SteamNES

I would do a story, but I am mildly curious as to how far the world had progressed since its sudden end? Or are we starting off from where we left off?

My story hinges on this really as the war with Allemany was still going when the NES ended. So I kind of wanted to know how that worked out.
 
I would do a story, but I am mildly curious as to how far the world had progressed since its sudden end? Or are we starting off from where we left off?

My story hinges on this really as the war with Allemany was still going when the NES ended. So I kind of wanted to know how that worked out.

I'm going by the same point we left off at.
 
As am I. I'm still trying to figure out how the heck I'll update... I can't make sense of neverwonagame's stories.
 
I guess I will do that as well as I have been hit by a writing urge. :Cheers:

King Germaniski smiled, his new born son was nestled warmly in the embrace of Queen Hanna's arms... "Ahh the innocence of youth. How lucky a child is to avoid the problems of a King." Octavian mused. Together the couple and their child were in the bedroom free of the troubles of the nation and a war, with the sun rising and bringing forth a day of rebirth for the nation the King rose and allowed his servants to dress him. Octavian kissed his wife and headed towards the Throne room where he met his domestic advisers. After seating himself he motioned for the adviser to proceed....

My liege, I am proud to report that the rails connecting our factories to the mines for the production of our Legionaries have been completed. Several lines have also connected our capital to 4 of our 6 major cities, the last 2 are closing completion. Only the southern mountainous region remains free from our rail gangs, but a surveyor dispatched just last month reports a path can be created to one of the towns across the range and from there the rails can connect to the other 3. But he advises to wait as the route would be long and require single tracks in many regions as we do not have the money to tunnel wide and lay 2 or more tracks or bridges.

King Germaniski stared at the adviser and asked, "What of our rail lines towards Allemany? Are they adequate enough to supply our armies there?"

Yes my liege, the town of Warmińsko-Mazurski can hold a capacity of 15 trains full of troops and goods for the front lines at any given time. But unfortunately as we do not have the regions beyond subdued our goods from there onwards go by wagons. Allemany it appears lacks a rail system.

King Germaniski stood up and surveyed the nearby map, paying particular attention to the states in Allemany and the front lines. After a brief moment he turned and spoke, "I want you to organize a rail gang, a large one, and have them in Warmińsko-Mazurski in 1 week. I will have 3 division there to protect them as they build 2 rail lines towards the front lines and continue building as they keep up with the armies. Is that understood?"

The adviser nodded and left. King Germaniski turned and headed towards his newly replaced War Wing and told the General there to shift 3 infantry divisions and 1 cavalry squadron to Warmińsko-Mazurski and protect the rail gang as they work. The General saluted and grabbed an official paper and began jotting down the orders. King Germaniski smiled, he was impressed with his new war wing, no more idiots going against what he wanted.

Meanwhile on the front lines General Rossoyavich was plagued with supply issues, his army was now spread out over 15 mile radius and supplying his army with wagons was beginning to take a toll on his drovers. To alleviate the problem, he moved 50,000 troops north towards the small army establishing defensive positions and waiting for reinforcements. The Pjolakian troops quickly overran the position with overwhelming numbers and continued north. The army was now reinforced by another 150,000 following 15 miles behind, leaving only 25,000 behind to take care of the now freed up supply lines and keeping dissent down in the various towns dotting the region. With his army moving north and staying in one line rather than spread out his supply lines began moving faster and easier without having to find the armies spread out any more. But as a result, the farther he goes the more vulnerable his lines become... and it is getting inevitable that he will have to order a halt and secure them again as Allemanian cavalry troopers have begun to wreak havoc on the lines.

Meanwhile the Pjolakian Navy has completely wiped out the Allemanian Navy save for a few warships that fled to safety of some far away port, and with the gold shipments from Taya docking at Pjolakian ports once again the Navy can rest easy and guard the shipping lines from potential pirates or another nation. But on Taya itself, war seems inevitable and Octavian knows it, he just hopes the gold mines remain in Pjolakian control and that Lord Governor Williams is up to the task.
 
As am I. I'm still trying to figure out how the heck I'll update... I can't make sense of neverwonagame's stories.

You can PM me questions on them if you like.
 
The Fateful Meeting: Part II


“Have you enjoyed your visit so far, your majesty?” Leopold casually asked, with his deep and calm voice. Knowing his life could very well end at the order of this boy king at any moment.

“Enough...we have business to discuss.” Geoffry let out a roar of his seriousness. Frustrated by the betrayal of Leopold, and the thievery he committed against the crown of Gallia.

“I suspect you're right, Geo. It has been my dubious pleasure to break your trust and contract.” he smirked. “ For seven years I served in your court and yet you break down into an outright manhunt when I decided to flee. Quite jumpy and maniacal aren't we?”

