TerraNES: The Civil Experiment

The thing is, anyone can leverage anything to summon lots of troops. Religion is usually the easiest; Patriotism is another. Loyalty (especially in a fuedal society *coughiggycough*) is also a way to get extra troops.

However, all those troops are not just for Tycho to play with, those are for Omar to play with, and if Omar decides that the Iron Lances don't like Tycho's orders, he feels quite free to send opposing orders.
 
I don't give a about my little empire, Tycho. It is actually a deep-seated vendetta I have for most religion in general. Nothing personal against you at all, by the way.

And no, fanatics are stupid.

Mmm, true, but they are good troops and whatnot when used in the right way. No problem with your beliefs Eltain, I just wanted a very powerful, warring religion to play with.
 
I could, theoretically, join as Omar the Iron Prophet, yes?
 
Exporting the Story List here.
Spoiler Updates 1-10 :

Update 0: Rise of Civilization-Commentary by Aliens
-Nicata Ramana, the First of the Kings-Eltain of Ctesiphod
-Vallarvalian History of Valyaria-Tycho of Sarkov
-The Emperor Speaks; Contest of Art-General Olaf of Xilaroi
-Prehistoric Aramya-Stockholme of Aramya
-Dakinsa the City-Southern King of Dakinsa Raj
Update 1: The Kindling-Commentary by The Stone Cutters Guild
-Rezzemus' Choice-erez87 of Anor
-Sarklov at Peace-Tycho of Sarkov
-Cry of the Falcon-electric925 of Gyrid
-Nicata Ograda at the Seige of Agame-Eltain of Ctesiphod
-Salman, Rajpalya of Varldaphair-SouthernKing of Dakinsa Raj
-Toras-Noth: Return to Ziril-Moldath of Toras-Noth
-Etar the High Chief; High-Shaman's Puppetry-Moldath of Toras-Noth
-Musings of King Launar-Stockholme of Aramya
-Salman and Amit, The Road to Varldaphair- Southern King of Dakinsa Raj
-King Sarlov and Sarklov's Plan-Tycho of Sarkov
-Etar the High Chief; Standing on His Own-Moldath of Toras-Noth
-The Emperor Speaks; Treating with the Xiong-General Olaf of Xilaroi
Update 2: The Spark AND The Rise of Religion-Art by Tomb Drawers, Medieval Scholars, Modern Historians
-Prince Hungwe's Right of Passage-BSmith1068 of Zimbabwe
-Illyra and the Sarkovite Raid-Eltain of Ctesiphod
-Sarklov II: A King with a Soul-Tycho of Sarkov
-First Dynasty of Anor: The Dynasty of Osiris-erez87 of Anorian Egypt
-Pyramids of Nahan Ra-erez87 of Anorian Egypt
-2900-2985 B.C.E. Aramya: Fear and Rage-Stockholme of Aramya
-Sylman the Strong Plans for War-Tycho of Sarkov
-Thoughts of the kudust Thrasca-Moldath of Toras-Noth
-Second Dynasty of Anor: Nahan and Nafer RaAnd King Raas-erez87 of Anorian Egypt
-Birth of the Tribe of Canaan-Tyo of Canaan
-The Dreams of Isis-Erez87 of Anorian Egypt
-The Known World - Anorian year 103 records by Erez87 of Anorian Egypt
-The Known World-Sarkovite Senate by Tycho of Sarkov
Update 3: The The Fearsome Fierce-some Fire/Part 2-Commentary by Billy Mays and PBS
Chinese Combat Correspondence Updates-A/B/C
-Axum's Trade log of the Nile by spaceman98 of Axum
-Abdal the Bandit / King Zoskales by spaceman98 of Axum
-Rise of Magnalorum Part I: Overseer/Part II: Rumen/Vox Populi-By Eltain of Ctesiphod
- So You Want to Help Us... by General Olaf of Xilaroi
-Introductions to Osismied: Raid;Invasion;Conquest;The Great Queen and Her Court; New Beginnings by Gem Hound of Osisimied
-Aramya 2850-2800: Bureaucracy and Diplomacy by Stockholme of Aramya
-Cytrian View of History by Eltain of Ctesiphod
-Musings of a Noble; Tales of an Elder; Torasetar at Zirilwine by Moldath of Toras-Noth
- The Armorican Chronicle: Part I by Gem Hound of Oisismied
Another View of the Second Dynasty of Anor by erez87 of Anorian Egypt
-King Raas Greatness of Bast by erez87 of Anorian Egypt.
Update 4: Merchants and Minds/ Part 2-Commentary by History Teachers
