stDarNES1: Stars!

2 points to buying Transports
Bank 1 point for great prosperity

New Fleet: Military Exploration Group (MEG). [2 Carriers, 50 fighters, 1 scout.]
New Fleet: Military Investigation Group (MIG). [3 Carriers, 75 fighters]
Move Backwater Fleet to Enemsi
Move MEG to Sabro
Move MIG to Broder
Continue with project.

(Darwin420, I'll send these as a PM too, I just want to check if they're acceptable.)
 
Star Report #3 Cotyie System

as Remarkably Barren System, it's is the First System Trinity has Explored beyond it's Own. Composed of an very active White Giant, a Single Planet, an da half Dozen Belts of Debris (a few look like they were planets once, but were destroyed by means unknown).

The White Giant Is possibly the most interesting Feature of the System. It is Extremely Active, and almost hourly, it tosses Random Flares Out. something is obviously wrong with it's interior. possibly a Third gate, if the reaction the Star has to the two currently know gates are any hint. I recommend an Imitated Dispatch of Supplies to Establish a Research Station.

The Only Planet In the System Offers some possibility for a Location to Establish the Research Station. the Stable Orbit, and the fact that It is Tidally Locked with the Star means there is a small patch Solid Ground. The Rest of the Planet is Molten from the great heat of the Star.

The gate to Trinity Is located the Same Distance out as it is in our own System, while the Other known Gate is located just inside the orbit of the sole planet, Almost Directly over the north Stellar Pole. There is Intense Solar Activity around it, and the Control Node Get's Struck every 2-3 days.
I also Recommend we sek to improve our Ships Sheilding. the Radiation is pretty Intense out here, and so far it has not been a problem, but we have been forced to devert emergency power to them several times for safety. I would prefer a slightly Greater Safety Margin.
 
Centaus a new system, word had reached The populance of Hr'Tor of the new system and the fairly ample resources to be had.

Coupled with the Home world bursting at the seams with the massive population that it wasn't ready to cope with it was decided to fund a Colonisation mission.

Then came the thinking of the status of this expedition, was it a colony or was it just a further extention of the Homeworld?

The Tradtionalists argued that they should stick with the succesful formulae the one that had let the Kingdom suceed, others thought it would be best for the colony and Hr'Tor to simply have it as body under the command of the military, although this would nessitate a Military presence.

It was eventually decided to simply to devolve power to the would be colonists on most matters apart from Military, foreign policy and a host of other thing that would be decided by the combined Government of both systems, it was like returning to the old days. The colony would not be given extra weighting as it would only have as much voting power in correlation to its population.

It was also perceived that it might be best for the Colony to be able to have Powers Of Immediacy, where upon it was deemed that a threat was of such immediate importance that it required the ability to command all areas of The colony without consulting the Combined assembly. A requirement was a number of safeguards that would limit if not stop all malicious usages of this act.

With that all preperation were made and the rest was just to wait.

OOC: Hmm not one of my better stories :/ I'll try and get another one in.
 
The Trinity sat On their throne's. each facing each other, each in complication over the Events of the last meeting of the senate. well, two of them. the third.. well..

"I'v got a lovely can os Spam!" the third Emperor said, his left eye tracking nothing, his right staring off into space.

"We really should have him Abicated soon." the second emperor Said to the first. "Old Charlie hasn't quiet been the same since that Stroke."

The first Emporie looked at Charlie, then back to the second emperor. "I agree. But the current Inheritor, Lord Gendo, leave's.. something to be desired. he's a bit to ambitious." the First Sighed "I plan to have him Asigned to this new Outpost in the Cotyie system System Governor For Life, or something Like that. he will have a whole system to play with, and Lady Misato is next in Line for the throne after him. She Is Much more Agreeable on the Eyes. not to mention, she is not a Evil Scheming Bas@#$."

"SPam Spam Spam Spam Spam Spam Spam Spam Spam Spam Spam Spam Spam Spam *GURGLE* *BARF* I think I just puked up one of my kittens!"

"... Agreed. Perhaps we should think about Abicating soon Also. we do not want to end up like him. I want to live to see my Great Grand Children. Preferably Sane." the Second emperor motioned to a nearby Atendent and motioned to the third, indicating to clean the mess up "On to the Next Issue. The Syphir has Cleared the Docks, and the Ra Might Be finished as soon as next month. which System should take Priority. Nolat, to the Galactic north, Or Quostellis to the Galactic South? I personally Suggest the South."

