Kendon
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[QUOTE="Tugboatspotter:
One further suggestion for the pedia text for large rivers: ...due to abundant resources of food like fish and fertile land, as well as the economic advantages... is a little clunky. I would suggest changing it to:
...due to fertile land and abundant resources of food such as freshwater fish, as well as the economic advantages...
This is fairy pedantic though. It is fine as it is [/QUOTE]
Here's another possible phrasing, a little shorter overall, using the same content as XSamatan:
Civilization began along the banks of the Tigris and Euphrates rivers in what is now Iraq. Colonization followed the Mississippi, Amazon, Saint Lawrence and Mackenzie rivers, broad highways into the heartland of the New World. Large rivers meant abundant food and fertile land, as well as transportation. Vessels on deep rivers could carry more cargo without grounding.
Back when bridges were built only on the busiest routes, crossing a large river was a dangerous undertaking. Wide rivers had to be forded using sand banks, shallow water or islets. Enterprising settlers might rig a ferry system to get people, cargo and livestock to the other side.
One further suggestion for the pedia text for large rivers: ...due to abundant resources of food like fish and fertile land, as well as the economic advantages... is a little clunky. I would suggest changing it to:
...due to fertile land and abundant resources of food such as freshwater fish, as well as the economic advantages...
This is fairy pedantic though. It is fine as it is [/QUOTE]
Here's another possible phrasing, a little shorter overall, using the same content as XSamatan:
Civilization began along the banks of the Tigris and Euphrates rivers in what is now Iraq. Colonization followed the Mississippi, Amazon, Saint Lawrence and Mackenzie rivers, broad highways into the heartland of the New World. Large rivers meant abundant food and fertile land, as well as transportation. Vessels on deep rivers could carry more cargo without grounding.
Back when bridges were built only on the busiest routes, crossing a large river was a dangerous undertaking. Wide rivers had to be forded using sand banks, shallow water or islets. Enterprising settlers might rig a ferry system to get people, cargo and livestock to the other side.
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