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Seeds of Fate

Eclipse-X010

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This story will be made using my favorite civ, the Romans. Unfortunately, I will not be able to post any screenshots of the actual yet, as my comp running my game is under repair, however, I've found ways to improvise. I've also included in this story, something only a few other authors, most notably, Sisitul, have explained seriously before, and that is: an explanation for why the leaders are immortal. I don't know how well my humble story will stack up, by I hope it s viewed well.

Stats will be placed here once I get my computer fixed, as I don't want to screw up on any details.


Seeds of Fate


Section I: A Strong Foundation

Chapter I: Aevum Templum

You wouldn't have thought anyone could run so fast, but with hell's hounds at his heals, Augustus sure ran. He leaped over a wooden cart like a mere hurdle and plowed through a crowd of villagers. Behind him, two guards followed, waving clubs at anyone who got in their way.

Augustus saw the club smash into a villager, cracking his skull and splattering one of his pursuers with blood.

Augustus had no wish to suffer the same fate. He dashed through a hut and plowed through the back wall, sending the structure tumbling down on a club-wielding pursuer who was a mere 5 feet behind him. Augustus could see the treeline in front of him. He'd cleared the village, he was almost there.

Even as he ran though, he saw it was hopeless, and a pang of anger flowed through him. To have come all this way, to have sacrificed so much, only for the man closing in on him to tackle him, and no doubt drag him back to Kronos, Chieftain of the village, for an execution.

Just as the man was about to seize Augustus however, a small projectile whizzed by Augustus's head, barely passing into his field of vision before moving on.

Augustus heard a howl of pain, and turned to see the man behind him on the ground. His club had escaped his grasp. His face was covered in blood. Embedded into his chest, was the arrow.

Augustus had no time to stare however, four more club-wielding warriors were hot on his tail. Augustus sprinted the rest of the way to the treeline and ran straight to the ravine he knew was waiting. He dived into it, landing in a puddle of mud which mixed in with the blood from the fallen warrior which had splattered over Augustus.

As the four warriors closed in on the ravine however, 6 men rose from its depths. Each carried a wooden-stone axe used by scouts. Rather than hacking, they tossed the axes, which sailed with skilled precision forward, before embedding themselves in the chests of the warriors pursuing Augustus.

After the warriors fell, the men turned to Augustus. He was on the ground, clutching a small bundle close to his chest.

"You planned all this out for that," muttered one of the men who had defended him.

"This," Augustus said, "Is our proof, once we present this to the village, they'll have no choice but to turn on Kronos and kill him for his actions."

"Since time immemorial," said the man, "he has enslaved us, kept in power by his cronies who would believe every word from his mouth. How will this package help us defeat him?"

Augustus unrolled the bundle. A simple herb lay inside.

"Aevum Templum," said Augustus, "The plant that kept him alive for all these years."

The men looking on gasped.

"So it is true," one said, "He is not a god."

"No," said Augustus, "He's just a man who found the herb of life."

......

Two days later, the sun was covered behind dark clouds. A cold wind blew, and many of the superstitious villagers predicted a reckoning on this day.

Augustus was not one to disappoint. In full view of everyone, he marched to the center of the camp, where Kronos, the chieftain who had enslaved the Romans for so long, basked on a tier, covered with women and food. The women seemed repulsed by his presence, and rightly so. He was a hairy, slimy, and grotesque figure. His bulging belly knocked food off the tier whenever he moved. His eyes seemed to lead straight to hell, and his mouth sneered at anyone who approached.

On this day, Augustus entered the center of the camp with 12 men, 12 to Kronos's 18 guards. Of course, 3 of Augustus's men had bows, and Augustus intended to make sure not a man moved in defense of Kronos.

A crowd, nearly all of the Roman tribe, gathered to watch the unfolding spectacle.

"So," said Kronos, "Little Augustus of the Freedom Fighters finally shows his face." Kronos spat on the ground. "You and your half-wit friends should have been tossed into the Inegral river the day you were born."

"The only one going in the Inegral is you," said Augustus, "Once the tribe knows how you've deceived them for centuries, you pathetic false-god."

"WHAT," boomed Kronos, "False god, you little peace of fimus, solders, kill him."

Augustus's men raised their bows and axes but Augustus raised a hand that told them to stand back. The guards rushed him, swinging their clubs, they beat him swiftly and let him lay on the ground, covered in dirt and blood.

"Anyone who dares to deny my divinity will meet the same fate as..." began Kronos.
"Me," interrupted Augustus.

The crowd gasped in all. Augustus was rising, no mark of the beatings was visible on his skin, though the furs on him were still red with shed blood.

"By all rights," said Augustus, "I should be dead, but by using an herb, an herb Kronos takes each day, I have lived."

He looked at Kronos, "This plant and not a divine power, has kept Kronos alive for centuries, but if you really are a god Kronos, go ahead, smite me down without use of your guards, and you'll have proven yourself."

Kronos, in his rage, charged Augustus with his fists in the air. Augustus gave the signal, and 3 arrows sprouted in Kronos's cheast. He fell to the ground. He had not taken the herb in a while, so his wounds were slow to heal, and the severity of them made it all the worst.

Augustus, raised an axe, and brought it down on Kronos's head, smashing through his skull and killing him completely.

One of his men grabbed a torch and set fire to Kronos's body.
"It's the only way we can be sure he doesn't come back," said Augustus.

The crowd stared at him in awe as he walked atop Kronos's tier.

"From this day forward," said Augustus, "I proclaim all Romans free of tyranny, I proclaim a new age for us, we shall found an empire of great power, and we shall expand across the lands. Never will we be enslaved as we were to this man. Never again shall we worship a mere man."