"Southy wothiy, southern Cross!"

"well, that two votes for south.. So I'll Go along with it." the First Shrugged "Nolat sounded Easier On the toung."

"Very True. What About the Obilisk's Crew's Suggestion to Re-Name Cotyie System to Hari, in honor of Pilot-Corporal Hari? they Expect her to recover before the next jump, by the way."

"Sounds Responsible. Forward it to the papers, and the Obilisk. and be sure to Include the fact we rewired the pilot Controls on the Syphilr and Ra so it won't happen to them also. I can't Belive they Forgot to design in Fuses to the bloody things." the first Sighed

"Very Embarrassing that was. the sub-contractor responsible has been reprimanded, of course." the Second emperor gave an off hand wave. "and that, I belive is the Last Major Item we must Discuss. I with to return to seem my Grand children now. We'll go over the other Issue by Remote. Is that Al right?"

"Agreed. 13.5 certerpoint Time?"

"sounds right. Goodnight, Shinji."

"Goodnight Michial."
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OOC: I really need to knowif I have three Scout ships, or only two? oh, and I might Write one more story befor the Update. ^_^ get in those Stories people. 3 days to the proposed update.. I think. he did say the 30th, right?
 
@terrish: Fixed your stats. You do have 2 scoutships.

Orders are due Friday 0900EST. The Update will be posted by Monday.

Due to the sheer amount of compiling needed to do the updates, this will be the norm. That way, you all get a quality update, and I won't have my head explode. :D
 
Oh, and PLEASE write stories, people... I really don't want to penalize anyone...
 
Lord_Iggy - once you research sufficient levels of technology (the exact combo unknown), then you will be able to defeat the Scourge. As of right now, it is still a major threat to any Faction encountering it.

So far I have received orders from only 2 people...
 
I will send mine soon. but, i'm not really comfortable about the fact that i get penalties for not writing stories. I simply don't have that much time to write proper stories, it would take me at least two hours to write one, and i have LOTS of projects for this season in school + advanced math, so i don't have that much free time in my hands...
 
andis-1 said:
I will send mine soon. but, i'm not really comfortable about the fact that i get penalties for not writing stories. I simply don't have that much time to write proper stories, it would take me at least two hours to write one, and i have LOTS of projects for this season in school + advanced math, so i don't have that much free time in my hands...
take care of school first :D
but maybe try for a shorter story?
i know, i would, for one, prefer a GOOD short story over a long medicore one.
 
A brief, one-paragraph story will do.. the bare minimum asked for is something roughly akin to a short post.. it helps flesh out the game, which is one reason why this is a story NES.

I'm going to be nice... due to the holiday season, no stories are required this turn. Also, Turn orders will be due by SUNDAY, coz of the New Year. I'll start the update on Monday. Who says I don't have any holiday cheer? ;)
 
The following report has been recovered from a surviving copy of 'Dominion Planet Census and Travel Guide'. The section on Haven is reprinted here, word for word.

*****

Planet Name: Xanthus Prime
Star: Xanthus
Star type: White- Young and High energy
Planet type: Highly tectonic crust, active mantle, solid nickel core.
Industry: Agriculture, Mining

Xanthus Prime, commonly named 'Haven' by its inhabitants, is a very majestic world. It is extremely geologically active, and despite regular volcanic and tremor activity its incredible ecosystem recovers in days.

The landscape is extremely steep, and massive volcanic obsidian spires called 'obelisks' appear almost everywhere. The cities of Xanthus Prime are built on the sides of the larger obelisks, silvery spheres and geometric towers, growing out of the reflective black rocks like jewels.

Inside these obelisk cities, massive hydroponic systems provide huge excesses of food, which is exported all over the dominion. Their use as a granary world is probably the most surprising thing that you could learn, considering what the planet first appears to be- an exotic resort world.

Xanthus Prime is also well known as a nexus of material sciences research. Its secluded university cities have been at the leading edge of physical sciences for over a millennium. It was their ship designs that were used in the final defeat of the last non-dominion humans.

