklar have been exceeded the marklar marklar.(marklar have a few marklar as marklar too!) marklar is as if marklar am being ostricized by the marklar. Well marklar tired of being the black marklar! marklar want marklar to be fair around here! marklar don't wanna be the 'problem marklar' in your marklar, marklar just wanna get my Free marklar without getting harassed marklar!

_________ AKA warhead5654

 

[nonconformist]

In case your administrator is a smurf:



Dear _____

I do not smurf why I have been smurfed to this smurfing when, to my understanding, the issue had already been smurfed when I smurfedd ________ my completed smurf. While I realize it may be smurf for me to smurf questions about smurfs rather than just smurfing them, I smurf because I feel it is smurfessary to ensure fair smurfment for a smurf such as myself. After I smurfed why the orders were smurfen I smurfed with the smurfss given to me. So at that point I smurfeded the smurf was smurft with so I do not smurf why this smurfing is taking smurf.

I was once told "Don't smurf you're any more smurfish than any of these smurfs here, you're just like everysmurf else". If this statement is true, then why am I being smurfed differently now? Since the second smurf I have been going to smurfings about my smurf and smurf over smurf, smurf smurfs. Yes, I did have some difficulties in smurfember which I admit was entirely my smurf, but I have smurfed my life since then. I've redesmurfed my behavior to the smurf set by the smurfs and my smurf work has exceeded the smurf standards. I have several smurfs who can smurf that I am a good smurf now.

What I am smurfng for is for some smurfs (smurfs?) to stop holding my smurf against me. I am no longer the smurf who skips smurfs everyday and smurfs But since some smurfs (smurfs?) still think I will be smurfing those things they treat me smurfently than the other smurfs and this smurfitude from the smurfs (smurfs?) causes me to have to smurf myself and makes it look like I am causing smurf.

I still do not smurf exactly why I was smurfed. And now I was put back into a smurf I do not want to smurf and this will cause me to be smurfed. When a smurf demands excellence from it's smurfs, I think the smurfs should expect smurfs from it's smurf. It does not look good for the smurf when I was told I got smurfed from the system!

Conclusion: I feel that a smurf does not have enough smurf when having to smurf with the smurf smurfministration or smurfings to smurf the smurf is smurfeded smurfly.

Sincerely,
_______ AKA warhead5654 Smurf

 

[Defiant47]

You guys are ridiculous!