“You damn well knew your contract Vermeulen. Life times payment for lifetimes service.” Geoffry snapped back, raising his voice yet again, while maintaining his distance.

“Lifetimes payment? Your pitiful pension was nothing to brag about, I gave you more than enough teaching to suffice for your needs. My talents were required elsewhere, and my projects needed finishing.” Leopold said as he turned to the desk and picked up a notebook he had been previously scribbling in.

“You know I cannot allow you to stay here?”

“Yes, I understand, but let me assure you it will not be a simple arrest young king.”

“The more you struggle, the harsher your punishment Leopold.” Geoffry signaled his men to walk across the room and arrest the doctor.

The room was dark and the men bumped into chains hanging from the ceiling, tables and chairs, and other equipment throughout the room as they struggled to get to Leopold.

“You should watch where you step gentlemen.” Leopold said kindly.

Not a moment later one of the soldiers slipped and fell, and kept falling. The dim light of their lanterns did not show where he went as the sound of a splash came a second later. The men moved their few lanterns together to get a better look at what they were standing on. A metal grate over a large deep hole, in the bottom the sounds of splashing by the fallen man could be heard.

“What is down there?! Answer me Leopold!” Shouted the captain of the men.

“Life of man.” he calmly replied, still looking over his work.

“gug...ack..I..think...it's...gua...blood.” the voice of the man in the hole shouted back up, he must have fallen ten or twelve feet, and was still unable to touch the bottom of this deep pit of human remains, mostly blood, but chunks were in the mix.

“Doctor, what have you been doing down here?” the captain shouted.

“Research.” he replied.

“Go and get him, and watch your steps.” the captain told his men, who with sabers and musket at the ready began the walk faster over the remaining gap between them.

As they came closer to him they stopped, they had known of Boilerplate and knew of his ability to kill men. The room was still dark, he could be anywhere. As the men came slowly over to Leopold, the doctor pulled a lever next to himself, softly saying the words.

“...wake up...”
 
As am I. I'm still trying to figure out how the heck I'll update... I can't make sense of neverwonagame's stories.
Yes, not alone am I! (I admire you for going beyond two updates with it)

@Neverwonagame3: Since I've seen three different people express it (me, Masada, and Lord Iggy), I'm gonna say, at the expense of looking like a hypocrite prick: Quick rule of thumb: If a piece of writing can't be understood without its author explaining it outside itself, then it's not a very good piece of writing; after all, only God is omnipresent and memento mori and all that jazz.

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Yay! Restart, restart, restart!
 
The Fateful Meeting: Part III


Gas lights ignited and the room buzzed with the sounds of steam turbines after this lever had been pulled. Mechanical noises and clanks filtered through the room with a loud and banging echo.

“What the hell did you just do!?” Geoffry queried in a yell from behind his men.

“Give it a moment you impatient brat.” Leopold snapped.

Shocked by his tone, Geoffry rushed to his mens sides, raising their arms to make them ready to fire on and attack whatever it is that is awakening. A large metal wall near the desk of Leopold began to slide downward into the floor, revealing slowly a dark room, with something large and threatening, rumbling inside.

“What is that?” the men asked one another.

One of the soldiers impatiently fired off his musket and sent a lead bullet into the object, causing a spark and ricochet that hit the wall. Geoffry cursed his soldiers trigger finger and told him of his ignorance.

“The doctor is no fool, whatever comes out of that room is probably going to try and kill us.” Geoffry stated as plainly as possible.

The wall continued to open, revealing how tall the walls were in this room. The ceiling had to be twenty feet high and the opening only got larger. With a ramp lowering into the room itself, whatever was coming, was large. Steam released from the large object in the room, and it's chest and head lit up with flames inside it. For the first time it was revealed as to what was in there, a large humanoid machine, probably thirty feet tall, very wide and seemingly well designed.

“I know you found my diary, king.” Leopold said, raising his voice over the sounds of the machine coming alive. “You may have noticed the gap in years.”

“That I did.” Geoffry responded, not taking his eyes off the machine still hidden in the shadows.

“It should now be revealed that I am not the first Leopold Vermeulen. No, I am but the junior.”

The machine began to move, lifting it's arms side to side and finally taking a step out into the room, having to crouch to prevent hitting the stone ceiling above. The noise was loud and only magnified by the long room. Geoffry's men were terrified and fired their muskets at the large machine, causing nothing but loud dings and ricocheting bullets to fill the room. The king stepped back, his men guarded his front, sabers drawn.

“I would like to introduce you to my father.” Leopold pointed to the large machine.

“Yo..your father?” the captain asked before Geoffry could.

“Yes..” Leopold walked over to the machine and patted it's metal leg. “ My father, good ol' pops. You know he is a genius, so was my mother, may she rest in peace. They taught me everything I needed to truly develop my own mind, and become what I am now, they sparked my creativity so to say.”

