Hi there, this is my second attempt at a story on this forum. Unfortunately, I had to stop my last story because the save file became corrupted, and after many unsuccesful tries to "uncorrupt" it, I gave up and started a new game. This game will be based on playing Egypt on the 18 Civs Earth map, and I intend to make it as interesting as possible. I am playing on Noble Difficulty, being the shocking player that I am, and screenshots WILL be included. The Story of 18 Civs the Egyptian Version 4000BC The Egyptian Queen Hatshepsut and her advisors are seated in the Royal Tent HATSHEPSUT: Right, you idiots, shut up and listen. Apparently were founding a new civilization today. Khalid Miye (Expansion and Exploration advisor) Cool! HATSHEPSUT: Did I SAY it was cool? KHALID: No, but . . . HATSHEPSUT: Then shut up. KHALID: Sorry. HATSHEPSUT: You will be when Ive finished painfully removing your brains and sculpting them into a weapon with which I will KILL you. Scythe Aten (Military Advisor) Ha Ha Ha! That was a good one! HATSHEPSUT: Of course, I could do the same to Scythe, if he had any brains. SCYTHE: Wait a minute . . . Erm, you didnt just insult me, did you? HATSHEPSUT: Why, of course not, Scythe dear. SCYTHE: Oh. Fair enough then. Ay Caramba: (Religion and Culture advisor): To get back to the point . . . HATSHEPSUT: Yes, I think we will. Khalid, show me our starting position.