The Celestial Bureaucracy

Ichor Gifts are probably Quintessence, which the Mages of oWOD use as their power source.

Not very correct this time, but I'll unveil some stuff in future chapters.
Think outside of Mage; I did mention there are other influences.
Also, Bai cannibalizing wasn't a power, just to clear things up because I didn't make it fairly obvious like I did with Agent Ibis; it was a cost.
So keep speculating (For the record, I am glad someone is actually guessing and reading between the lines in earnest, Elder Methyl, you have my thanks for that; I've been trying to get people actively talking/tearing up (mayor)/speculating about the story) since I first started writing the long, narrative chapters.

Anyways, I just wanted to say that my semester ends this week after two more finals; I am pleased that I passed Color & Design, the most dreaded class in my major, so after some celebrations and several Red Bulls to get me through the remainder of my workload, updates will come along in a more regular manner; this story is not going to leave the first page. Also, since it takes too long to color in each sketch, I will just be uploading B&W character sketches now, as well as renewing the Culture in the Empire segments to really involve readers into the world of this story.
 
Yep, I really enjoy how you are weaving a web of intrigue and subplots through your story. Sadly enough, I can't follow as I haven't ever heard before of World of Darkness. The main story is interesting enough, though! Keep it up!
 
School's out, faithful readers!
I'll be updating a little more frequently now to your pleasure.

The Peranakan Chinese


Dayang Ahamat, renowned physicist of the Singapura Research Institute

Colloquially known as the Straits Chinese, the Peranakan Chinese comprise a significant segment of Chinese society today. When the Chinese Empire consolidated their hold over the former territories of the Kampuchean Empire, many settlers and merchants naturally started new families in their new regions of residence. The first recorded and recognized community of Peranakan Chinese dates back to the capture of Kagoshima under the reign of the Scarlet Empress. Merchant marines and their soldiers who found themselves governing the new post intermarried with the local women and arranged marriages between the Indonesian native leaders who had assisted in their attack on Yamato Kagoshima with their daughters and a small segment of the surviving Yamato women in Kagoshima. The second recorded instance was larger and more influential in its impact with the migration of Li Caste Han laborers to the Malay Peninsula during the end of the Kampuchean War. These Li Caste workers found themselves settling down in union with the Malays and developed a unique creole culture separate from mainline Han Chinese culture.

The men born from these unions were called baba, and the women were called the nonya. Together, they formed the distinct group known as the baba nonya, and by Core Imperial standards, the Peranakan Chinese. At first, this term was only applied to mixed-race Han-Malay families but after several centuries, the latter terminology would later be applied to all mestizo Chinese peoples of Southeast Asia & the Philippines, excluding unions between Han Chinese & the Caucasian Oceanian peoples, who belong to the Aozhou Hapa demographic.


Zhen Feng Aguinaldo, Miss Empire 1764

Most Peranakan Chinese from the first generations were said to have inherited the large, round eyes from their Malay mothers and the majority of their remaining features from the Han fathers, most prominently, their lighter skin tone. Today, this distinction is not so clear and many Peranakan Chinese simply resemble the Kinh of Yue Nan Province. Like the other two prominent mestizo races, the Feizhou Hapa & the Aozhou Hapa, the first generation of Peranakan Chinese was overwhelmingly skewed in demographics with a male Han parent & a female native parent. The imbalance has shifted in the past three generations, with an increasing trend in the opposite direction; female Peranakan & Han Chinese are coupling with male natives (Malays, Indonesians, Filipinos) with greater frequency, in a reversal of the initial trend. This trend has not occurred in the other two mestizo communities which has remained skewed in keeping with their starting figures.

The Peranakan speak in a variety of creole tongues that resulted from the admixture of their native languages and Mandarin. All variants are mutually unintelligible from one another and only share roughly 50-60% of their vocabulary with the parent Mandarin language. In terms of Caste distribution amongst the Peranakan, the percentages are skewed in favor of both the Li & the Nao Castes. From a census conducted in the last year, 48% of Peranakans are registered under the Li Caste, 35% under the Nao Caste and only 17% of Peranakans are in the Xin Caste.

Range of population distribution triangulates between the western fringe of Southeast Asia, Indonesia & the Phillippines with the exception of Yue Nan; the Kinh people are closer in culture and ethnicity to the East Asian peoples than to their Southeast Asian neighbors.


Fang Shi Qian, supermodel from Angkor Wat

Antropology
Publication Date 1775.

