The Renewal

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Nope, this is not dead. Just...lengthily delayed. :D I go in and out of writing moods, but I'm going to try to force myself to finish the next part real soon. It's pretty much done. Just needs to wrap up nicely.
 
Chapter Four - Advice
The following events took place a little more than a day later.

"It is a great honor to be among your people, Daniel," said Tyee.

Daniel's eyebrows raised. "Your American is very good!"

Tyee smiled. "Thank you. Gordan has been instrumental in teaching it to us and has proved to be an excellent learner of Chinook as well."

Daniel seemed intrigued. "Oh? I hope that he proves to be a learner of many other languages as well. He is my Foreign Adviser after all."

Gordan blushed. "Daniel, if I may."

Daniel nodded. "Yes, I have heard the news as well. Go, be with him."

Gordan thanked Daniel and rushed out.

Daniel smiled. "He is young and headstrong, but he will prove to be a great asset for me. Now, Tyee, let me take you on a tour of what is soon to be the greatest city in the world. We call it Washington."



The following events took place an hour later.

There lay Matthias, his head swathed in bandages, slipping in and out of consciousness as he fell closer to the precipice of death. Gordan sat at his side, accompanied by their friends as they stood with him in his final days.

Rose was berating herself. "I should never have allowed you to go up that scaffolding, Matthias. It was too risky. And now ..." her voice trailed off as she burst into a fresh set of tears.

Matthias smiled weakly. "Don't fret, you. I'm not long for this world, but I hold nothing against you. Ha, I was trying to show off by placing those stones. Serves me right." He coughed and felt more of his strength ebb away. "Tycho, take care of her for me, eh?"

Tycho nodded. "I'll keep two eyes on her."

Matthias looked at Penni. "Hey."

She smiled, trying to hold back tears. "Hey yourself."

"We never did get to build any monuments or statues to ourselves, did we?"

"No, we didn't."

"That's okay."

To Nataly he looked. "Have you finished that calculation yet?"

She shook her head. "No, but when it's done, I plan on calling it the Matthias Theorem."

"Sounds like a good name to me."

And finally, to Gordan. "Hey, buddy."

Gordan smiled weakly.

"Hey, chin up. You're the Foreign Adviser to the grand poobah himself!"

"I was kinda hoping to serve America with you," admitted Gordan.

"Yeah, but the world needs you. You'll do something big one day that'll help a lot of people out, I'm sure of it. Mark those words."

"I will," said Gordan.

"Oh, yes. One other thing. Nataly, I did hide your notebook last year."

"You did?!" Nataly was furious. "How could I have missed it! You had better be grateful that I found it!"

They all laughed at the memory of Nataly going frantic, trying to find her precious notebook, which contained all her thoughts, calculations, everything.

In the midst of the laughter, no one noticed Matthias breathe his last with his eyes closed and smile wide.

The following events happened within a week.

The funeral was over. As he had requested, Matthias had been ceremoniously burned at night. With the ashes still flickering, the five friends stood looking at the moon and stars.

"He was a good man," said Gordan finally.

The others stayed silent, remembering Matthias.

Someone walked up alongside Gordan. It was Tyee.

"I did not know your friend, Gordan. But I can see that he was important to you." He spoke in his native Chinook.

Gordan replied in Chinook. "Yes. He was a great fighter."

Tyee understood the few words of Gordan to mean that this was a time of remembrance. He looked at the stars himself, remembering his comrades who died in battle against the lesser tribes that were not so friendly.



Nataly straightened. "What is that star?" she asked. "I don't recall ever seeing it before."

"I see it too. What's more, it's getting brighter," said Tycho. "What a strange anomaly."

Suddenly, they all were bathed in an intense, pale white light. They were frozen. Feelings that they would never experience again rushed through their bodies. The light would not let them move, as hard as they tried. They could not even speak. Gordan at once felt both pain and joy, anger and happiness, fast and slow. Years later, he could only describe it as, "That which you both never would want to feel because you knew you were not worthy of feeling it, and yet would want to feel because it felt so wonderful."

