LINESII- Into the Darkness- Part II

Relax, ken. I'm practically making Masra the only form of Crystalism there is! The story is only a prelude to my rejoining. I intend to send the apprentice to a far away land, and start the Church anew there. Although it will be in a totally reformed version, both because the boy hasn't had proper tutelage in the faith, and because it must naturally be shaped to fit the new people of the faith. ;)

EDIT: Read the story again, and you will notice the commandment includes the words "to a place that had not heard of Shalamari at all". Although if the Gorinese have an exonym for Shalamari, I think they might fit that criteria. :D
 
To Clear everything up, all of Bladedom has heard of Shalamari, and i don't want to make you a liar:p
 
Kentharu said:
ok sweet, well i will help you do that. just tell me where it is and ill send some ships or whatever...

Neat. I will write how the Gorinese settlers in former Gerber welcomed him and provided supplies for his continued journey in my next story. :)
 
could you pm me about where you are going, just pm, cause i'd like to take this off the thread before turner comes in :p
 
Why, this isn't Spam, this is In-Game Dicussion. And SS, If you so much as preach to 1 person in any Bladeist State, i will literrally "kill" your dreams:p
 
Have no fears, Swiss. I intend to make a new nation, not pick (on) an existing one. ;)
 
Silver Steak said:
Have no fears, Swiss. I intend to make a new nation, not pick (on) an existing one. ;)

Good to have you back, SS. This NES wasn't the same without you.

Just don't come south, or you'll be brutally murdered, K?
 
Thanks for the welcome, and your (poorly) veiled threats are not necessary. :)
 
The Travels of Viski Lasi

The apprentice boy first went across the Wardash, heading for the lands formerly inhabited by the vile Gerbers. Hunting and foraging along the way, he made a living out of the nature. When he passed cities where wildlife was scarce, he stole what food he needed to move on. It was a harsh life, and he was caught several times and thrown in prison once. Luckily, he managed to escape through a narrow space in the wall. Even starvation can be a blessing at times.

He continued east, beyond the southern tip of the Keran Range, and entered the lands of Kalmar. He wandered the streets of Copenholm for a few days, trying to gather information about remote lands. It was then that he heard people speak of the New World. He did not understand where it was, or how to get there. Except there was a major clue: he had to travel by sea.

Viski Lasi ended up taking crew on a merchant ship. Its captain was based in Andama, but voyaged widely from Khemri in the south to Gammorea in the north. The boy worked pretty much like a common slave, and continued to do so for two years. Here, he learned much seamanship, and learned enough to understand a number of languages of Terrania. After a while, it was discovered that he had stolen coins from the captains desk, and was promptly booted ashore. He was now stranded somewhere in northern Davar, with nothing on his name but his ragged clothes and a broken oar.

Viski Lasi went inland, and soon met the local people. He saw the Valin cousins, and the Lengel cousins. His meeting with them was a violent one, and his killing of a Lengel sheriff* quickly brought him into trouble. He fled north, away from Davar, and reached the lands of the Citadel. He saw the vast harbor of Seaport, and the road threading westward up towards the high mountains. He also heard the locals speak of the vast knowledge contained inside the Citadel. The entire known world was mapped, they said, and anyone seeking to know its shape could but venture to the Citadel. The apprentice quickly heeded the advice.

Upon reaching the splenourous city of the Citadel, he wasted no time in heading to the Great Library to ask about the New World. He was welcomed like all visitors seeking knowledge, and particularily so for his interesting heritage as Gorimari. He agreed to speak of his lands in exchange for a route to the New World. After a series of interviews and scribed scrolls, he was shown a map of the entire Known World. When he was shown the range of his travels, he quickly saw that reaching the New World would be no easy feat. Still, he had not given up his mission commanded upon him by the venerable War-Cleric.

