Swansong Angel
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LMR
Back In Green!
Looks pretty good for a first unit odin 
One suggestion to make the attacks look better would be to make him straighten his arm as he punches, instead of him swinging his bent arm like that. other than that, it looks good
congrats on the first unit
One suggestion to make the attacks look better would be to make him straighten his arm as he punches, instead of him swinging his bent arm like that. other than that, it looks good
congrats on the first unit
Lord Malbeth
Emperor
YES!!! More angels! Ya-hoo!! Thank you sooooo much.
Stormrage
Ever Present Taskmaster
Well, I`m not Bjorn but I have some remarks:
1. death - he slides into the ground..
2. the attacks are a bit stiff, like he changes his mind right before he strikes but its to late
3. the wings are the main problem, I`d say. They look really, really fake.
You got the running and the victory animations great (minus wings), tho!
All in all, a 6/10 for a first unit. That means good, btw
1. death - he slides into the ground..
2. the attacks are a bit stiff, like he changes his mind right before he strikes but its to late
3. the wings are the main problem, I`d say. They look really, really fake.
You got the running and the victory animations great (minus wings), tho!
All in all, a 6/10 for a first unit. That means good, btw
odintheking
Lighting the way...
Yeah, that death was a bloody nightmare to animate. I plan to revisit the attacks and death, soon, . Thanks for input, everyone!
. Thanks for input, everyone!
CC-2224
Look! A Chicken!
Very nice for a first unit, Odin.
I agree with Stormrage, the wings look fake.
I agree with Stormrage, the wings look fake.
Stormy and CC, maybe the wings are fake?
odintheking
Lighting the way...
Fake as in there is no texture, or fake as in they don't move enough?
Partizanac
Serbian Ambassador in CFC
Here's the preview hope you like it...
CC-2224
Look! A Chicken!
Fake as in no texture. Give them some feathers and they'll be fine.
Otherwise this an awesome unit.
Otherwise this an awesome unit.
Stormrage
Ever Present Taskmaster
Actually, I think they don`t move enough. And the way they are spread all the time makes them look unnatural. And they are to small IMO. Didn`t kinboat make a perfectly good Wings prop that he and Shiro used for their angels?
Spacer One
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I agree that the wings are to stiff, but otherwise I like it...Good Job Odin
NavyDawg
Audentes Fortuna Iuvat
Odin,
Zeppelin rules! And a unit inspired by them is immensely creative. Overall, I like it, and for a first unit it's great.
If you want a little more movement in the attack, change some values on the PDM hip:
y value - Drop him down
z value - Move him forward
Again, great first unit and I look forward to seeing your next one.
Zeppelin rules! And a unit inspired by them is immensely creative. Overall, I like it, and for a first unit it's great.
If you want a little more movement in the attack, change some values on the PDM hip:
y value - Drop him down
z value - Move him forward
Again, great first unit and I look forward to seeing your next one.
Stormrage
Ever Present Taskmaster
@ Quinn - i think Kinboat`s wings are much bigger..
odintheking
Lighting the way...
Ok, I'll add some wing movement in, and fix the attacks, . Thank you, Par, that was nice of you, .
. Thank you, Par, that was nice of you, .
la_dav
King
Great unit!!
Partizanac
Serbian Ambassador in CFC
No problem, just ask if you need anything...
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