The Biology of Xanthus Prime is one of the most resilient in the known universe. Giant invertibrates known as 'Treebugs' wander through the dense forests until they find a few square feet of space with access to light, often where lava has just cleared away some space. They then literally take root and develop growths capable of photosynthesis. The very high energy sun allows them to, within a few days, grow to the size of any other tree, roughly 50-150 meters tall.

Numerous other small plantlike species exist, and spread in similar ways, but none are as huge as the Treebugs.

The more normal animal lifeforms are all invertibrate. Most are herbivores under a meter long. A few predatory species around this size hunt them. There are some massive herbivores around 20 meters at their longest measurement. But by far the most interesting animal is the intelligent 'Crownbeetle'. They hav four legs, two pincer claws coming from the torso, and hundreds of tiny dextrous tentacles beneath the mouth. Above their toothless and mandible-less mouths is a strange cartiliginous formation, the 'crown' in the animal's name. The crowns are all unique, although those from the same tribe share features.

The Crownbeetles live deep in the forests, and communally hunt larger invertibrates. Their primitive society is of great interest to researchers, who are trying to learn about races who are on the verge of becoming civilizations.

From jungle valleys to obelisk cities, airy universities to exotic safaris, the planet called 'Haven' is a unique world, with something for both the quiet thinkers and wild adventurers.
 
Nice Story Iggy.

Here my one, a special christmas extra long one. All later ones will be much shorter.

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{14}
{15}
{16(Urgent)}
{Checking Conditions list}
{Urt, Jeffen.*Urgent(highest priority_civilian)*Auth_check=Passed}
{Check_User}
{mEEGimplant tele=Deep Sleep}
{Awake User}
{datatext}

[Hort wake up please; You have a priority message from Elder Urt]

{mEEGimplant tele=Deep Sleep}
{Awake User}
{vocalisation and projected image}


“Hort, this is your exoself; you have a priority message from Elder Urt”

{mEEGimplant tele=Deep Sleep}
{Awake User=Standard==Fail}
{Accessing:Archives}
{Awake User=Louder Vocalizations?}
{Archives:Past==Fail}
{Awake User=???}
{Archives:Alert=Entity_Caregiver/Mother}
{Searching= Entity_Caregiver/Mother}
{NoEntitiesFound==HawkingLoft6}
{Awake User=???}
{Archives:???}
{Creativity Required}
{Accessing:CorpProcessingCore}
{CorpProcessingCore:???}
{Request:MoreResources_Duration(0.01s)}
{CorpProcessingCore:Granted+QueryAddedToAccountsFile}
{Accessing:Layer(7)ThoughtRoutine(Creativitity-HortFallon1.6Trawl(Class4-039/5678)}
{Generating Virtual Neural structure}
{…}

{What? We’re asleep again! For cruds sake lets have no more of my nonsense!}

{…}
{Accessing:NewDirective}
{Accessing:BioMoniter_Root}
{Accessing:BioMoniter_LeftButtock}
{Engaging:TempBatteryOveride}
{Engaging:ChargeRelease}
…


“Ow!” Hort was nearly thrown from his sleepweb as his legs spasmed upwards.
“What’s going on?”
“Priority communication from Jeffen Urt, Clan elder.” His exoself system spoke in his ear, in a slightly higher and softer version of his own voice. Hort took a couple of seconds to digest the news; still off balance from the shock. His exoself vocalizing did not help this – it hardly ever did that after all.
“Wait a sec; Urt? And he’s calling me!?” Jeffen Urt; rumoured to be over a century old, wealthy beyond Horts imagination, admittedly quite an easy task, one of the most respected elders in Clan Hawking Green. And most importantly, after the subcontracting of Hort’s collective last week, Hort’s paymaster and bondholder. However, even in a Corp as small as Horts, Hort was no mover and shaker. Out couple of batches of eager kids with a machine shop and a few pocked old space rats to act as mentor, thirty odd in total, Hort barely rated the top ten, and that was mainly acting as a gofer to his brother Gart, the elected leader of the Corp. Thus while he had met the old man, and even spoken with him, he had never been the focus of attention, something that Hort was very happy with.

