To The Sea: The Story of a Culture

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My people came from the shores of lake Firaxis, in the shadow of Hook Mountain and its hills. Once, the surrounding countryside, now farmland and strip-mines, was covered with forest. The River Jartes trickled down from The Hook, running into the uncharted north and west when my people settled down and formed the city now known as Persepolis. In honor of the tribal leader, Xerxes, that unified the tribe and founded the city, it was decreed that ALL leaders of our people pay him homage, and take Xerxes as their name.

After the city grew, Xerxes IX heard the cry of the people: "It's way too crowded," they said. "Go forth," said Xerxes, "and seek out the metal the alchemists call 'iron,' because for it I have a plan. With this metal, this great land of Persia will be immortal, and we shall looked upon as the greatest people in the world." So it was done, and half of the city departed, to seek iron in the hills we had explored to the north. After some searching, they found the metal, and brought it to Xerxes.

He said, "A strong metal, one that might be useful somehow. See that it is given to all the warriors that require it."

The generals dispensed it to the warriors. They fashioned it into sharp blades that would cut through the leather of the barbarians, and even wreck the bronze of our spearmen. Xerxes IX was right, despite what the scholars said. This metal WOULD make Persia immortal. And so the warriors with this new metal were called, in honor of Xerxes IX, The Immortals.

But Xerxes IX was mocked by the scholars that compiled the history of the world. They called our people "The Forgotten," "The Pathetic," "The Hopless." The people they lauded were the Babylonians, our neighbors to the north.

Only a short distance from where the Persian Penninsula meets the mainland was the heart of the awesome and advanced Babylon. Their tribe called their king "Hammurabi." The Babylonian people practiced a strange religion, and formed what they called "The Oracle." Their scholars were writing just as we bought the concept of an alphabet from the Zulu, led by Chief Shaka. But the Babylonian workers were lazy and slow, lacksadaisical and sloppy.

Our workers were effecient, and reported directly to Xerxes himself. For the honor of constant consultation with the emporer, they built roads, cleared the forest, tamed the land with a speed no one--not even the Babylonians--could match.

Meanwhile our cities grew in number. One group of people wanted to settle a single hill on the shores of Lake Laymon, on a pencil-thin strip of land seperating the lake from the sea, near where the River Jartes emptied. The generals were undecided. They sought Xerxes' consultation.

At that time, mighty Babylon stretched across the continent, threatened to confine my people to the Peninnsula. Xerxes looked at his maps of the world, saw the cities of Hammurabi expanding both west and south. There was another penninsula across the sea, connected to the Persian penninsula by the land bridge at the shores of Lake Laymon. Xerxes ordered a city built on the hill, fortified with spearmen and walls. The generals made sure it was impenitrable, and developed catapults to bombard and wound any advancing enemies before they got a chance to reach the gates. Bronze-shielded spearmen and iron-bladed Immortals were garrisoned there in number. They called the city Tarsus--from the ancient Persian word for "key," tarsi, because Tarsus was our key to the rest of the continent. It would be defended until the last man, if necessary.

With Tarsus built, Xerxes XII studied the maps his father and grandfather had left him. Again, he saw the Babylonian empire expanding at a phenominal rate. They sere settling at the edge of the desert to the north of Lake Laymon. They were setting further north, to the reaches of a penninsula that was many lifetimes of walking away from Persepolis. Xerxes XII's eyes glazed, and saw into the future--the furthest reaches of the continent filled with cities, all flying the Persian flag of green.

"We will stand on those hills to the frozen north as Persians, and fish in the north sea," he said. The generals stared at each other blankly. Was Xerxes speaking from within a hashish dream? Had the twelfth grandson of our tribe's unifier spent time in the floodplains, and contracted some sort of reality-severing disease? Mighty Babylon had effectively blocaded the continent and prevented any northward expansion. The only unclaimed lands were to the west, on the lower portion of the penninsula across from where Hook Mountain loomed, and the River Jartes flowed.

"Go there," Xerxes XII (whom scholars of the day called "Xerxes The Mad" behind his back) commanded. "Settle the grasslands. Settle the floodplains, damn the disease--make our cities there as large as they can be. Ferry over workers from here with our galleys, and complete the great lighthouse. And--above all--comission more Immortals, for soon, we will need them."
 
Xerxes XII drowned at age twenty-eight--quite an old man in his time--and his son, aged eleven, was crowned Xerxes XIII. The magi fretted and bit their nails. Surely, thirteen was unlucky, and young Xerxes's taking of the throne was a portent of ill omen.

