What a fantastic story. Indeed, I have been like a kid anxiously anticipating the next episode of his favorite television program.
Coinich, it was incredibly good tale of war, suspenseful intrigue, and human tregedy and hope. I salute you.
I love the areas where you told the personal aspects of the indivdual solders during combat. You got really in their minds. I can feel the apprehension, and the courage as they face the situations that they found themselves in.
Also, I absolutely love the realistic view from the World leaders, a nice touch there.
I thank you for the story and will patiently wait for the next story.
JayW.
Coinich, it was incredibly good tale of war, suspenseful intrigue, and human tregedy and hope. I salute you.
I love the areas where you told the personal aspects of the indivdual solders during combat. You got really in their minds. I can feel the apprehension, and the courage as they face the situations that they found themselves in.
Also, I absolutely love the realistic view from the World leaders, a nice touch there.
I thank you for the story and will patiently wait for the next story.
JayW.



It's been one of my favourite threads to read while I've been on CFC, so thank you for writing this amazing fiction (Or is it real? Who knows..)

I posted my first post here and followed right to the end. Hope you do write again and that RL gives you a little time to do so. If it does how about a PM giving the details.

and now


i just didn't know his name