Compendium of Maps up to 2800 B.C.
-Axum's Trade Log: Part 2-By Spaceman of Axum
-Armorican Trade Log of the Dividing Sea-By Gem Hound of Osisimied
-Toras Merchant's reminisce of Torasetara V-By Moldath of Toras-Noth
-Interrogator Sarroth by Eltain of Ctesiphod
-"Beware of the Ship from the East"-By Spaceman98 of Axum
-Neumann and Kerlin: Spreading the Faith-By Tycho of Valyria, Kingdom of (Formerly Sarkov)
-A Detailed Summary of the Faith-By Tycho of Valyria, Kingdom of (Formerly Sarkov)
-Aramya 2800-2750 BCE: Being Cool and Bored-By Stockholme of Aramya
-Sarklov III and the Settlements-By Tycho of Valyria
-The End of Ra;the Rise of Wadjet-By Erez87 of Anorian Egypt
-A Husband for the Torasetara?- By Moldath of Toras-Noth
-Last Minute Medical School!-by Spaceman98 of Axum
-Nile Political Cartoon-By Spaceman98 of Axum
-Rise of Exnotism- by TerrisH of Atyria
Update 5: Of Trials and Trepidation/Part 2
-Crying for Ctesiphod-By Eltain of Ctesiphod
-Grey Orders-By Tycho of Valyria
-The Known World at 2750 B.C.-by erez87 of Anorian Egypt
-From the Articles of Cleansing in the Faith- By Tycho of Valyria
-Young Prince, Old Kingdom- By erez87 of Anorian Egypt
-Carrying out the Orders- By Tycho of Valyria
-General Rachus and his orders- By Tycho of Valyria.
-Axum Trade Guide Part 3+Boiling Brew-By Spaceman of Axum
-2750-2700 Aramya: Autumn and Rubric-By Stockholme of Aramya
-Autumn and Moser-by Stockholme of Aramya
-On Succession in Torasnoth-Moldath of Torasnoth
-Overveiw of Altyria goverment inthe first post plauge period-TerrisH of Atyria
-The Third Dynasty of Anor-by Erez of Anorian Egypt
Update 6: Green Death and Grey Skies/Part 2
-Pre-Plague Axum-Spaceman of Axum
-2700-2650 Aramya: Queens and Qrushing-Stockholme of Aramya
-A Pivotal Declaration-By Eltain of Ctesiphod
-Orders for Cleansing-By Tycho of Valyria
-Flames, Ashes, Exodus and the Final Hour- By Tycho of Valyria
-A Plague on the People, a Pox on the Pharaoh-By Erez of Anorian Egypt
-Rise of a Fall-By Erez of Anorian Egypt
-The Plague Comes Close to Home-By Spaceman of Axum
-The Plague at the Doorsteps-By Spaceman of Axum
Update 7: Falling Cities and Rising Crisies-Commentary by a Zirilist Monk
-Bad Day for Cytrians-By Eltain of Ctesiphod
-The Beginning of the Intermediate End-By Erez of Thebes
-From the Journals of the Faithful: Grey Death/Red Death/Ashland Survivor
-Rebuilding Trade-By Spaceman of Axum
-Deaths Bring Change-By Eltain of Ctesiphod
-Three Stone Tablets-By Stockholme of Aramya
-How Far We Can See-By General Olaf of Xiyi
-Of Vesuva and Zirilia: The Start of the Schism-By Moldath of Toras-Noth
-The Lijurian Company-By Moldath of Toras-Noth
-Quiet! QUIET!-By Eltain of Ctesiphod
-A Detailed Summary of The Faith-Tycho of The Sarkovian Hordes
-A Veteran's Song from the Sark Wars-Moldath of Toras-Noth
-Song of the Fallen-Tycho of the Sarkovian Hordes
-Timeline of Xiyi-By General Olaf of Xiyi
-Trade of the World-By Erez of Thebes
-Rocking the Boat-By Spaceman of Axum
Update 8: The Hopeful Coasts of the Sea of Despair
-Return of Baragan-Bel By Lord Iggy of Hyak Rebellion
-History of the Faith and of Valyria, the lost Homeland, as told through the accounts of Violet Faith Historian-By Tycho of Vahlsallah.
-2600-2550 Aramya: The Maelstrom-By Stockholme of Aramya
-Baragan's Challenge-By Lord Iggy of Hyak Rebellion
-Excerpt from the diary of King Derfel the 12th-By Gem Hound of Osisimied
- Schroedinger's Merchant-By Eltain of Ctesiphod
Update 9: To Balance a Scale
-The New Empire-Christos of Byzantinos
-Frenkish Assassination-By Gemhound of Osisimied
-King Oneius III, A Play-By Eltain of Ctesiphod
-Iron Lances-By Tycho of Vahlshallah
-The Colossos of Apulia-By Eltain of Ctesiphod