Spoiler :
In order of depiction:
1) Titi Dwijayati
2) Leah Dizon
3) Pierre Png
 
Interesting tidbit you have for us here Dawn, great work! :)
 
If only that picture of M(r)s. Dizon wasn't airbrushed all to hell... :(
 
@Tycho: Apart from the Peranakan Chinese (which are a real live ethnic group), there will be two more updates in the future about the Feizhou Hapas (mixed-race Blasians) and the Aozhou Hapas (mixed-race Eurasians). Hapa is a real term but I added the Chinese terms for Africa & Europe respectively as a prefix to differentiate.

@Mosher: Leah Dizon was married to her Japanese stylist, Bun and had a daughter through him but they're divorced now.

@Zizon: I always become very pleased when I acquire new readers! Hope you're enjoying the story.


A large contingent of Pashtun cavalry loyal to the Xia Empress strike out
towards Dhaka, threatening the Western Front of the Vajra Republic.


The dust storms were still raging as I looked out the window of the office I was standing in. One couldn't even see the stars under these conditions; there was just too much dust being kicked up. Most of the peasants and the city-folk had to stay in their homes during the intervals when the sandstorms picked up. They mostly huddled around the granaries in the calm hours, waiting for government workers to dole out rations to the crowd. More than the war itself, more people were angry with the government for a perceived apathy for their hunger. A stoic sort of anger boiled quietly in the underbelly of the Vajra public. Contact between the major cities in the Republic was also limited at best, thanks to that ungodly dust storm. But those of us on the subcontinent had to be thankful for them as well; the Chinese were a cautious lot, refusing to move out into open ground during the sandstorms for fear of ambush. It was almost as if every city had become an island unto itself, severed apart by a vast sea of sand. It had been a day after the nightmarish encounter with the serpentspawn woman. Zealot caretakers immediately took my mentor into custody and tended to him as he slept through the morning and the day. I was told before the sun went up that as soon as the night fell, he would have more capable Elohist attendants available to care for him.

"Apologies, young one," a man's voice called out as he entered the richly furnished room.
The man was an Elder but I wouldn't have known it just by looking at him. He looked quite young.
He couldn't actually have been much older than myself in appearance but I knew in reality,
he had probably lived at least ten times longer than my pitiful time on Earth.
Such is the static condition of an immortal.

"So you're the progeny of the great Rabbi Singh. I'm quite honored to meet you,"
"The honor is all mine, Elder Chandra," I responded with a curtsy.
He poured me a fresh cup of blood, doubtless procured from one of the numerous Zealot fanatics that presided this fortress;
ever-willing to give up their minds, bodies & souls to slake our angelic thirsts.
"I heard about what happened to Rabbi Singh. He is a respected member of the angelic community and rest assured, he will be safe in our hands.
You were very lucky as well. Few of our kind survive any encounters with the children of Lucifer at all," the Elder praised.
"It was thanks to his quick thinking, sir," I said. "One of our Zealots survived the initial massacre and when she witnessed the serpentspawn using her dark magicks...something happened and forced her to retreat. I would never have dragged her out if my mentor hadn't instructed me to,"
"I see," the Elder mumbled to himself. "It's not entirely common knowledge yet, but in recent years, we've discovered that the serpentspawn are repelled from using their eldritch powers when a mortal can witness it in plain sight. The exact machinations of this curious relationship still elude us, but it was quite effective, as you can see. It's also the reason why you've seen so many Zealots here in our capital fortress; aside from being our licks, that is,"

"I also wanted you to pass on a message from the Elder Council to him when he wakes, Rajat. The man is a strict observer of our societies' protocols; our numbers must remain few and our actions discrete, so Rabbi Singh is to be commended for that. But here in Vajra, men and women are plentiful and we have significantly easier standards for siring progeny. And I'm told that in recent weeks, serpentspawn assassins have cut a swathe through our numbers; leaving us with a shortage of manpower. Rabbi Singh, to my understanding, only sired you when he should have taken a few more. That's fine. He hasn't violated anything but I need you to let him know that as soon as he's capable again; he needs to fulfill his responsibility as an Elohim Elder and sire a few more progeny when his strength returns," He removed an ink feather from his table and took a piece of blank parchment to begin writing. After a few seconds, he handed the slip to me and spoke up. "Before you do anything else tonight, go pay the apothecary a visit and show them this paper. This is for a medicinal salve that should hasten your mentor's recovery,"

"Very well, sir," I said as I put down my cup and took the slip. The blood was rich and my palette was becoming refined to the point where I could discern what kind of person the blood belonged to without looking. Young woman, early twenties, slender build, beautiful. Commendable taste. "I'll let him know," "Enjoy your stay here in the capital, Rajat," Elder Chandra said as I was escorted out of the room by Zealot bodyguards.