Geoffry was examining the large machine, and as he did so he noticed the chest, a yellowish light glowed within. He stared at noticed through the grated, armored front the outlines of a glass ball, filled with some liquid.

“Is your fathers brain within that machine?” Geoffry asked.

“Oh, yes. This little part was mostly thanks to my mother. She experimented you see, on man hundreds of poor, unfortunate men and women. She figured out how to keep the brain alive and passed this information on to me before she died.” Leopold replied.

“Where has your father's brain been this whole time?”

“In disguise.” Leopold laughed.

“Boilerplate?”

“Right next to me all these years.” Leopold continued to laugh, as he gathered some things from his desk and packed them into a bag.

“You will not leave this place a free man Leopold.” Geoffry raised his voice in command.

“I will, or you will not leave this place a whole man.” he turned and bowed with an evil grin at the men as he grabbed his bag and walked behind his father. Climbing up on the machines back into a little standing area he had added for himself.

“Father...”

“..mmm..” the machine growled, unable to speak, but able to grunt.

“We will leave now.” Leopold calmly order his father to march out of the room, constantly ducking to keep from causing the ceiling from falling in on the place.

Geoffry had his men reload, and he too drew a pistol. The machine walked slowly towards the stairway , Leopold grabbed a chain hanging above his head on the ceiling and pulled it as they walked by. Causing the stairway to collapse and allow a large enough opening for the machine to fit.

“You will not leave.” Geoffry yelled, his men taking position to fire.

The machine did not stop, Leopold simply laughed at the thought of himself being stopped. The soldiers fired, Leopold was forced to duck and hide to keep from being shot, but the machine was not phased. It walked on, and when within range of the men it's mighty arms swung and clubbed half of them away. Geoffry rolled to the side and hid behind a table as his men were ravaged and tossed. The machine made it's way to the exit having killed or injured a majority of the men.

Leopold turned around in his standing area, waving and laughing at his defeated foes. Just at this time, as the machine stepped out of the room and to the open night air of the garden, Geoffry came out of his hiding and raised his pistol. Firing a single shot into the chest of Leopold, who grabbed his chest and sank backwards into the metal bucket he stood in. The machine kept walking, and escaped.

Geoffry aided his men, three were alive, the captain was half dead with his arms and ribs broken. Geoffry looked down at his faithful soldier saying in a reassuring voice.

“I got him.”

But the machine continued it's march across the countryside, who knows what has come of Leopold Vermeulen.
 
I would continue with SteamNES, been thinking of a storyline for Felix all day yesterday, but kept getting interrupted by people trying to talk to me... like friends or teachers... sheesh, what's with all this social interaction all of a sudden?!
 
Ruben stood before the King. He mentaly chided himself. What am I thinking? This is just a prototype! I still have problems with the loading mechanism and finding the best material for the glass! However, outwardly his cool, short and thin figure seemed to spread authority outward into the soldiers and regular scientists in the court yard.

It was quiet.

The King spoke, "You have sent to me about this... machine that would allow us to use warships to fight on land, correct?"

Ruben bowed low, "Yes, mylord, but only one type. This, I present you the Land Ship MkI. It is but the inking of our future possible. See here, the outside: curved through days of calculation to bounce off most basic projectiles used by other sparks. Under here you can see the wheels. They are powered with a steam engine on land and at the sea, transforms into screws to propell this."

He spread his hands on the armour. Then he picked up a wheel from his Repair Box.

"Here is an example. Although primative compared to others, this is good enough to carry all of this," he smooths the Land Ship, "Ammuniton enough to down many battle ships, a crew and rations for a few months. Yet it also is strong enough to keep it in the surface of the water."

The King nodded. He knew that their greatest and about only strength is their Navy. In war he can see that he would use his navy to clear theirs away, and then use these ... machines... to push to attack on the homeland.

"Finally, here are the cannons. Because I was running out of funds I invented an Wood and Iron Piercing design that is light and contain a Stable Guncotten fuse that will blow up after inside a ship. This is a Shrapnel shell, and is packed with small pieces of light steel. And finally, protection. The armour is strong and durable, but I need more funds not only to find bettet materials but hire men to help me build and calculate some of the less complicated but more fusterating tasks, as well as help keeping. Together we can return this Kingdom to Greatness."

The King looked deep into Ruben Hans's eyes. He saw that the inventer also saw a great future, but he also saw... a spark of genious... He smiled: today will be the day that his dynasty will rise again. He stood up, "I accept your request for funds. I want to buy 5 MkIs by the end of the season and allow you to hire members of the Mechanics Guild."

As he walked away, the King though once again his good forturne... Amen
 
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