[Correct on both counts Hort, the message is being routed directly from a signal coming in on the ‘Lofts tightbeam array. It is not real time or contiguous, but the tone of his voice suggests some urgency]Fully awake now, and his sensorium stabilised, Hort also switched to the much faster medium of datatexting, as subvocalizations were read directly from his cortex with a very low power trawl from his headset.
[What’s the signal delay? Why does he want me?]
[Elder Urt seems to be transmitting from a source with a 13 second delay; suggesting a distance of over 3.8 million clacks away. It is being routed through a private source, but simultaneous signals suggest he is near the Eldorado his Corp is currently mining. As to why he has requested you; Gart, Jarlet, Elgar, and Sine are all unavailable, and you are next on the comm pecking order]
[All the guys are missing?]

[Yes, there has been a micrometeorite impact on the ‘Lofts primary loom with the Rock. Gart and Jarlet have gone to the north hub market to build those components Elder Urt requested for his new microwave spiders. Sine is visiting his partner. The command core has been attempting to raise them for the last hour or so, but the radio cannot penetrate the crust. ‘loft Maintenance say they will have the fault fixed in an hour or so, as soon as they find the back up.]
[Why the heck didn’t you wake me up earlier?]
[We…]
[No time for that now! Pipe in Elder Urts signal, I guess I’ll have to deal with it.]
[It is a rich AV format]
[Showing off their money again? Load it]

The exchange with his exoself having lasted roughly two seconds, Hort turned his skinny two-and-a-half metre frame to the main projector in his small room and waited on the message. After a few more seconds the project flicked on, orientating itself to Horts horizontal as he floated freely; displaying the old man sitting at his command desk in the heart of some commercial operation. Jeffen Urt was very old, but his face seemed quite clear and unlined, and his hair, though bright white and crazy tufted, still appeared full and thick. What really gave his age away however, was the number of bulky modules and implants with the green caduceus of a biomonitor or medichine that adorned his shipsuit. The dark crimson silicofibre had other units of course; long comm relays and the large processors of someone important, the suit connection points of someone who went outside a lot, but the medichines predominated. This did not detract from his bark of command of course.

“Ah Mr Fallon1.6, The germanium vein turned out extractable with conventional techniques after all. Please tell your brother that we won’t be needing the fine tuner after all. Bye the way; by accessing this you acknowledge our lack of culpability for this, we won’t be refunding you if Gart buys the processor stacks.”

[How much was the stuff Gart was planning to buy?]
Hort crouched against the wall, holding the webbing with his long toes.
[Roughly 27k according to the market buyers guide as of two hours ago]
He instructed the hatch to open.
[And how much to we have in the bank?]
The hatch smoothly began to iris open.
[10k, and the bills for the maintenance cycle are coming up]
Hort was hardly listening as he had already stretched out his legs and launched himself through the hatch. Grabbing onto the hold just outside, he swung about and bounded down the passageway. It would take him a minute and a half to reach the ‘lofts third dock, where the corps vehicles were kept, something he was painfully aware of.

[Alright] Sent Hort, hurtling down a corridor at reckless speed [Send a reply back to Urt, standard stuff thanking him and so on, get the Corp Core to write it, wake someone else up if you have to. Get whoever is closest to meet me in the docking bay, tell them “If you guys want to eat next week, get a move on”. Actually link directly with the core for a sec]
[Link Achieved] If the voice had been vocalised, Hort knew it would now be speaking with the deeper and richer voice that had been written into the corps processing core. He had always suspected that Gart had also made it sound something like himself, he was like that after all. [How can we help, Hort?]
[Keep trying to raise Gart, tell him to not buy the components, we are going to zip down there and try and catch him in person]
Hort had now reached the dock and was slotting on his gauntlets and clawboots, and quickly wrapping up the impact armour as the vaguely sentient memory plastic of his suit flowed into the connections. With his helmet on, he cycled through the airlock on a fast turnabout – normally he’d worry about the expense of losing atmosphere but today he had bigger things to panic over. He went through the suit checklist that every Skyjack had been taught since birth, he was in a rush, not suicidal after all!

The exit port cycled open and Hort clambered out into the scaffolding space between the skin of the loft and the rocky impact shell around its main habitation area. Soaring like some ancient spider monkey between the struts he quickly made his way down to the Corps docking lease, his gauntlets and clawboots ensuring that he never crashed into a strut. The broad gash of the dock in the shell could soon be seen letting light in ahead; Hort and his brothers not yet being able to afford to rent or build a proper docking structure, they simply ran a power and fuel umbilical from a nearby port to a convenient hole in emulation of scores of other low budget organizations on Loft6 alone.