Despite waging two wars, the Imperial Chinese still found the time to colonize the numerous unpopulated islands that dotted the Tai Ping Yang.

"I haven't seen you around here before," the man behind the counter said.
"I don't doubt that. I'm here to pick up this order," I said, as I showed him my papers.
"Neonate, huh?" he asked as he leaned over the counter.
"You can tell?" I asked as he took the papers and searched his cubbies for various herbs & roots.
"We give off the same scent, brother. The scent of the fresh ones," he said as he licked his lips.
"Hmph," I paid him no mind as my eyes wandered to the vials and scales that sat atop the counter.
"How long? You devout?" he asked as he continued searching through the shelf behind him for the ingredients on the list.
"Not particularly. I read the passages from time to time and keep up in my lessons. That's all," I said.
"I'll be honest here. I'm only here to live forever, but it hasn't exactly lived up to my expectations so far," the alchemist said wistfully.
At this point, he began grounding all the ingredients together with his mortar and pestle.
The stench that erupted from the mixture was highly offensive but he didn't seem to mind.
"Listen, I'm only here to pick up the salve," I said, bemused.
"Have you tried sleeping with anyone since you turned?" he snickered.
The last time I slept with a woman was when I bedded Bhagat Nadar's cousin before I burned down their estate.
I hadn't tried since, although I glanced at Nagina from time to time;
partly because she was fairly comely and partly because I held so much power over her.
"I have. It's so inconsequential now, just like cannabis or fermented drink. You'd think that eternal life as a fallen angel would come with at least some incentive, and don't cite that 'Holy War' or the 'duty' bull the elders like to spew out. There's little pleasure in eternal life, or eternal un-life it would seem," he leaned in and added an additional bit of information. "Hearsay is though, that someone out West amongst the Japheth discovered a way to enjoy human comforts in small intervals,"
"You don't say," I said flatly.
"Here. It's done," he said as he bottled the liquid and capped it with an air-tight cork.
"My name is Sukrit Jindal by the way," the alchemist said.
There was a slight pause where we both studied each other and gauged the mood of the room.
"Well? What's yours?" he smirked.
"My name is Rajat Pritha. I have travelled here with my mentor, Rabbi Singh from the city of Madras,"
"Madras. That's the eastern-most city in our humble little Republic, isn't it?"
"Was our eastern-most city. Madras is in Chinese hands now,"
"Well, I'm sorry to hear that, Rajat," he said.
"Don't be. I didn't particularly like that city anyway," I changed the subject of the conversation.
"Why are we all convening here in Pataliputra anyway?
I doubt that it's just because of that solid block of light that's inching closer and closer,"
"Wall of light? It has a name you know. We call it the Solar Arcology. As for the recall..."
He slumped on one elbow as he looked me in the eyes. The salve was finished and waited for me on the table.
"Apparently, the elders are trying to move something out of the Vajra Republic.
They'll probably move it to Hevron in Judeo-Babylon.
It's supposed to arrive in three to five days or so if my sources are right,"
"Thank you, it's been interesting," I said, as I took the mixture.
"Instructions are on the side of the bottle," he said. I turned to leave.
"Hang on. Take this," he said as he stopped me and handed me a slip of paper.
"What's this?" I said as I read the address number off of it.
"You are Rajat Pritha, right? Word is around the sect that you've already managed to piss off some Elohim from the Aryan Empire,"
"Aryan? I pissed off one but I don't recall crossing a whole pack of them. I only choked him," He raised his eyebrows.
"Unintentionally, I assure you. But is he really so petty?" I added in my defense.
"Whoo. That isn't good. So the rumors were true. That 'Aryan fellow' you pissed off is Farhad Tehrani. He's got a notorious temper and a ton of clout despite being a neonate. If you had been lucky enough to arrive sooner, you wouldn't have had to learn it the hard way. What did you expect? First impressions are practically everything," his fangs glinted as he spoke. "Look, I can tell you're in need of a friend. And believe me, we might all be fighting for God, but that still isn't enough to make all of us buddy-buddy. Before you know it, someone will slip in a word with an Elder and before long, you're on a suicide mission up against some serpentspawn just because someone in the know doesn't like you. My coterie can help you out. Come visit us when you've got some time away from your mentor,"
"I can only assume that there's something in it for you," I responded with a hint of caution in my voice.
"You could say that. We're friends until it becomes inconvenient to remain so.
Isn't that how all relationships work though? They revolve around the fundamental basis of personal gain.
It's just more apparent to us than it is to those humans,"

"You don't think we're human?" I asked.
"You think we are?" he responded.