Then, just as suddenly as it had come upon them, it stopped.

They all fell to the ground, collapsing as one onto the soft grass. The star had disappeared, not to be seen again for generations upon generations, perhaps never.

They lay there with time slipping away and the full moon rising into the evening sky.

They did not wake until morning. As the sun replaced the moon, shining into the new day, Gordan awoke with a splitting headache.

As the rest of the group all got up clutching their heads, he could only assume that they were suffering the same thing as him. He took a deep breath and attempted to describe to himself what he was feeling.

It was as if time had stopped for him, yet the world moved on. As if he was frozen yet could move and interact with everything there. The grass gave way to his feet, the nearby bird fluttered away as he approached, yet he couldn't help feeling that time itself had stopped.

Very strange.

He was able to confirm this feeling with the other five, so he knew he wasn't insane at least. This would be something that would play out over time, of that he was sure. For now, they should get back to Washington and get checked out by the medicine man.

Nataly shaded her eyes. "Washington looks a little more ... completed."

Gordan stared toward Washington. She was right. Stone huts with straw roofs had sprung up from nowhere, and a rectangular palace of stone rose above it all.

Tyee was standing next to Gordan. "What is this sorcery?" he muttered in his own language. "Yesterday, they had barely begun. This morning, they are finished."

Tycho was stunned. "Nothing I thought of … all my ways of improving efficiency … I had nothing like this prepared."



This event took place 15 minutes later.

"I woke up, and I was inside this big house. I can't explain it," said Daniel.

The seven of them were all standing inside what appeared to be Daniel's new place of residence. Currently it seemed to be a misshapen and hollowed out piece of stone, but as Penni had seen there was great painstaking detail carved out keeping the building, as it was, supported everywhere without pillars. She had told Daniel that she would add some purely ornamental pillars later.

"We're not sure what happened either," said Tycho. "We were all standing in the field, and suddenly there was this blinding light. It was as if we couldn't move. Then it stopped, we all collapsed and woke up with huge headaches."

"I checked around with some other people, and they reported the same effects this morning," said Penni. "Waking up in a strange place and disoriented. But nobody else had headaches."

"Like I noted earlier," said Gordan, "This is likely nothing. But if it is something, we'll have to be patient to see what it is. In the meantime, we should mark this date as monumental. Whatever happened, happened. And Washington has been built in practically a month. Our previous estimates thought the time to be at least five years before we were completely through."

"Yes," said Daniel. "Now, Nataly, what I would like from you is a rundown on the resources that we have around us."

She smiled. "Already did it." She pulled out a crumpled piece of writing material and laid it flat out on the massive oaken table that had also appeared during the night.



"As you can see, I've marked out some areas of note. All around is grassland, and beyond that, we have forest from the northwest clockwise to the east. The river is to our immediate west, and eventually goes to the sea. It comes from the north, but beyond that, we're not sure of its origin. I've marked each area in equal boundaries, setting them up in squares. These three squares, or tiles, as I call them, provide some metals that will be good for production. We could set up mines all around this area and increase our production tenfold. We also have those cattle to our southwest, and you know that we have the workers domesticating them. The only question is whether to irrigate that area or to mine it. The irrigation will help us in terms of food, but the mine will help with production. It's your call ultimately, Daniel."

She paused for breath. "The only other thing we found was that to our northwest, on the other side of the river, were some very strange creatures. I'm not sure how we could utilize them, but I'm sure we could find some way."

Daniel was silent. Nataly cringed. "Was that too much information? I'm sorry, I tend to ramble on."

Daniel waved her off. "No, no. It was excellent. It's helped me make some decisions that will definitely be a great boon to us in times to come. With that said, I will be appointing you my Domestic Adviser."

Nataly's jaw stood agape as Daniel swept by her to stand in front of Tycho. "You are a man of deep thought and science. I'll be needing someone like you to be my Science Adviser."

Then to Penni. "You are quite the visionary. You would do well as my Cultural Adviser."

