The Zeitgeist

The Zeitgeist

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Note from the Author​
This is my very first post on these Forums. I've lurked since forever, and I've always loved the stories around here. I hope that I can contribute something moderately worthwhile. I hope to learn from this experience and contribute more stuff more often.

Settings​
Seed: 45164587
"Large" world size
"Normal" Climate
"Temperate" Temperature
4-Billion year old world
60% Water
Continents

Civ Selected: Iroquois
Opponents: Japan, Egypt, Russia, America, Rome, China, Greece, Babylon, Germany, England, and India.
Difficulty: Regent (Yeah, I know I suck at Civ., lay off. :P I'll try and make up for it in the storytelling)
Conquest, Domination, Space-Race, Diplomatic, and Cultural victories are enabled. Nothing else.
All other non-specified settings default.

Oh, I'm playing on C3C.

Introduction​
Alrighty. I'll briefly step out of my Narrator role to tell you seriously what I'm playing by right here.

I'll be following essentially DaftPanzer's rules for his "Celtic Peacekeepers", which was my main inspiration for this. In line with the Iroquois code to preserve Humanity from the fires of war, I will "Preserve Diversity" by protecting as many civilizations as possible from destruction at essentially any cost. Yes, I'll cut down trees. Sorry. :P

Moreover, I'll be trying for no victory in particular. In fact, I won't be trying to win. I will only attempt to stop the destruction of Nations at all costs. This is a "Peacekeeper" Game. However, this is only my initial goal. You may see some drifting in purpose as the game progresses...That should keep things very interesting.

Now, I'll update as much as I can. Feel free to post in this topic: Links to individual updates will be put in this post, and posted in this thread naturally.

I sincerely hope ya'll enjoy this. Remember: It's my first stab at this. Criticism is more than welcome: It's encouraged! Well, so long as it's constructive. :P

The Story, Compiled Nicely

1) The Age of Establishment
2) The Age of Exploration
 
The Age of Establishment​

At 4000 BC, many tribes succumbed to evolution and stopped migrating, thus establishing the first civilizations. The Iroquois took 50 more years to fully cease their migrations. They are a spirited peoples, and this will help them in the future.

After their wanderings, they continued to settle and grow their land. By 3300 BC, they had established the land as their own, using dyes as abundant luxuries and exerting their influence twice as far into the as-of-yet unconquered wilderness.

Iroquois3300BC.jpg


This period was known as the Age of Establishment, when the Iroquois looked within to still the wild nature in themselves to a more civilized and useful degree. They were a wise peoples in this respect. The Despotism grew in sophistication, and Religion was established with the completion of a Temple in 3000 BC.

Iroquois3300BCTempleEstablishment.jpg


Still, times changed slowly in this initial phase of the Iroquois. The uniqueness of the people had not yet publicly manifested itself. It's dormant nature was deceptive. The King slept in a cave, announced his will on top of a rock, ruled by force of stone hammers. The people slept in mud, listened to his will from the dirt, and followed by the force of many hammers.

But times change. A new age was to be upon the Iroquois soon enough.

Sorry for the shortness, but I didn't want to bore you. The next one will be longer, better written, and generally more awesome. I just wanted get something out when I started the story, as well as get some background in before I start talking about the awesomeness that shall ensue soon. Hope you like it sort of thus far. :D
 
OK, I've already got some things in mind to fix things a bit. I'm going to crop and resize the photos a bit, and edit them to have some of the cooler things that are present in other picture-involved stories like Conich's and Daftpanzer's. Don't you worry, things are going to get way better really fast.

Hope some people still browse this section. :P
 
Welcome to CFC! [party]

Wow, I was just about to suggest the picture cropping. It really helps the readability if we don't have to scroll back and forth. If you ever need a full-size picture, please spoiler it. I'll be following this.
 
Awesome.....Will watch with interest...:goodjob:
 
The Age of Exploration

The Iroquois people now had a temple, a Religion. It was based upon the stars, their movements, and their constellations and clusters. They also felt a mandate to one day travel to these points of light, with the hope of ascending into a higher order of the Universe.

venus_sky.jpg


With this new Religion, the king's power seemed slightly disturbed by a new order: The Priests. They were currently without power, but nonetheless tensions were started. Eventually there would be a collision.

But for now the Iroquois were lead by their current king, Fine Star, to begin the process of exploring the wilderness around them. Their first outreaches to a nearby settlement called "Xatclao", in 2590 BC, resulted in immediate hostilities.

Iroquois2590BCDisturbance.jpg


The King was not discouraged, however, and continued to command his scouts to examine their area, despite his first unit taking heavy losses from an offensive on the Guerilla Fighters from Xatclao. Nonetheless, the hostiles were quelled after a relatively long campaign. By 2110 BC, another village was found. It was decided by King "Great Lake" to enter it, despite the results of the first outreach, with the newly created Iroquois Council backing the move.