Shenyang was settled not long after Taipei had been founded.
Their proximity from the Empire proper enabled the development of
a co-dependent trade system between the two island cities.
 
Your going to finish the tech tree by 1500 at this rate :lol:
 
I look forward to every update that you put out Dawn; fantastic work!

Also, I agree with hoplitejoe, you'll be killing riflemen with tanks and bombers before too long.
 
tanks and bombers are for wimps. NUKES FOR THE WIN
also great update
 
Fantastic update, very interesting read. :goodjob:

You're not going to have tanks by 1500 though, IMO those 200 years go too fast for that to happen.
 
I'm going to see if I can update before the year ends but for now, I'll leave you with this.
For those of you not in the Civ4 S&T SG, this was the work-in-progress sketch of Kohaku the Infiltrator from my deviantart.
If you don't remember who she is, she's the first character that I started writing in narrative-style for.
I may update this post later.

 


In the two days after the taking of Madras, the Vajra Republic had already mustered a larger army than the Chinese invasion force in commitment to the retaking of the city. They were headed by one General Saravati, one of the Republic's three supreme commanders. General Saravati's forces had occupied the irrigation ditches on the western outskirts of the city. The ditches were initially a priority for General Xia Chen's forces but the initial squads that were deployed to capture the waterways were defeated in a series of skirmishes with the remnant Vajra forces, reinforced by Saravati's armies at the last minute. The reclamation forces drained the ditches and cut off the fresh water supply to Madras, in an attempt to starve out the invading army. General Saravati had also deployed his pikemen into the trenches and built himself an impregnable field defense.

The situation was dire for the defenders inside as the food & water stores were quickly becoming depleted and the populace was getting antsy and having second thoughts even though they had all pledged service to the Emperor. A significant portion of Xia Chen's forces were also wounded and needed rest. But after gauging the enemy numbers through intelligence, even if his army was at full strength, he still wouldn't have been able to match his adversary's numerical superiority. The most he could do now was sporadically fire off city rubble from the artillery to hold off Saravati's slow advance from trench to trench. In the event that they reached the demolished gates, Madras would be ripe for the retaking and Xia Chen could not let that happen. He was reminded of why this campaign was so risky in the first place. If he failed, and his army was routed, then there would be nothing to stop the Vajra forces from pouring into Indochina and threatening the southern Core of China. Everything weighed on him here and he had spent the past five days since Saravati's arrival trying to formulate a plan against the ever encroaching pike wall.

On the sixth day, Xia Chen gathered the one hundred officers under his command and laid out the strategy he had devised over the past five nights. They were shocked and indignant. Protests that the plan was against everything that was taught in the military academies and tactical suicide abounded but Xia Chen gave his assurances. He was holding back several details from most of his men but it was critical that the core components of his strategy were not leaked as he still wasn't sure who may or may not be in the pocket of the Republic.

Dragon Marauder artillery began to hurl rubble and boulders against the trenches, but curiously enough to Saravati, they seemed to be concentrating on the fourth row and not the first one. The Vajra General had anticipated that any Chinese countermeasure would explicitly be marked by the bombardment of the foremost trench in an attempt to soften up his defenders before committing to an assault. General Saravati ordered the frontline to be on high alert. But nothing came. Two hours passed and the trenches were still being pelted with projectiles with no enemy infantry in sight. The first-row soldiers having been on edge for longer than sanity could provide for, relaxed their guard. Two more hours passed and still no attack. While the messengers kept relaying the message to stay aware of their surroundings, many of the soldiers began to ignore the orders.

It was at this moment that the elite Louyang Imperial Guard sallied forth and took the field under the cover of the sandstorm supported by four Tiger Vanguard columns comprised of pikemen and crossbow archers. The troops who had relaxed in the first row were swiftly cut down as the sudden appearance of Imperial soldiers slowed their reaction times and left them vulnerable. Saravati's second row soldiers put up much more of a fight, trading even casualties as Chinese arrows sniped out pikemen and Indian pikes skewering advancing swordsmen. Many of Xia Chen's officers tried to keep a level head as they kept pushing the advance with their commander's schedule in mind. The orders given to the officers were to swiftly penetrate Vajra defenses as far as the fourth row and then to retreat as quickly as possible.