He stopped at Rose. "I've seen you cataloging the items we've found in our travels. When we meet other tribes, I will need a Trade Adviser to help with trading, obviously, but also to detail what we have and what we need. Can I count on you?"

Without even waiting for an answer, he moved to Tyee. "You are a strong leader of the Chinooks. Can you be the military leader of America?" This time, he waited for a response.

Tyee considered the proposal.

"It would mean giving up my position as leader of my tribe. It would be a difficult change. The language…barrier is still a problem. So, it means changes, not just for me, but for my tribe. However, they are strong."

He paused again.

"Alright. I will do my best."

Daniel grinned and clapped him on the back. "Excellent! Let's get to work! We have a lot ahead of us!"

End of Chapter Four.
 
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Chapter Five - Explorations
The following events took place three weeks later.

"So, my view upon the subject is this," Tycho began. "We've been having issues with some of the Chinooks. It's difficult for them to learn our language. Tyee is a bit of an anomaly -- he dealt in diplomacy with other tribes. He's been able to learn the basics of different languages quickly. But the other members of his tribe are having difficulties. I think we need to communicate better. So, I propose a sort of system that will help us do so. It would involve putting symbols upon paper that each mean a different letter. I know we already have such a system, but we need a new one. The old is just that -- outdated and no longer able to help us communicate with the Chinooks or any other tribes, major or minor, that we meet. It's time to come up with a new system."

Daniel looked pensive. He scratched at the stubble that he had not shaved that morning. "I hear you, Tycho. But what would be so hard about educating the Chinooks and any other tribes with the old system? I fail to see why it's an issue."

Tycho sighed. "Look." He pulled out a piece of paper. To an outsider, it would appear to be random lines crisscrossing with no obvious purpose -- not quite unlike the five days of empty spaces on your calendar, when the calendar's makers could just have easily put the previous and next month's on the week before, thus saving time and money.

"Here we have our basic letters, right? Ay, bee, see, dee, etc. According to some of the elders, the whole system was known as an 'alphabet.' Now look. The symbol for 'ay' is practically the same as 'vee.' The only difference is the little notch here." He pointed to a notch that served no purpose, like those calendar spaces. "This notch is difficult for new learners to understand, and even among our young children it's difficult. Only through lots of instruction and time do they understand the difference, and even then messages can be misread by quick glance. We need a system that will be quick to read, easy to understand, and above all, different from the old one."

Daniel nodded. "I understand your concerns. The practicality of this venture is another question though. What would you need?"

Tycho thought for a moment. "People, obviously. But for them I would need money. However, I think what's most important right now is that we get some money flowing into our treasury. We could begin by putting only 20% of our income towards this venture, then after we build up a substantial buffer, increase that to 80%. At that point, we would be able to research faster and still find our economy growing. How does that sound?"

Daniel smiled. "I think that will work. Make sure that you and Nataly coordinate this so that our money is put into each class correctly."

Tycho nodded at Nataly. "We will."

"Now I have a question for you, Tyee," Daniel said. "We need to begin working on some sort of short-term project. We have no identifiable military outside of our scout team and the warriors your tribe so generously gave us. However, I'm inclined to use them as scouts to our west. In that sense, we will need another group to go to our east and see what lies in that direction. Tyee, we need you to bring your expertise to the field and train some of our young men."

Tyee slowly nodded. "I will do that."

"The sun has risen, friends. Let's make sure that we have something accomplished before it sets," Daniel said.


The following events took place three weeks later.


Jonathen shaded his eyes with his hand and peered into the distance. Behind him stood the men of the scout company he had been selected to lead. The honor was great. This team was mapping the area and establishing good relations with other tribes that they came across, major or minor. They had come down the coastline for the first few days, preferring to stay near the water, as it was a new experience for all. The awe quickly dissipated after their skin began turning red with sunburn. After that, they had made camp and rested for a few days, letting their skin heal before moving on. Now they were standing in front of hills that touched the coastline. The hills weren't large enough to be considered mountains, but they weren't short either. A fragrant smell hung in the air, and the excitement of new terrain filled their group. Next to Jonathen, his second-in-command, Markus, scratched at his carefully trimmed beard.