While the settlers and spearmen gushed out of the cities to claim the lands in the southwest of the continent, young Xerxes studied the arts of ruling, and was our country's first philosipher. Where the historians called his father "Xerxes The Mad" for his comment about fishing in the north sea, Xerxes XII was called "Xerxes The Learned," at the beginning, for the boy-king perfected that art of Philosiphy, as well as that of construction, and wrote the first recorded code of laws for our great empire. Almost overnight, after the laws were written, a new theory of religion was founded--Monothiesm. Xerxes began to study a new concept called Feudalism, and began to think that the iron used in the blades of the Immortals could be refashioned into defensive purposes as well. He consulted his Overlord General, who said that, compared to both Babylon and Zululand, we had a strong military.

He ordered the scholar that coined the "Xerxes The Mad" term about his father to his palace. He was brought in, under guard.

"When my father, Xerxes XII--may Sumer prise and keep him--spoke of going to the sea, you called him mad, am I correct?"

The scholar raised his face, and knelt, for such was the law penned by this boy-king before he answered. "Yes, Great One, it was I. But consult the maps! Babylon expands there still, where we are confined to these lower lands. Surely, you can see the, erm.. arrogance... of his statement."

Just then the General Overlord came rushing into Xerxes' antechamber. He dropped to one knee and slid across the polished marble floor, bumping the scholar onto this side. "My lord!" he said. "We have done as you decreed, with help from our Great Library. The iron has been made into a thing like a spear, but sturdier. We call it a 'pike.' Our defenses nearly match the attack of our Immortals."

"See to it, General Overlord, that there are Pikemen in place throughout the empire. My personal treasury is at your complete disposal."

"Yes, my leige," the General said, and rushed to the exit to see this was done.

Moments later, an envoy from Babylon arrived. The diplomat was dressed in red velvet with gold brocade, a symbol of his station, and handed Xerxes XIII a missive from his king, Hammurabi.

"Child-king Xerxes," the letter began. "Bequeath to this envoy your world map, and a sum of one hundred fifty gold pieces, or face my wrath."

Young Xerxes turned to the diplomat. "Are you, sir, aware of the contents of this letter?"

"I know only that I am to bring something back to the embassy to pass on to Hammurabi, Xerxes. My orders were to bring a cart. It is outside, with two escorts. They await instruction as well."

"I see," said Xerxes, and rose from his throne. He walked over to his personal Elite Immortal guard, and requested his sword. Shocked, the guard handed it over.

"Your king," Xerxes began, "apparently request a demonstration of the power of the Persian blade. Will you bear witness for him?"

"Of course," said the diplomat.

"Excellent. Now. Kneel."

"Excuse me?"

"Kneel, Babylonian lout! I am Xerxes! Ruler of Persia, and you, sir, are in my palace. Hammurabi is far, far away from here. Here, *I* rule. Now, kneel."

Shaken, the diplomat dropped to his knees.

Xerxes raised the blade in front of the diplomat's face. "See how it shines? Reflects the light? See the keen edge?"

"Y-yes..." the diplomat stammered.

"You!" he said to the scholar, who thought he was forgotten. "Bow your head."

The scholar's face dropped toward the floor his yes shut tight, squeezing out a tear of cowardice and terror.

"Witness the Persian blade," said Xerxes, and with a two-handed downstroke, cleft the head of the traitor scholar cleanly from his shoulders. The scholar's arteries sprayed as the corpse crumpled, drenching the diplomat in blood.

"Do you see its superiority?" Xerxes asked.

The diplomat stared at him with open-mouthed shock, unable to speak. After a moment, he managed to nod.

"Good. Now, a demonstration for your Hammurabi," said Xerxes, and raised the blade high. The diplomat's scream echoed in the marble halls for longer than his heart beat.

"Remove this mess from my sight," Xerxes said, pointing to the headless corpse of the scholar. Four attendants rushed to do his bidding. They also began to remove the diplomat's body.

"Wait," Xerxes said, with an evil grin. "Remove his robe. I have an idea."

*

The guards by the diplomat's cart fidgeted nervously. Diplomatic escort missions rarely took this long. They were approached by a boy carrying a dripping red bag. Neither knew this lad, clothed in expensive green silk, was the leader of Persia.

"Where is the diplomat, boy?" One of the guards asked.

"We're to bring back a gift from Xerxes to Babylon.

"A gift," Xerxes said, smiling. "But of course. Here is your gift. Take it to Hammurabi directly. I eagerly await his response."

He handed them the bag fashioned out of the dilplomat's robes, and in it, saw the yawning mouth, the opened, dead eye staring back at them. In the diplomat's mouth was a note:

"Hammurabi--

"Take your empty threats elsewhere.

"Best,

"Xerxes."


The Babylonians as was expected, declared war.
 
A few typos, but hey--I'm not getting paid for this. If you dig, let me know. Otherwise, I won't waste the bandwidth.

Later!

--The Clown to the Left
 
Great story, one of the best I've read on these forums; very well written. Continue!
 
Very nice!
 
An excellent story to date. I look forward to your next installment, the upcoming war with Babylon. If the Babylonians have not figured out pikes, I am sure Xerxes's troops will drive the point home!
 
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