Trystero
Deity
I've put together a brief message of greetings to Team Quatronia, and would like your opinions. My intent is to offer them Open Borders immediately upon sending this message:
Edit: Since we want to include Quatronia in our trade Alliance with AMAZON, I sent this message off quickly. Sorry if this seems presumptuous of me, but after reading over the Merlot and AMAZON diplomacy discussions I was convinced that was there was nothing particularly controversial in the correspondence. I basically said hello, told them AMAZON is to the north of their WB (they'll find this our for themselves shortly, and they are already communicating with AMAZON), and offered open borders, which has little real effect at this point and we've offer to Merlot. As Grant mentioned with the Merlot diplomacy, I thought a quicker initial correspondence would make a better impression.
Hail and well met!
The Sirian people extend warmest greetings to the peoples of Quatronia. Our exploration vessel Voyager spotted a vessel of the Quatronian empire, the Rio Grande, in the eastern reaches of the known world, and hurried the news to our high council. The entire Sirian nation celebrated the news of our meeting. Truly the stars shine brightly upon us!
We hope our greeting finds the Quatronian empire doing well. Our friends the AMAZON, who reside to the north of Rio Grande’s current location, have impressed us with stories of the wonders of Quatronia and the just and fair Quatronian people. We therefore offer any Quatronia vessels safe harbor within our open Sirian borders, and their crews the hospitality of the Sirian people.
We are currently organizing our high council to send a more formal greeting, for we feel we have much to discuss, and we hope to bring our two great nations closer together. Please feel free to send all diplomatic correspondence to sirius.mtdg@gmail.com. I will be serving, at least temporarily, as the diplomatic liaison between our great empires. We look forward to hearing from you.
Respectfully yours,
Trystero
Edit: Since we want to include Quatronia in our trade Alliance with AMAZON, I sent this message off quickly. Sorry if this seems presumptuous of me, but after reading over the Merlot and AMAZON diplomacy discussions I was convinced that was there was nothing particularly controversial in the correspondence. I basically said hello, told them AMAZON is to the north of their WB (they'll find this our for themselves shortly, and they are already communicating with AMAZON), and offered open borders, which has little real effect at this point and we've offer to Merlot. As Grant mentioned with the Merlot diplomacy, I thought a quicker initial correspondence would make a better impression.