Shaka, of the Zulus

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qwertyAlien

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I, Shaka, my father's son, was born on 4005BC. I lived a normal life in one of the small tribes of Africa. In the year 4001BC the barbarians raided our nice village and burned everything down. It was time for the survivors to find another place to live in. So, we started travelling, we travelled for 11 years, then the leader of our small tribe, my father died. Even though I was young and unexpirienced, the task of leading was given to me, that was the tradition back then. So, in the year 3990BC I, Shaka and my tribe found a new village, to the same spot where my father, the former leader died, and it was called Zimbabwe.

The duty of leading was not easy, I had to make lot's of hard decicions. Soon, we found another civilized tribe who called themselves the Germans. They lived far far away from Zimbabwe in the cold north. Their leader was called Otto Von Bismarck, he was an old man who had strange colored skin and gray hair just above his lips, but strangely not on his head. We made a pact not to attack eachother, and he told me where yet another civilized tribe, called the Babylonians live in.

So, I travelled to this place called Babylonia. There it was much warmer than in Germany up North-West. The leader of Babylonia called himself King Hammurabi. He looked kind of Bismarck, but had different color skin, and a long beard. He tried to assasin me while I was speeping in his palace after a long meeting. We, me and my friends, warriors, protectors, The Impis didn't like that and so we took over Babylon. Sadly, the Evil King Hammurabi got away from our deadly spears.

When we, me and my escort, were travelling back home, we found yet another tribe, who were lead by a woman. This must have been an unorganized tribe since the leader was a woman, and so we didnt negotiate almost about anything since we ran away, back to home, Zimbabwe.

When we arrived to Zimbabwe, the people there told us that the city got overpopulated when I was gone, and half of the City left to found another town, under my command. The new town was already named Ulundi.


To be continued???
 
Proof-read. And you mean BC... AD is the calander we're on now, with the dates counting *up*.
 
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