We FIGHT TO DEFEND OUR ISLAND WWI story

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In 1914 World war I broke out (WWI) It was the biggest war the world had seen (until WW2) and it was tearing Europe apart. We see instead of the countries that fight in it the troops. thanks to the dude who created the WWI Scenrio :).

Chapter 1 Welcome to your Tour of duty

This covers the Fox company ( not the real 1 the fictional 1) a British regiment here are its members...

pvt Dole (inf)
pvt hacklens (inf)
pvt Ryan (inf)
pvt Richordson (inf)
pvt davidson (inf)
pvt Willson (inf)
Sgt Banon (inf)
Sgt Hawkens (inf)
Sgt Willams (inf)
pvt hersal (cav)
Pvt Robison (cav)
LT Caralston (cav)

Augest Month 1: The troops were saying their good byes to their families most of them came from London except for Hacklens and Banon who came from Scotland. They borded the transport bound for Calais for defence of the city from German or Austrian Attack.

September Month 2: Moving Out Fox company along with an artilery piece had a new objective. The Belgium Capital Brussles was in a possition to be attacked by German Troops. fox company borded a train and got to brussles and was needed to. half of the garrison was Wounded or killed. the Foxes saw the first realities of war and there would be more to come

3rd Month October : After artilery barrage the cannon was captured and it was Fox companies mission to capture or kill the troops who had destroied it. in the middle of the fight victory was near they found out only 1 troop was in there but in the charge to finish him Pvt Dole Was Shot in the head and died on impact . then when Sgt Willams charged the lone soildger he was shot in the leg but surrvied. it was pvt Wilson who killed the lone soildger. but the damage was done Fox company had lost its first unit. he was burried near brussels.
 
Chapter 2: Diggin the trenches yet?

Month 4 November: An attack was lanched by the Germans on brussels and fox company helped defended it. The First wave was easy to defeat. only Sgt Banon broke his arm but the second wave was the hardest. The artirlery gun that the British was useing was jammed. and the Germans Grabed their bannets and charged the trenches. Sgt Howlens was stabed in the lung and suffcated on his own blood. :ack: Then pvt Davidson was shot in the head and then stabed in the leg and died. And finaly Pvt Hackens was stabed 3 times in the heart then Pvt Ryan shot 2 of the 3 germans and Corpral Caralston killed the last german. This was the hugest lost Fox company has suffered so far Sgt Howlens was sent to London to be Buried. Pvt Hackens was sent back to Scotland. and Pvt Davidson was buried near Paris.

Month 5 December: After the failed attack on Brussels The Germans moved their troops south to attack Reims. Fox company was sent to Reims to defend the city. When they have arrived the French were planing a counter attack. the Artierly pice was damaged badly But they killed the whole division with out a single Causualty. And Fox Company had their first Christmas together :xmas:


Month 6 January: :newyear: Pvt Doles Replacement had arrived Pvt Jackis from Scotland but now New order had came from high command for the first Allied Offencive of the War. To attack the city of Brenen thats German Held
 
Chapter 3 The Attack and The Counter attack

Month 7 Febuary - the troops have decied to vist Brussels to visit an old friend. Remember Pvt Dole was burried near brussels.

Month 8 March- The troops borded a transport to go to Brenmen. Sgt Willams had goten a promotion after he had fully recovered and was promoted to LT.

Month 9 April- Fox Company Renderzeous neared Brenmen planing the final stages for the attack. Next Month they would assault the city

Month 10 May- After 2 Troop Divitions had failed to capture the city it was FOXES Turn to try. after geting into the trenches . the troops threw their grenades at the remaining troops. But one Solidger survied and shoot Pvt ryan in the leg cuting his blood Arteries. The one solidger that shot him died of blood loss. Ryan dint survive the night



Month 11 june: Germans Counter attack the city! Starting with a artlery barage the barage killed pvt Hersal. then the assault Germans came Chargeing with their bannets stabed Pvt Jakis and pvt Richardson. Then shots fired at Corpral Coralston hiting him in the head and heart killing him.
then Pvt Nussmantic's horse is shot from under him and he is shot along with the horse. And the last member to be killed is Banon who was hit with a grenade tearing off his face then stabed in the eye. Only 3 members survived LT. Willams, Pvt willson, and Pvt Richardson. The survivers retreated to Amsterdam For reinforcements and Replacements......
 
Hi, This is looking to be a great story. 2 things though, 1st your spelling could use some work and 2nd could you include brief 1 or 2 sentence summeries about wats happening, like not in story mode?
 
Chapter 4 Replacements

WWN (world war news) The Battles in the ottoman Empire are going great with the capture of Jerusalm. and we reaserch Submarines. Elevated :mad: in cities because of the war

Month 11 July: The New troops met with the Old Fox company and Davidson and Wilson are promoted to Sgt. This is the new Roster

Pvt Dackleson (inf) London
Pvt Dublinman (inf) Northern Ireland
Sgt Jackis (inf) Scotland
Pvt Tuder (inf) Wales
Pvt Lloyd (inf) London
Sgt. Benadict (inf) London
Pvt. Jameston (inf) London
Pvt. Smith (inf) London
Sgt. Jones (inf) London
LT. Willams (Cav) London
Sgt. Davidson (Cav) London
Sgt. Wilson (Cav) London

Month 12 Augest: Fox Company Returns Back to Brussels to protect against another German/Austrian attack and it has been 1year since Lt. Willams, Sgt. Davidson, and Sgt. Wilson have been at War.

Month 13 September: Fox company is still waiting in Bruessels and enjoying the culture of the city.