Iroquois2110BCAnotherVillage.jpg


The Iroquois Council was a body that resembled a Republic; residents of Iroquoim, the only current population center of the Iroquois Kingdom, were chosen to be the most favored persons in the now bustling city of 112,000 by the population through shows of approval on pieces of tree bark. Only the men were allowed to "vote". The Men then threw their barks at the feet of the man who wished to be part of the council. If he stood tall amidst any collisions, and had a larger pile than at least one of the existing councilmen, he replaced the councilmen with the least biggest pile.

EMMidsummerDruids.jpg


In any case, the Scouting Party of the King soon entered the village. To their surprise, the locals were friendly, and moreover were so impressed by the Scouting Party that they taught them their own "Code of Warriors", or "Warrior Code". In return, the Scouting Party sent a small group of their warriors to bring the eager villagers to Iroquoim, which they would join. To honor them, and this occasion, the Iroquois no longer called themselves "The Iroquoim Kingdom"; now, they were "The Iroquoim Confederation".

Iroquois2070BCWarriorCode.jpg


Beyond this point, Iroquois expansion took a predictable path. In 1950 BC the population of Iroquoim reached over 150,000, and the Council system was disbanded due to some very nasty splinters suffered by successful Councilmen. In 1910 BC, the first fleet was built, and began to explore the waters of the world. And by 1675 BC the world looked like this:

Iroquois1675BCMiniMap.jpg


The second city of the Iroquois Confederation was established very near the site of the Apache Tribe's former village. Many of their descendants ventured as part of the First Establishment Party of the King, to return to their ancient homeland.

Iroquois1600BCSettlers.jpg


The city was officially established in 1550 BC. Work quickly began on a Temple of the Stars. Through their supervising of the effort, the Religious leaders of Iroqouim grew stronger.

Iroquois1550BCNACcloseup.jpg


On a side note, in 1525 the people of Iroquoim surprised their current King, King Trinztzoal, with a flight of new stairs to his cave dwelling as a birthday present.

Iroquois1550BCPalaceupgrade.jpg


Two other cities were established from 1550-1225 BC:

Eearth Mouti - 1375 BC
Great River - 1300 BC

A third, Colored Stream, was planned to be established along the banks of a River called, what else, Colored Stream for it's dyes that occasionally leaked into the river, causing spectacular, and non-toxic, colors to blossom in it's waters.

These expansionist policies lead to a certain independence amongst the various cities, as in truth the King could not himself rule all the cities. Thus he appointed Governors to the cities. Because of this, the King's power weakened, and scholars began to ponder how a world without a king might be ruled. Thus the idea of a Republic took it's roots.

This time was also ripe with hostilities. In 1300 BC the Iroquois Confederation discovered a hostile tribe in the North. They soon began to rally together forces to destroy this threat to expansion.

Iroquois1300BCBarbarianThreat.jpg


The Iroquois Archery Order (IAO) was created in 1250 BC. Their primary task was to eliminate the Barbarian Threat that existed in the North, and their first operation was to venture north to defeat the direct threat of the Barbarian Camp.

But the Barbarians did not wait. The Scouts that discovered the camp were attacked by Horsemen and Warriors viciously. However, they were driven back with only moderate losses on the part of the scouts.

BarbarianAttacksClipped.jpg


The word of the victory spread, and efforts were spirited as the Confederacy began to train the IAO. But other news was to eclipse this minor victory in battle.
 
Nice!
Pictures could be (but not should be) bit bigger, but looks nice, to me, but I am no professional story reader either.
Thing I noticed is that you space your cities quite far apart, planning to fill gaps later?
 
Thanks. Sorry for the inconsistent sizes sometimes for random reasons, I was still figuring it out and I'm too lazy to go back and fix them. :P

Like I said, I'm no professional Civ player, but I like to let my cities have optimum space for growth. Seizes the most land possible and makes sure that I get the most out of my cities. It does take a fair share longer than normal though. Plus, I'm building Temples fairly early, so I'll Culture-expand soon enough.
 
I'm anticipating great things. :)
 
:bump:

This story ain't dead. I'll be updating in less than a week; next Saturday is when my Finals end. After that, It'll be daily updates for awhiles.

Thank you to those of you who have expressed interest in this story; means a lot. :D I'll be continuing, don't worry. It's only a week! :P
 
Wha?

I hate photobucket now. How did that happen?

EDIT: Nevermind. I think that's one of the google images ones I loaded up. Wow, they're kinda dickish for doing that. If they didn't want it used, could've asked Google to take it down. Gese.

EDIT2: Fixed w/ a better pic. Note to self: Copy down pictures and rehost to Photobucket before using. Some people are angry chipmunks. O_o
 
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