-Remeniscing-By Tycho of Vahlshallah
-2550-2500 Plateau: The Rising-By Stockholme of Etass
-Much Change, Money and Politics-By Spaceman98 of Axum
-Salt and Fire and Earth-By General Olaf of Xiyi
-The Savarari-By Southern King of Dakinsa Raj
-Recollections-By Tycho of Vahlshallah
-Prologue-By Myself
Update 10: Experience and Entropy
-Maelstrom Politics-By Stockholme of Aramya
-Egypt's New Dawn-By Erez of Thebes
-Non-Player Catalogue-By Myself the MOD
-2500-2450: The Highland Adventure-By Stockholme of Etass
-Dakinsa Rajlist Part 1-by SouthernKing of Dakinsa Raj
-The Iron lances: A Summary-By Tycho of Vahlshallah
-The World Burns; Words of the Firebrand Prophet-By Tycho of Vahlshallah
-Preview 1 of Update 11-By Myself the MOD
-The War of the Frenks and the Rise of Armorica-By Gem Hound of Armorica
-Exploration of Levea-By Spaceman of Axum
-Cardilar Leoneo; The Kingdom of Leon-By Milarqui of Leon
-Heros in the Fog-By Eltain of Ctesiphod
-He Who Brings Annihilation-By Lord Iggy of Hyaks
-And So They Drilled-SKILORD of Levantine League
-I Shall Do My Best-By SKILORD of Levantine League
-Listening at the Door-By Optical of Xiyi
-Nenekatae Empire-By Tambien of Nenekatae
-The Great Voyage-By SouthernKing of Dakinsa Raj
-Preview 2 of Update 11-By MYSELF the MOD
-Prayer to Takarzi-By Lord Iggy of Hyak
Update 11: A Brave New World
-The Heart of Your Heir-By Erez of Neo-Egpyt
-Who did this? The CYTRIANS-By Tycho of Vahshallah
-Response: Only Good Faithful are Dead Faithful-By Eltain of Ctesiphod
-2450-2400: The Changing Dynasts-By Stockholme of Etass
--Minigame 1: Mating and Marriage: Submissions shall be italicized after a triple dash and marked with M1 for minigame 1, M2 for minigame 2 ect.
-Story of the Frenkish War-By Gemhound of Armorica
---M1: Marriage by the Blade-By Chrisos of Clan Kato
---M1: Laws and Customs-By Stockholme of Etass
---M1: A Messed Up Society-By Tambien of Nenekatae
---M1: Simple and Easy-By Tycho of Vahshallah
---M1: Of Heart but not Of Fancy- By Eltain of Ctesiphod
---M1: Overkill-By Gemhound of Armorica
---M1: Dannu and Takarzi-By Lord Iggy of Hyak
-Overview of Kitabalist Religious History-By Stockholme of Aramya
---M1: Boats and Bonding-By Southern King of Dakinsa
---M1: Falling off the Bridge- By Optical of Xiyi
-Bloody Omar's Coming Back!-By Tycho of Vahshallah
---M1: State Marriage and the Binding of the League-SKILORD of the Levantine League
---M1: A Hundred Weddings-By Erez of Neo-Egypt
---M2: Flag of the League-By SKILORD of Levantine League
---M2: Banner of the Druids-By Gemhound of Armorica
---M2: Flag of the Republic-By Eltain of Ctesiphod
---M2: Symbol of Aramya-By Stockholme of Etass
---M2: Bloody Hand of Takarzi-By Lord Iggy of Hyak
---M2: Flag of Vahshallah-By Tycho of Vahshallah
-The Heir's Heart-By Erez of Neo-Egypt
---M2: The Sea and the Sword-By Southern King of Dakinsa
---M1: A Different View-By Erez of Neo-Egypt
---M1: Geneovefa and Gwrtheyrn-By Gemhound of Armorica
-Shipmaster's Favor-By SKILORD of Levantine League
---A Red Wedding-By Tycho of Vahshallah
-In Service of Ius-By SKILORD of Levantine League
-People of Pyrrhus-By Eltain of Ctesiphod
-Ethnicity of Egypt-By Erez of Neo-Egypt
---Minigame Grading Scale
-Ius and Tyre-By SKILORD of Levantine League
-In the Dead of Night-By Optical of Xiyi
---M1 and M2: Marriage and a Flag-By Spaceman of Axum
---M1: Exnot Marraige-By TerrisH of Makedonia
---M1: Symbols of Neo-Egypt-By erez of Neo-Egypt
---Results of Minigame 1---
---Banner of Xiyi-By Optical of Xiyi
-Preview 3 of Update 11- By MYSELF the MOD
-Rules for Religions-By MYSELF the MOD
-Preview 4 of Update 11-By MYSELF the MOD
-Great Temple Complex of Osiris-By Erez of Neo-Egypt
-Ambassador and Administrator-By Lord Iggy of Hyak