There was silence for a moment, a hush ran through the crowd. Then one man cheered, and his jubilation echoed across the entire camp. The women who lay near Kronos now looked up at Augustus, who stood among them. Their eyes were filled with tears of joy and thankfulness.

......

Augustus looked upon the new site of the city of Rome. For 5 days, his people had been walking to the site. He now showed it to them. Before the Roman tribe lay a rich fertile plane. A river ran through it, it branched out into a delta which ran into the ocean. Hills surrounded the area. It was atop one of these hills the Romans now stood. The sun now shone over the land and reflected off the ocean beyond. The air was fresh with the recent rainfall.

"I present to you," said Augustus, who was now addressing the villagers from atop a log, "The future site of Rome, it is here, our great journey will begin. Here, an empire is founded, for it is here, that we shall rise."

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Chapter 2: Through Modern Eyes

"Jack, I would've thought you'd stop moping by this point," said Augustus, sitting comfortably in the chair that had been constructed for him.

"When we got here, we were mere slaves," Augustus continued, addressing a short bald man who stood before him, his face bleak and worn. "Now," said Augustus, "We are at the top of the ladder, and from our modern knowledge, a great empire shall begin, and empire that will grow and prosper, lead..."
"By you," interrupted Jack, "For the past few months, I've been slaving to make sure these people bought our cover story, I've been living in this archaic squalor, no technology, no real clothing, not even a stinking cup of coffee. I don't want this life Michael, or is is Augustus now, I want to go back."

"Believe me," said Augustus, "I've often wondered how we can do that, and my conclusion is this: we died in that accident, and someone, for whatever reason, gave us a second chance a chance to live."

"SHHHHHH," interjected Jack, as an attendant had just entered the throne room. Had she heard them conversing in English, they're entire masquerade would be over.

"I have brought food," said the attendant, a beautiful black-haired woman with soft tan skin and haze eyes.

"Gratias ago vos," said Augustus to the woman, who left, but not before giving a tantalizing smile to them both, and casting a glance at Jack.

"She has taken a fancy to you," said Augustus in English, after the woman had left.

"I don't even speak bloody Latin," Jack said, "I've made do with whatever you've taught me on this fruitless quest at adapting to this place, we need to go back."

"THERE IS NO WAY BACK!" shouted Augustus, "Put aside your desire for 21st century comforts, as soon as that truck hit us, as soon as we woke up in this place, you should have known, there was no going back, were here now, whatever universe this may take place in, whatever time, whatever place, it is now. I for one, am going to help these people, whatever the consequences, now are you going to join me or are you going to waste your life trying to find a way back to the modern world."

Jack stared, and at that point, the two of them were friends no more. Jack spat at Augustus's feet, the one Roman tradition he really enjoyed, "Now listen you," he said to Augustus, anger and rage flowing through him and venting through his words, "I'm going to get back home, to New York, and you can either help me, or waste your life in this archaic town you have built."

With that, Jack stormed out of the throne room, leaving Augustus to sit and watch his friend go.

......

It had happened a few months ago, Augustus, then known as Michael, had been crossing the rode with his friend Jack. As they reached the center, a semi-truck driver had ran the light and collided with them. The collision killed the both of them instantly, or so everyone thought. The two had woken up, in the valley known as Tartarus, where Kronos's scouts had found them. They had met the villagers. Jack only wanted to get home, but Michael, who changed his name to Augustus after hearing the people were Romans, thought otherwise, he had started a revolution, one that had now toppled Kronos, and had resulted in the creation of the Roman Empire.

......

Augustus strolled along the edge of Rome, looking across the sea to the horizon. "Where am I," he wondered. He had resigned himself to Rome. He, unlike Jack, had no one back home. On the other hand, he was a savior to these people. He would not abandon them, he would not let them down.

"A sunset stroll I see," came a voice.

Augustus turned to see Avi, the woman who had first introduced him to the revolution, walking down the beach towards him. Her black hair cascaded down the fur-clothing she wore. Her face was smooth and white, though slightly tanned, like many Roman woman. She was a great beauty among Rome's people, one who Kronos had made his personal servant, but it was her personality that Augustus liked most about her. She was strong and determined. Her eyes would blaze with a fire that Augustus found comforting in times like this. Times when his friends had left him.

"Me and Jack had little argument," said Augustus, walking up to meet Avi in the middle of the beach. The wind gently rustled her hair, as the two approached each other.

"About what?" asked Avi.

Augustus desperately wanted to tell her the truth, that his name was really Michael, that he was from another time, another world, that Jack wanted to return home to modern luxuries, that to him, the Romans were a hopelessly archaic and primitive people, but he could not tell her. She would never understand the full complexity of what had happened to Augustus.

"It's personal," was all he said.

She looked away, but before she did, Augustus could see the hurt and longing in her eyes. She and Augustus had shared many private thoughts during the revolution, but she always knew Augustus was holding back a secret, something he would talk to no one about except Jack.

"It's nothing personal towards you," Augustus said, "But Jack would kill me if I discussed some things, some things I want to tell people, with anyone."

"So instead you walk alone along the beach," said Avi.

Augustus was about to respond, but a messenger ran up to him, then, sand flying from beneath his feet. He ran up to Augustus, oblivious to Avi, and whispered something in Augustus's ear. He then turned and almost fainted when he saw Avi. Needless to say, many coveted her.

"Mam," he said, nodding her way, "Sorry for the intrusion." The messenger promptly ran away towards the city.

"What was that about?" Avi asked.

"He says we may have discovered another empire," said Augustus.

"More allies," said Avi.

"Or competition," said Augustus.

"Must you always view things in the worst possible way?" she asked.

"Not all things," Augustus said, eying her up, "Just the ones that could get me killed."
 
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