Hort emerged into the light of the dock; the gash was currently facing Orphia and her sharp yellow radiance through everything into harsh relief. There were two figures already in the dock, easily identified by suit markings as distinctive as facial features as a pair of the Hoskey brothers, Kef and Verve to be precise.

[Hort! We got your message, but from the looks of things here we are royally screwed] Kef sent on the primary Corp band.
[What?] Hort replied angrily.
[Gart and Jarlet took the Squid of course]
[So, we take broomsticks?]

[Well, problem with that is – there are no broomsticks. Sine took two to go and visit his lady, lugging some gifts for her or something. And Verve was told to do maintenance on the rest and well…] Kef waved an arm around the dock. Hort followed his gesture and saw the four broomsticks, the four-metre lengths of the unenclosed reaction drive tugs in various stages of disassembly, their internal components scattered around on various stick pads. To underscore this Verve sent a slightly sheepish grin.
[Right. So what have we got?]
[Umm, nothing?] It was Verve that answered this time.
[Nothing? Think harder]
[Got a couple of reaction packs from that sat we were decommissioning last week]
[Good enough, Verve: you get them out here, Kef: Get me some crash foam from these struts]

The brothers were already moving when Kef, always the quicker of the two, sent another message, this time on a private tight beam.
[Your not going to do what I think your going to do are you? You do remember what happened to Stak when you guys last tried this][We also did it successfully, twice!] One of the good things about a datatext was that you didn’t have to put any emotion into it you didn’t want to.
[Whatever you say man]

It was less than two minutes later that the brothers returned, Kef carrying a couple of dark green pads and Verve with three silver cylinders. Host had used the time to don some more impact armour, and put on a manoeuvring harness studded with tiny ion jets. He took the pads from Kef and stuck them to his chest and limbs, checked the initiators were in his command loop, and unspooled some direct connectors from his suit. The Reaction packs weren’t designed for remote activation so he threaded his fibre optics into the ports and gripped the packs in one clawboot. Fully prepared, equipment-wise at least, he gripped the edge of the dock scar, and flipped himself gracefully out onto the outer shell.
[Wish me luck guys] he sent back to the pair in the dock.
[Infi’s dice bless you, you great idiot] Kef replied.
[Whats he doing?] Verve asked.

Hort laughed and closed the connection; this next bit would take concentration after all. Emerging onto the outer shell of the Loft he world had become a flat plain of silvery moulded rock, the horizon perhaps 300 metres away, the plain studded with eruptions of comm arrays and position keeping thrusters. Beyond the horizon he could see more modules of the loft looking like silver triangles embedded in a dark net. The dock was currently facing out, with the rock, and both suns on the other side, he could see nothing but stars and the metal snowflake of Loft9. The other Loft, which must be over 20 klicks away, had five modules to Loft6’s eight but otherwise would look identical; the pentagon of superstructure surrounded by a loose haze of free modules and zero-gee factories.

Loft9’s higher orbit and his own lofts slow rotation soon carried over the horizon, but it was soon replaced by others in lower orbits as the Loft turned towards the rock. Hort had picked out his spot; a low ridge of material, probably a manufacturing defect. When Hawking Green finally rose over the edge of the loft, he gave a little shiver that anyone in his clan, or any other clan for that matter would understand. Hawking Green was quite a small rock as far as major holdings go, about 15 klicks long, like a roughly cylindrical potato about the long axis, naturally dark and made darker by the industry and heat vanes on its surface. Just to look at it you wouldn’t expect it to have 13 zero-gee stations in its orbit, or for it to be home to fifty thousand people, but it had more significance than that.

Hawking Green was a Birthing Rock, it had been spun up to provide >0.1g, and possessing the dense crust necessary to block out radiation. Both are requirements for a successful human pregnancy in the harsh environment of interplanetary space. Every Skyjack was a member of a Clan determined by which Birthing Rock their family had an interest in, Hawking Green had nurtured six generations of Fallons, even versions as down on their luck as the 1.6s, and a number of Horts more illustrious ancestors had served on the Clan executive board and the Conclave of Elders. Hort himself had been born there, and had not left its confines till he was five years old, as was proper. Hawking Green was an old Birthing Rock, and only the big cities on Madya or huge cosmopolitan Rocks like Paris23 had more influence on the System Conclave.