"Looks like we're up for some grueling ups and downs," he commented.

"Yes, but the value in getting up there will be the view. We'll be able to map a wide area from each hill," Jonathen replied.

The tall and well-built black man grunted. "Here's hoping we see something worthwhile up there, besides more sand." He kicked the soil. "I for one would like to find out what that smell is."

"Then let's get going. I don't think it will be coming to us," grinned Jonathen. He turned to the scouts. "Alright! I think you all know our plan here. Remember, eyes sharp, keep your wits about you. We're looking for anything interesting, and the vantage points from these hills should show us something to look closer at. We'll be taking a brisk pace."

A groan echoed amid the group.

"But not too tiring."

Relieved sighs echoed amid the group.

"Alright then, let's move!"


The following events took place at about the same time.


Geral stared up at the massive mountain in front of him. It was the largest thing he had ever seen. They had gotten a glimpse of it from the east as the tribe had made its way down the river to where Washington was now, but they had not thought it was this large!

Behind him were a mix of Chinook warriors and American volunteers whom they had picked up in Washington. They were now muttering among themselves, unsure if they had signed on for this. Geral sighed. "Come on. We need to know what's on the other side of that mountain."

One raised his hand. "Then why don't we just walk around it?"

Geral stared at him. "Because we'll miss what's on the other side? Think about it. If we climb this mountain, we'll be able to see for miles in all directions! Our task is to be a military scout patrol. Jonathen's team is passive. We're fighters. We can endure a lot more than they can. You already have endured a lot more than they ever will. I have every confidence in all of you that we can conquer this mountain, and see things that no one has seen before."

Silence.

A mighty cheer arose from the group. As one, they surged past Geral and began striking their way up the mountain.


The following events took place about a week later.


The hills were taking a lot out of his men. The relaxation provided by the downward slopes was fleeting and almost as painful as heading up due to the shock that coursed through rubbery legs long accustomed to flat grassland and plains. Jonathen knew he had to set an example, so he ignored the pain, shoving it somewhere else, and continued making his way up and down the steep hills. Markus jogged alongside him. Markus's endurance was well known and came close to matching Jonathen's. But not enough. Jonathen smiled, remembering how it had been his endurance that had allowed him to defeat Gordan. Well, Gordan's fall had helped as well. Jonathen bore no animosity towards Gordan, not anymore. Jonathen was doing what he loved and had trained for almost his entire life. He grunted as he almost tripped on a protruding stone. Regaining his balance, he continued on his way.

They had passed by an area filled with a smell that enticed every man in the group. A short detour had shown them that local terrain was filled with trees oozing a sticky substance that emitted the pleasant smell. Jonathen directed some of his men to collect samples to take back to Washington when they finished their explorations. Then they continued on the hills.

It took them a while to make it to the final stretch of hills. But it was well worth it.

Markus strained his eyes, looking in the same direction as Jonathen. "Huts."

"Yeah. A bunch of them, it seems."

"Think they're friendly?" asked Markus.

Jonathen shrugged. "We had good luck with the Chinooks. We have a few with us. I'll see what they know." He called a halt to the men. "Hey, Hari! Do you know anything about this area or those people?"

Hari stared over at the village. "Yes, I know them. They are the Chanca. We've only traded with them once in my lifetime, but we are on good terms. There is an understanding that the north is our territory, and this is theirs. Of course, now the north is your territory."

"I suppose it is our job to bring them up to speed on current affairs, eh? Do they have anything useful?" asked Jonathen.

Hari shook his head. "They're quite poor, which is why we've only traded once. They like to explore, so they might have knowledge of the surrounding areas. Could save us a lot of time in the long run."

"Thanks for the information, Hari. You're dismissed," said Jonathen. He looked at Markus. "Well? Looks like we're about to go visiting."

Markus nodded. "Let's be careful."


The following events took place around the same time.