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Warrior Laws of Japan:

1) All Japanese must train 7 hours the day in the arts of the war.

2) Anyone who kills less than 3 soldiers in the battlefield will be executed.

3) Anyone who kills more than 100 soldiers in the battlefield will become advisor of the Emperor.

4) The Japanese fight in the name of the Sun God, the emperor and their nation.

5) Those who die while fighting will find salvation in the heaven.
 
Update for Update 13
Orders Recieved
erez
spaceman98
SKILORD
Tambien
Stockholme
Chrisos
Gem Hound
Daftpanzer
Revisions Required
Orders Not Recieved
Lord Iggy
Southern King-Claims Tuesday
Lord of Elves
Tycho-Making Contingencies
Luckymoose
General Olaf
Lokki-Claims Tuesday (first turn)

Remember, Orders are Due Wednesday. I'm angling for a Friday Update 13th.
No VMs this turn, because I'm buckling down for AP stats test! Wish me luck. :D
 
Good luck!

Orders here will be in tomorrow, notwithstanding any difficuties of course.
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Beginning
Before

The Storm

Picture the scene in your head, then, student. A lord of the Xi people lies dead of a heart attack in his room. His daughter is dead. His son waits to kill his liege. His liege has chosen to continue a centuries-old lie.

This night was chosen as a major turning point in the history of our people. Perhaps the gods ordained it, perhaps it was humans and their successes and errors that brought our people to this point. Either way, it was fated to happen. Given what happened, it's essentially impossible to argue it wasn't.

...​

A guard stands outside the throne room at Xiyi. Proud and perhaps a little bit arrogant, this guard is charged to guard the Emperor with his life. However, he is simply a member of the militia. The real Guardsmen lie in hiding, nearly one hundred strong and guarding the Emperor's life far more efficiantly than this peasant ever could. However, there is one other major difference between the militiaman and the Silent Guardsman hiding a little down the hall.

One is loyal to the Silent Emperor, and the other to Lord Jin Fei.

A casual observer would probably think that any conflict between the two men would involve cutting of throats by the Silent Guardsman. That observer might, then, be surprised when the militiaman moves, very silently, down the hall. The clash of weapons from further down the hall makes the Silent Guardsman glance away. Too late, he realises that there is a spear in the back of his neck. It's the last thing he ever realises.

...​

Lord Jin Fei looked at the dead guardsman standing in the pool of blood in disgust. It wasn't an accident he'd chosen this man's shift to strike; the Emperor's brother had been on Fei's blacklist for a long time. Now, in an act of cold vengeance for the death of his sister, the man was dead.

The absence of Lord Jin meant the door was unguarded, but not for long. Three Silent Guardsmen materialised outside the Emperor's throne room. They removed their helmets, revealing their faces. The men Jin Fei had chosen were mostly of his class, disillusioned men in positions of power; the Chief Scholar of the emperor's libraries, the governor of La Yang and the Emperor's seneschal stood in front of him now. Five other major nobles waited to strike in various areas of the palace, with several of their personal guards at their disposal.

But now, it was time to have a little face-to-face chat with the Emperor himself.

...​

The door creaks open. The Emperor looks up.

The conspirators have once again donned their helmets, beacuse dramatics are an art of their own and even somebody whose life is about to end can appreciate the subtleties of narrative imperative.

They walk up to the Emperor, and one by one, they draw their swords. Hard swords, made of a tougher metal, supplied by a guardsman whose secret mission had been to infiltrate the mine in which Lord Jin's sister had died. Fortuitously, this was the one guard who had survived to tell the tale.

The guards remove their helmets.

"I thought so. Sooner or later, somebody was bound to come for my head. I recognise you, Yang" he said, nodding to the seneschal. "Wei." This time, the Silent Emperor's gaze was directed at the Chief Scholar. "Lord Sung, although I'm surprised and a little disappointed. But you," he said with perhaps a little of a snigger in his voice, looking straight at Jin Fei, "I don't believe I've met."