Caught in some childhood memories, Hort almost missed his insertion window, as HG was about a third of the way up the horizon he pushed off the ridge with all his might, redlining the leg servos of his suit exoskeleton. Shooting up into the void, he waited 10 minutes or so until he was half a klick away from the loft, the platform just an object in space rather than a world now, before firing the first of the reaction packs. The manoeuvring harness kept him on a straight trajectory as he shot down towards the Rock.

What he was doing was technically termed freejumping; moving from one object to the next without the use of a engine or thruster pack, using only handheld reaction packs or less, and trusting to your own wit and skill to get you from A to the proverbial B. What made this particular transition so dangerous however was that Hawking Green was rotating to provide gravity to the life caverns inside, so instead of jumping down onto a flat surface, he would be hitting something spinning at least 50 metres a second. Well that was something he could deal with later.

The first pack exhausted, he was content to maintain a smooth parabola, slightly picking up speed from the rocks own tiny gravity. Hawking Green grew in size beneath him, the dark rock ridged and humped with the occasional shiny black out crop of some obsidian like material It was surprisingly uncratered considering its age, it was speculated that it was caught in the detonation of one of the old Dominion antimatter plants during the Fall, melting and reforming the surface into its current tortured outlook. To Host of course, this twisted visage was home and surprisingly beautiful. Layered on the surface were numerous modules and pipelines, all lashed down to prevent them flying upwards. The most significant artificial feature was the huge heat dispersion veins and columns spread link night black butterfly wings hundreds of metres into the air. These machines sucked heat from the core of the rock and without them the internal caverns would fry in their own waste energy in a mater of weeks. Unfortunately these vanes were aligned along the north-south axis, and thus were sweeping through space like vast nets; Host would have to watch out for them. He could remember back in his teens when he and his gang sprayed the vanes with the occasions bizarre message or image, from on vane which actually had been patterned like a really butterflies wings he could see that someone had kept up the tradition, though with rather more artistic flair.

The Rock filled his world now, the glitter of the counter rotating spaceport off on the edge of his vision. He was drifting serenely along as the surface rotated beneath him a few hundred metres below, navigating down to the spaceport would take hours, he had to seize the moment. Waiting until a large valley was open beneath him, heat radiators on the ridgelines, he set off the second reaction pack against his current vector and down. This pack was slightly more unstable and bounce him around a lot before halting his relative motion and shooting him down into the valley. In the final seconds before impact he spun his legs to face the surface and attempted to set off the last pack to break. When it failed to fire he had to do three things very quickly; set off the impact foam, made his body go completely limp, and compose a short message of mainly swear words addressed to Verve in case his body should be found. As the green balloons expanded Horts last thought was
“You know, I probably should have free jumped to another Loft instead of the Ro-“

Darkness.

Light. Pain. The world had changed; no longer was the rock a surface below him, now he was clinging to the rocky ceiling of a cavern with black walls and the universe for a bottom. The foam had expanded and stuck to a thick pipeline lain across the ceiling, and one of his gauntlets was also gripping reflexively. His displays indicated he had been out for 3 minutes and 23 seconds and that at least five of his bones were broken.
[Exoself?]
[Here]
[Patch into the Rocks local net and send a very urgent message to Gart to tell him to not buy those components. Also find some to come and get me. I may pass out now]
[Very good Sir, would you like some painkillers as well?]
[That would be nice]


Darkness.
 
Glad you liked it Dis. And your story was nice too.

Everyone should write stories like that for their systems.
 