The apprentice did not leave immediately, however, as he was offered a place in the Great Library as a special student. He considered the offer, and agreed. Since he felt he was not ready to undertake the voyage further east without proper preparations and sufficient information, he saw it fit that he stay for a while in the Citadel to fully grasp all the knowledge the Citadelers had of the New World. He was only planning to stay for a few months at first, but his new life was far too comfortable and enriching to be quitted so hastily. The apprentice stayed in the Citadel for a total of five years, working as scribe, translator and even went a trip back to his homeland to update the Citadel's knowledge on the new Shalamari region inside Gorin.

After these five years of study and "luxury" had passed, he keenly felt he must fulfill his mission the sooner the better. He was now more than sufficiently educated to conduct the voyage east. He even had a small sum to fund his travel. It turned out to be just enough to get him to Norvalin, or the Union or Ardan as it was now known. He set off from the Citadel alone, and his absence was noticed indeed among the Citadelers. One of them even wrote a book on this strange foreigner.

The voyage east was a long and frankly boring one. The only thing that broke the dullness of it was the stop for supplies at Orum, and the violent storm of the northern ocean. The former of the two was exotic even for the seasoned traveler the apprentice was. The latter was a torture even for the seasoned seaman he was. Still, he proved his worth when one of the masts broke in the worst of the hurricane winds, as he was able to rally the desperate crew to bunker in and weather the storm. He parted with the crew in good spirits, and set off to find his next destination...

To be continued!
 
Nice story, SS.

Iggy, the final parts of my story are PM'ed. Since I'm getting a fever, I'm going to bed and hoping that you'll have the update finished tomorrow or Monday. Good luck!

And no, the last parts weren't written in a state of semi-delirium. Total delirium really. I think I've passed 101... (degrees fairenheit)

*passes out*

EDIT: More than 30,000 characters, if you count all four parts.

*re-passes out*
 
Other famous Stratikrators include Dominius, (conquered Zibon, annexed Emor) Sempronius, (see above), Cendrian, (captured and destroyed Said, sacrificed his life and army to delay Crystalist/Khemran forces), and Panteras (conquered Sintonia, captured Krenel, and rebuilt Redemption.)
Delgani, who got beaten at Hexki Valley, leading directly to the fall of Veritas...

Nice stories SS.

Much of the New World is updated...
 
Lord_Iggy said:
Delgani, who got beaten at Hexki Valley, leading directly to the fall of Veritas...

Wouldn't have Veritas fallen anyways even with a victory at Hexki? The Emorians and the Bladeists would still storm Veritas. :confused:

For the record, orders were sent hours ago. I'm beginning to work on my stories now :)
 
That happened after the Veritasians were already doomed. They would have emerged more strongly from Hexki Valley if they had noticed the trap, and destroyed the CRA ambushers when they were in the mountains and spread out.

With that victory, New Veritas wouldn't have reduced its homeland defenses and would have been able to continue the war longer, possibly even getting a fair peace.

Interesting alt history I suppose.
 
Lord_Iggy said:
With that victory, New Veritas wouldn't have reduced its homeland defenses and would have been able to continue the war longer, possibly even getting a fair peace.

Actually considering the two past broken peace treaties that did happen, I doubt any peace would have been kept by the two sides. ;) Another Byzantine-Persian scenario, with the Lengels as the Arabs would be the most likely I guess. :mischief:
 
True, the continuing war would have allowed the Lengels to conquer even more due to having weakened enemies.
 
The history of Tellus will be so rich by the end i wouldn't be surprised to see alt-histories about it and off-shoots.
 
That happened after the Veritasians were already doomed. They would have emerged more strongly from Hexki Valley if they had noticed the trap, and destroyed the CRA ambushers when they were in the mountains and spread out.

To catch the Army spread out would mean that they would have to be cautious, and slow. And They wanted the element of suprise badly, so I played on this, giving them small victories (chasing away the border guard, giving them a city) leading them to beleive that they still had an element of suprise.

To change the outcome of that period of time, the conditions for Vertisian betrayal and invasion would also have to change.

(true Emor Supplied me with info, but I had stated that battle plans were to be made anyway incase of betrayal)

regardless, It was fun that battle.
 
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