It had taken them a week to make it. But finally, Geral and his warriors stood atop the conquered mountain, victorious and basking in the glory that came from staring across the vast plains to their west, the forest to the north, and the grassland to their east.

And the smoke rising from the village directly below them at the base of the mountain.

"Well, Captain?" asked one of the men. "What's the plan?"

Geral considered their position. For all he knew, these were hostile natives. "Do you Chinooks know anything about these guys?"

Some muttering and a general shaking of heads prevailed. One spoke up. "We've never ventured this far west. We can't tell you anything about them."

Geral shrugged. "Well, we'll just have to go and see for ourselves, then. Stay sharp, be aware. We don't know what they're like."


The following events took place about a day later.


"So, you say that your people come from the far north?" the chief of the Chanca tribe asked. He called himself Hinami.

Jonathen nodded. "Yes, we were nomads for as long as the oldest of our elders could remember, but only recently have we settled down. Not long after that, the Chinooks decided to join us. We're here because we were tasked with scouting out the surrounding land. We saw your village from the hills a few days ago, and have been making our way here since then. Would you be willing to share information about the surrounding area with us?"

Hinami listened to Jonathen's appeal, then closed his eyes in thought. They had been speaking in the trade language that, according to Hari, was used throughout this region by many of the tribes. Before they had set off, Jonathen had received a crash course in this language, known simply as Trade, and had been practicing every night with Hari and the other Chinooks He had made sure that his top men knew some of the language as well, so they could follow along to the best of their abilities. He was glad he had learned as much as he had. So far, the conversation had gone well.

Hinami hummed to himself in thought, apparently weighing the benefits or consequences of having new potential allies--or enemies--in the area. Finally, he opened his eyes.

"We will share the knowledge that we have of the surrounding territory. If your people and mine feel like trading amongst themselves, they will be allowed to do so. I believe it would be a mutual benefit for there to be friendship between our tribes.”

Jonathen smiled at this and stuck out his hand for Hinami to shake. Hinami looked at it, puzzled, and Jonathen showed him how to put his own hand into Jonathen's and move them up and down. Hinami smiled at their custom and clapped Jonathen on the back saying, "Now, we will show you how the Chanca celebrate new friendships."


The following events took place about three hours later.


After much feasting, drinking, new friendships, and discussions of all sorts, Jonathen and Markus retired to Hinami's tent to view what he called a "map." It was practically a series of drawings, showing where the land changed from hills to grassland to plains. All in all, it was quite fascinating. Jonathen and Markus committed themselves to memorizing the map and its details as perfectly as they could. Then Jonathen noted something strange to the south of where the Chanca marked the edge of the territory. An area of sickly greens and blues with dizzy swirls hovering overhead took up much of the map's southern edge. His curiosity aroused, he motioned to Hinami, who had been standing to the side as the pair had been studying the map, and pointed to that area. "What can you tell me about this place, Hinami?"

Instantly, Hinami's expression changed. What had been before a face of willingness and help changed to a face of fear and uncertainty. "Why do you want to go there?" he challenged.

"We're explorers," Markus said. "It's what we do."

"Then I would advise you, as a new friend, to explore to the west or east and avoid the south entirely," said Hinami.

"And why is that?" Jonathen asked sharply. "If there is something there that you wish to hide, then let us know and we will certainly avoid it. But if this is a place of superstition and myth, then we will do our best to remove that fog from it."

Hinami stared into the flame of the fire that illuminated the small tent. "Like you say, it is a place of superstition and myth. But not unfounded, oh no. The Chanca have lost too many young, headstrong warriors to the beasts and wild men that roam that area. Not to mention the pitfalls awaiting one at every step. Each one may very well be your last. If you wish to go, then do so, but know that I would watch you die with a heavy heart knowing that I did not persuade you away from a foolish idea."

Jonathen and Markus looked at each other. "We swore to our leader to explore dangerous places and search out the land for our tribe. We will not back down from this challenge. What do you call this area?"

Hinami gritted his teeth.

"The Marshes of Death!"


End of Chapter Five.
 
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