Month 14 October: The Push back- Fox company was ordered to push a enemy out of the Brushling forest outside of Bruessels. Half way into the forest a German Cavary charged them. They scrambled for cover behind trees and boulders. The Cav managed to get close enough to Pvt. Tuder to engadge in h2h combat (hand to hand). Tuder used his gun has a defence but it wasnt enough the german cut through the gun and sliced open Tuders head. Then Sgt. Jones Charges the Cav with his Bannet and stabes the german in the Hip then stabes his horse causeing the german to fall on a Sharp rock impaleing him.

Month 15 November: A Second Wave of Germans and Austrians Arived outside of the city. fox company would be partnered with Hawk company. fox attacked the Austrians while Hawk Company assulted the German Artilery. Fox made it almost to the French side of the forest looking for the Enemy. When BOOM An Ambush poped up and A shell went flying though the air and killing a member of Hawk company by blowing up half of his body. The troops scrambled for cover while the Austrian Infantry opened fire and killed Pvt Jameston by shooting him twice in the head. Luckly Sgt Jacknis was very skilled at Forest ambushes and though a Grenade right in the lap of the Austrian killing the attacking division. Then Hawk company easy made it to the artilary piece and destroyed it

Month 16 Deceber: Sgt Jones Was Promoted for his actions in Brusling Forest and was promoted to Lt. Then The troops moved out to attack a German Cav divison near Reims Except for Sgt. Jones and Pvt Smith. they were attacked still in their Train Car and the cav charged them but they easly killed 2 of them by makeing their horses trip on each other then get run over by the train. but one of the horsemen though a grenade in the window in the middle of pvt Dackleson, Pvt Dublinman, and Sgt jacknis. Pvt dackleson sacrificed himself and dived on the grenade blowing a hole though him. Sgt Jacknis then shot the horseman off his horse and cracking his back on the ground. They are ordered to defend Reims. They have their 2nd christmas in reims.:xmastree:

Month 17 Jan: :newyear: Sgt Jacknis is promoted for bravery on the train. they decided to bury the dead in Reimis.
 
Chapter 5 New Friends and still in the trenches

As the war went on it became apperant that a profesional army wouldnt be enough so Britain began Conscription. And more troops came to battle

Month 18: Pvt Jameston's replacement had arrived his name is pvt Mcdonald plus two Cav Divisons were added to Fox company
Pvt McArther London
Pvt Hilton London
Sgt Carlston Wales
Pvt Dames Wales
Pvt Redfield wales
Sgt Norrington London

The new divisons and Sgt Jones squad attack a german cav north of them.
It was a clear field the Fox cavs charged at the German cavs. but the germans did a tacitcal retreat and got behind Sgt jones squad they were stuck behind a rock then got into h2h combat Pvt Smith got his arm cut off and then stabed in the neck. then Pvt Mcdonald was stabed Horribly but could survive the attack. then Sgt Jones was able to kill the cav he was fighting by stabing his horse causing him to fall and brake his back. Then he pulled out his pistol and shot the other 2 germans.



Month 19 March: All of Fox company regroped in Brussels. Pvt Mcdonald was sent home to his family in Scotland. Fox company was stationed their to defend again against a supposed German assault

Month 20 April: the Troops were still in brussels still borad as ever and wishing for something to do other than wait in trenches. very rarely they were let out to party in the town.
 
ill get the next update tomarrow. oh and plaese leave Replys they are Appreciated
EDIT: i might acutually get it up today
 
Chapter 6 From the trenches to Austria
WWN: Italy joins the Allies

Month 21 May: German Forces surrend the city of bruessels were Fox company is placed . Pvt Smiths replacement had arrive his name pvt Arco.

Month 22 June: Germans Assault the city. Fox company mans their possitions and start fireing. But the germans brought friends the Austrians. the Austrians assaulted with lightning speed and got to where Pvt dublinman and Sgt jacknis were dug in. with great aggilaty the 3 austrians stab pvt Dublinman in the neck causeing him to choke on his own blood :eek: Sgt jacknis got out his pistol and shot 1 of the austrians but they quickly stabed him in the Stomch and he dies of blood loss. Sgt jones shoots both of the Austrians by shooting them in the head and Face. but a german artilery barage kills Sgt jones by blowing half of his legs and his face. :eek: . Pvt lyod and Sgt benidict were both assaulted right after the barage and both shot in the head, stomic and heart before dieing. Then Pvt Arco pops up from his foxhole and kills all 3 of the cav.the remining Germans retreat back to their trenches.


Month 23 July: The troops stage a counter attack and charge the Trenches pvt arco is immetatly killed by being shot in the leg then when he was on his knees he was shot in the head. the Fox cav would have to save the day. Sgt Willson got right next to the German cav who had shot Arco and choped off his head. then Pvt hilton shot one of the german cavs in the leg and made them fall off his horse Sgt Norington than Ran over the soildger and the german was trampled to death. the last german cav was hit with Sgt Carlston's grenade and it blew up right on his horse blowing up the top part of the horse then the german's guts were all over the field.

Month 24 Augest: The troops recovered in Brussels. Lt Williams got news that their wont be replacements for sometime and to move out of bruessels and report to Brushing forest for Sentry duty. it has been 2 years that Lt. willams, Sgt Wilson , and Sgt Davidson have been at war.

Month 25 September: the troops begin their sentry duty. they almost never see a single person except themselfs. Then LT Willams got new orders they were going to Austria

Month 26 November: The cav move south on train to Milan, Italy for the new front and a new ally
 
Your images in photobucket (or at least most of your images if they're all are hosted in PB,) aren't showing up well.
And by that I mean, "they ain't showin' up!" It may be just me, but if it isn't i'd suggest using something else to host.
 
It has been like a day and no one as even post in this thread... or even in this forum (not counting SGS)
 
Great story so far! Just a suggestion, but try and put different pictures up. By different, I mean pictures that don't have your units fighting against enemy units. Other than that, you're doing great!
 
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