Admiral Marga cursed softly as the shuttle docked. Assuming that she was communicating, the microphone in her neck clasp folded out, striking her on the mouth. She folded it back, rolling her eyes as she did so, and checked for the fourth time in as many minutes that all nonessential squad personnel were assembled correctly to greet Supreme Dictator Jared Jenkis.
The ground rumbled as the third airlock opened. Now his bodyguards were forming up behind the last glass plate separating them from the space station proper.
Marga looked nervously at the lone trumpeter. He seemed quite unaffected by all the bother, having arrived half an hour previously, and having held his office for six years, not all of them consecutive.
The glass door slid open. The trumpeter blew the eight-note welcome. Jared entered, smiling. Marga breathed a sigh of relief as he dismissed everyone.
"Congratulations on your re-election, sir." Marga complimented him.
"Thank you very much. It's really not surprising, though, seeing how well I did during my last period. Now, let's get to the command center and dispense with the formalities. I have some R&R waiting for me, so I'd like to get this visit done with."
"Of course, sir."

Marga tapped a button sequence on the main display computer sitting at the heart of Oncol Space Station. It blazed to life with commands, options, and information windows, yet the real beauty sat on a holotable in the center of the room: A spherical starchart currently extending fifteen Y in each direction from Oncol, which was labeled as such with large red letters.
"All yours, sir."
"Thank you."
Jared fought to keep from yawning as he punched in fleet orders he had researched on the way to Oncol Space Station. He wondered idly about the mechanism of the starlanes, curious as to why they compressed time to the ratio they did. Probably not something I'll find out... he thought.
"Done. Marga, get me the leader of the construction facilities."
"Speaking," she said. "That's why I got the post: Hands-on experience."
"Excellent. Saves yet more time. I'll be funneling you a great deal of funds and material in the near future. You are to build personnel transports. With all the hands-on experience that you have, I'm sure you know better how to build them than I could imagine, so I won't bother with that. Just build me some transports. After the news got out about the habitable worlds, the share of volunteer mail has risen to as much as three percent in a single day."
Marga's jaw dropped. The Supreme Dictator had an office to filter all communication directed to him; and three percent of it had been volunteers one day?
"Your orders, sir."
"Good. I'll leave at once, then. Good day."
His bodyguards formed up around him again as he left, the whole visit having taken thirty minutes (plus three hours' travel) and having been carried out mainly for purposes of formality. People had to know that their leader was on OSS, that he cared about the things they thought important. But three percent?
...
The starmap still floated on the holotable, Jared's orders marked on it in bright green.
...
Marga left for the construction areas, still shocked. Even if the entire planetary budget were funneled here, she still couldn't build more than transports for a few thousand people... certainly not do so and make them safe for hopgate travel. (yes, andis ;) )


[Orders sent]
 
Everyone should write stories like that for their systems.
Fine, I will, but first I'd like to critique your story just a little bit...
Highly tectonic crust
tec-ton-ic: (adj) 1. pertaining to the structure or movement of the earth's crust.

So, your crust is very crusty? :p


*****
Dominion Planet Census and Travel Guide presents:

Planet Name: Oncol III
Star: Oncol
Star type: F class - Yellow-White
Planet type: Cool, thin atmosphere, geologically dormant.
Industry: Programming, robot manufactury.

Oncol III is an old world. While breathable, the atmosphere contains less oxygen than Earth's, and heat dissipates rapidly. These conditions made Oncol III an excellent site for testing and manufacture of the next wave of computers and related objects, as rust was less common and overheating could be deat with rapidly.

Tourists to Oncol III will find that the main attraction is the endless walks that can be taken. Clustered settlements dot the planet's surface, but a simple GPS receiver (avalailable in the planetside mart for only 12 credits!) can warn the errant wanderer away from these, allowing him or her days of solitude as he or she traverses the curving, rocky landscape.

There is little native life on Oncol III. Xenobiologists generally agree that a oxygen-demanding plague struck the plant life at some geologically recent time, leading to the mass extinction of everything higher than mosses as the vegetation demanded more oxygen from the atmosphere while producing less and less.

Seven independent mining groups, six of which contain the word "hack" or some derivative thereof in their name, operate on Oncol's surface. These operate at sickeningly low cost and equally little profit; most of them are volunteer groups that the programmers and robot builders run in their spare time as a community effort. The minerals they extract are worthless to the galactic community at large. Most of their extraction are used in testing of possible new computer designs involving carbon-silicate substrates.
 
Marga left for the construction areas, still shocked. Even if the entire planetary budget were funneled here, she still couldn't build more than transports for a few thousand people... certainly not do so and make them safe for hopgate travel. (yes, andis ;) )
Huh? talking to me? ar ya TALKING TO ME?!?!?!
 
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