"My name wouldn't mean anything to you. I'll give it to you anyway. It's Jin Fei. Lord Jin Fei. My father suffered a heart attack, after hearing the news of his daughter's death. I believe this is something you're aware of? Of course it is. Your brother was involved."

"You'd have to ask him."

"That could be difficult, considering his current state of being. My sister's death is not yet atoned for, but your brother's death helped cover part of the debt."

"Is that all this is, Lord Jin? A personal vendetta? How charming. I'll fight you myself, if it would make you feel better. I have an heir."

"You don't deserve the honour. You know what you and your family did. You hid a major part of Confucius' writings from the people you are responsible for. From a peasant that would be a minor offence, but for the Emperor? You know yourself that it is unacceptable. You and your family, for the sake of this nation, must be rooted out."

"You'll kill me here? But you'll be the murderer, the criminal. If you kill me now, my men will execute you."

"Which men are those? There are ninety-four Silent Guardsmen in this palace right now. Four stand before you. Sixty are loyal to us. Thirty guards against sixty-three - and sixty-three on the right side, mark you - doesn't make for an even fight. I daresay the commoners will turn on your family when the truth comes out anyhow."

"Well, kill me now then. Or are you too much of a coward?"

The other three men had to hold Jin Fei back. He was on the point of breaking loose when the Emperor spoke again.

"I could run away, you know; I wouldn't stand there wondering what to do if I were you."

Before the four men could move, the Emperor jumped out of his chair, ran toward the window and was out within the space of ten seconds.

The sight wasn't pretty. The Emperor's palace is located on a hill. One side opens onto the city. This side, the side with the windows, drops off down to the Yellow River.

There are rocks at the bottom. Some of them are red.

After
 
Prologue Update 13

His story done, the Sardican merchant left the stage. "NEXT" called the vizier, and the next guest walked onto the raised dias.

"Raguel is-was I should say-from Toras-noth. He brings news of their recent... issues"

The battered Zirilist knealt before the God-King.

"My King.

It started as a war between men...

But, unknowingly to us, it became a war between gods..."

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Daramoto looked into his wounded brother's eyes. "I... I survived my first battle"

But Taragawa summoned his strength and grabbed his brother by the arm. "How... how many did you kill"

Daramoto thought for a moment, then blanched, "Only... only two"

Taragawa, "Damn it!" as he tried to sit up. The spear had pierced his battered armor and stabbed into his stomach, and he knew it was a mortal wound.

They breathed heavily, embracing each other.

"Kill me" said Taragawa "Paint the mark of the enemy on me"

"No! I can't!" cried his brother, "At least you should die with honor! You had 99 kills!"

Taragawa gave a sad smile, "I will still die for honor. For you, to save the best sword in Japan."

He hardened his voice, "If you won't do it, I will do it myself. You MUST survive, or our clan will fall.

And Father will be shamed."

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Teir Aram sat in one of the overlooks above Etass. He sighed, for he has just been declared King of Etass and Chief Administrator of the Envisionaries.

The peasants looked to him with pride and admiration. They trust his leadership, but even all those lessons by his father, Edguar (even when he needed to attack a fort nearly a week's march away tomarrow morning) he was unsure of himself.

His advisors stood behind him. They are awaiting his acceptance speech.

"I am the state" he said, and the crowd cheered. He turned away to the War Council.

It was true, after all. There was no more Etass. Etass is occupied by the barbaric Hyaks.

But there is Tier Aram, and all who are loyal to him and only him.
 
Good Luck.
 
"No! I can't!" cried his brother, "At least you should die with honor! You had 99 kills!"

99 kills? It seems that my warrior law is working very well. If he had killed one more enemy he would have become a well paid official. But oh well, at least i will have 1 less wage to pay.
 
In the misty islands of the north, the high druids gather and forsee the rise of a great line of kings...



Daftpanzer is now Dumonos. Hi :)
 
Will get my orders into your box in a bit, Terrance, trying to draft up battle orders as well.
 
Beginning
Before

The Aftermath

"A thousand years! A thousand years!"

The old emperor was dead. They'd found his broken body on the rocks by the Yellow River, head smashed in. His body was taken to the funeral pyre immediately, burnt at a funeral kept private for his family. His soul... who knew.

The old royal family of Xiyi had been shamed when they heard of the secret the Emperor had kept. Only the Emperors had known. Jin Fei had placed them under his protection.

That was Emperor Fei now. A new dynasty graced the grand city of Xilatang, and even Fei himself wasn't entirely sure how he felt about it. But new ways would have to rise, and the old make way. Shining Confucianism would take the place of Silent, Jin replace Xi.

In Xiyi, only change is immortal.
 
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