When the attack started, Vajra reinforcements could not get through to the forward positions because of the veritable rain of artillery projectiles that constantly peppered the fourth trench. Most of the men hid underneath the makeshift reinforcement bridges that were laid across most of the ditches. On the matter of reinforcements, no progress was made in the advance of the new troops without heavy casualties and it was reported that the Chinese had already broken through the second trench and was advancing on the third. More reports soon came back to Saravati that there was a lull in the bombardments, prompting Saravati to seize his chance. All troops occupying the ditches from the twentieth row to the fifth were to advance and crush the enemy. The Chinese must have launched such a fierce attack as a last hurrah. Saravati knew that the advancing units were fresh and had guessed that his adversary either held no more reserves as a result of the taking of Madras or that most of his men were wounded. If either was the case like he was sure of, after crushing the Chinese forward unit, he could advance unimpeded and annihilate the invading army while they were still recovering. As more and more men massed against forward Imperial Guard, the situation began to look bleak for the Chinese as they broke into a fighting retreat, barely passing over the second trench. Many officers began to confirm their fears that this was a suicide mission after all.

Unbeknownst to them, Xia Chen's trump card had now revealed itself. Now that the opposing commander had ordered a full scale attack with all of his forces in the field, there was a critical window of opportunity to be exploited. Several hours before, Xia Chen had given separate orders to three select companies of soldiers to go out the north gate and make their way under the cover of the duststorm towards the reservoir. The station itself was heavily fortified but they were told that in a couple hours, that wouldn't be the case. And Xia Chen was correct. The irrigation controls were closest to the last three trenches in the Vajra defense formation and once it was confirmed that they had left the coop to join in on the counter-assault, the men sprang into action. Dragon Marauders rushed in from under the cover of the sandstorm and descended upon the irrigation controls, now lightly defended by just a few meager platoons. The slaughter that ensued from the surprise attack was horrendous as blood mixed freely with the sand. One private managed to escape but there was no time to pursue. Sapper & engineer crews jumped on the small window of opportunity afforded and went to work. They removed several of the switches in place on the waterway and unleashed the floodgates. By this time, General Saravati had received news that the irrigation control system was under Imperial control. Realizing what that meant, he immediately ordered his runners to tell his officers to call off the assault and to escape the center of the battlefield as quickly as possible. But it was far too late for that. In two minutes, the pent-up force of the Brahmaputra River rushed through the ditches with unfathomable power, wiping out Saravati's pikewall defense and his advancing troops in just mere moments. Thousands of men were swept away and drowned while the survivors' morale was completely broken. The advance unit that Xia Chen had sent out into the field was completely amazed and shocked at the carnage. A few though, wondered what might have happened if they did not cross back past the first ditch in time. Crossbow bolts & boulders continued to rain into the killzone; while not effective, served to cement the feeling of despair that had overtaken Saravati's army.



The Vajra General fell to his knees as he could hear the screams of his men in the vast gap ahead of him. He didn't need to see what was going on to know that his army was becoming completely decimated. General Saravati had failed the reclamation of Madras and left the whole east of the Republic vulnerable to the Imperial advance. The remainder of his forces which were kept in reserve rallied despite the desperation. His chariot cavalry was still intact after all, as well as the small units of infantry still left in his camp. Despair turned to rage as the General pulled himself together and entered the javelineer seat of his vehicle and set off racing over the bridges to meet the Chinese. Now it was his last hurrah.

As the horses galloped across each submerged row, there were no soldiers in sight. More underhanded tricks from the Empire? More clever gambits were revealed as pikes rammed through the bottom of the makeshift bridges, skewering warhorses in the belly as they ran by or taking out wheel joints, causing the charioteers to crash into the ground. From the east came Xia Chen himself, leading his reserve units and meeting the enemy cavalry crew head on. Saravati had Xia Chen in his sights, although from such a distance, he could not tell that it was the enemy commander. Xia Chen rolled beneath Saravati's spear strike and hacked off the hooves of his right-hand chariot horse as he dove under. The chariot came to a careening stop as the war beast collided into the ground and took the other one down with it. General Saravati himself was flung onto the dusty ground and shaken while his chariot driver fell off and was crushed underneath the heavy wheels. The Chinese commander took this to his advantage as he got a running start and leapt onto the fallen chariot, his jian pointedly driven towards his adversary's face. It was deftly parried aside as Saravati got up just in time and made some space between them. Though they were mutually unintelligible to each other, the armor and insignias that both men wore told much about their ranks. Saravati was completely incensed. So this was the man that had wrought this utter humiliation upon his head. He would be damned if he didn't at least take the enemy commander down with him if he was going to lose. He shouted out loud and all present charioteers dismounted and formed a half circle behind him. Xia Chen didn't have to understand him to know what he meant by this. He held up a hand for his soldiers and asked them to halt. He stepped out a few paces away from the enemy commander. As soon as they realized that they were going to duel, the Imperial soldiers formed up their own half circle on their commander's side.

Saravati readied his spear and charged. Xia Chen was at a range disadvantage, so he would have to play this carefully. He spun aside from the initial strike but was smacked by the side of the shaft as Saravati changed the trajectory of the strike. The momentum was maintained with a series of sweeping strikes meant to trip his opponent. The Chinese commander was too busy backing up to catch Saravati's feint. Xia Chen's jian was knocked aside with a spiral piercing motion of Saravati's spear. Confident of that success, the Vajra General proceeded to stab repeatedly in his opponent's direction until a skillful strike pulled away his lamellar suit, leaving Xia Chen in his underlying robes. Now all he had to do was strike the flesh and it would be all over. Saravati didn't know it, but he done something terribly wrong. Xia Chen grinned to himself; he was liberated from the shell of his heavy armor and now he would learn to fear his true potential the hard way. One more strike to the heart came his way and Xia Chen vaulted into the air and landed onto the blunt side of the spear. He proceeded to dart across the wooden shaft and kicked Saravati in the face as he soared by. Blood spurted from his mouth and nose as the bones were broken from the hefty impact. The acrobatic General delivered that kick with the force of a sack of bricks. Another assault was attempted but Xia Chen weaved out of the way and axe-kicked the spear to the ground, then spun around and kicked off the spearhead. Saravati growled as he threw away his broken spear and clicked a mechanism that unsheathed his katars. The bloody General put up his arms in a fighting position as he waited for Xia Chen to make a move. All the while, the soldiers on each side that had formed a ring around the two combatants were shouting all sorts of encouragement and jeering against the other side. Even though they couldn't understand each other.

As the men circled each other shrewdly and traded blows, neither could gain an advantage. Saravati kept Xia Chen from closing in with his expert footsies while Xia Chen threatened to lash out with a whipping kick in every which direction to check his opponent's movement. Eventually, the katar fighter found an opening and seized it by delivering a flurry of blows towards his opponent's direction. Xia Chen did his best to block aside most of them but pretty soon, his hands were tied up and he had to bob and weave against the impeding storm of fists. General Saravati punched towards Xia Chen's face; he missed but managed to draw blood as the edge of his katar scraped by the young Xia scion's cheek. His eyes widened and he froze as he caught sight of Xia Chen's blood. In the heat of the battle, Xia Chen noticed that his opponent stopped and gaped for a second. A little bit longer than a second actually. But as his nerves fired off, he made that split-second count. He took hold of Saravati's other arm, and delivered a palm strike unto his elbow, not only forcing his bones out of socket, but ramming the blade straight into Saravati's throat as well. The dead General gurgled slowly as he fell to the sand and ceased to be.

At this, the remaining Vajra troops attempted to flee but were caught by the pikemen who had emerged out of water behind them. They promptly surrendered and were taken as prisoners by the jubilant Imperial Army. Xia Chen was carried triumphantly by his men as they tossed the robed General into the air repeatedly on the march to Madras. But all the while, something bothered Xia Chen.

"Why did he freeze like that? We were evenly matched.
Judging by his skill level, we both could have fought to a standstill but...
...What exactly happened?" he pondered.



Last update of 2011. Happy New Year, CivFanatics!
 
Wow, the level of detail and though you put into your stories is amazing. The writing, gameplay and essentially everything about this tory is top-notch. On GEM with over 30 civs your turn times must be monsters, you must have a monster computer to get this far. Following this one. Great Story and good job:goodjob:.
 
Sorry, accidental double post.
 
Very good update Dawn, a wonderful one indeed :).
 
Holy. Sh!t. How did I ever miss this? Chinese AND WoD?! And excellent writing which makes this English major's heart go "SQUEE!"?

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