LINESII- Into the Darkness- Part II

The Crusade

"Your enemies are myriad! Your enemies are legion! We march to death, the eternal gate, as a bulwark against chaos and the corruption of Man!"

-Stratikrator Cendrian


Part One:

The Stratikrator stood, silent, in his stone chamber. Nothing but food had come in for three days. It was a strange, cryptlike place, hidden during the occupation. Within the black marble chamber carved out of the mountain Telerion, the Host-Lords of ancient Veritas had planned the conquests of Emor and Kalmar from this very spot.

It was rumored at in the records saved from Veritas and Redemption, the Great Archives now relocated to Pax. "The Stratikrator went to Telerion," it said. Xenophon discovered it, hinted at in rumor and legend in a dozen texts. When the Forge-Masters returned to Lux at last, and demanded their mountain, the Stratikrator gave them the laborers they needed to restore the tunnels. In return for one thing.

Their maps of the mountain. The maps that led him to the Chamber of Ilianos.

It was a cold, strange place. Columns of a dark stone, somewhat like lapis lazuli, supported the roof thirty feet above. The Stratikrator's eyes widened with wonder when he first set eyes on it. Up and down the columns, a flowing script was etched into the stone with minute detail, which formed a swirling epic that only an archivist with a ladder could ever hope to read.

The Stratikrator knew several languages, including Qual'ae and Khail. But what was written here...it was like Valin, but the words were strange.

Something about this chamber was horrifying. The absolute precision of the geometry, the faultless lines, the utter absence of light and joy at the heart of the world. Things had happened here once. Below it all was a sense of evil, Xenophon knew. But something in it led him closer to the truth that was lost.

At the center of the chamber was a great table, carved out of a solid block of black marble. Even as the Stratikrator marveled at the impossibility of it, he saw that the table was attached to the floor...they were one piece of stone. On the cold, terrifying square was etched a map of Tellus, north and west of Veritas. The rivers and mountains had a dull blue and reddish sheen, but the startling clarity and detail of the map left him in awe. This huge map, carved into a table that seemed part of the mountain itself...it was more accurate than anything Veritasan cartographers had ever created.

What was this place?

There was a throne, he saw. No building of Veritas had ever held a throne, but there it lay. The two, minutely carved handles of the obsidian chair were formed into a man's arms, detailed down to the subtle curves of muscle on bone. In the left hand was clutched a tree, black roots hanging down like a child's matted hair flipped over. In the right hand, a spear.

The Stratikrator's wonder was mixed with a sense of dread. There was something so familiar about this chamber, so right...and yet, something completely foreign, alien...wrong! His heart raced. Pools of darkness grew in the corners, and it seemed as if a whisper echoed back from the forgotten past.

For several days, the Stratikrator abandoned all planning of the war effort to sit in the chamber. His days were numbered, and the ones that came after him would have to know what he discovered.

After many hours in the Highest Hall, the eyrie-like library perched in the hills above the city, he found something. A brief reference in the most ancient scroll he could find, a decaying, barely-legible court record from 389 P.D. that described the Zibonese War...the first war, that captured Lux.

"The city was captured," it read, "and many were killed."

"The men that fought, with spear and arrow, were put to the axe. Many laid down their arms, and of these, one half were enslaved. The others scattered throughout the land."

"The men of Veritas took the city, and discarding its pagan name, christened it Lux, in the holy Light of the One. Many came from the south and dwelt in the city."

"After a time, it was found that the mountains held gold, and copper. Darker metals were found, but none among the Forge-Masters could give shape to these."

"In their delvings, the one called Ilianos discovered a chamber of dark stone. The Host-Lords came to the city, and forbade the Chamber to all but themselves. For many days they stood in the chamber, and naught knew their hearts."


The Stratikrator wished that the scroll had mentioned who Ilianos was, or what the Host-Lords had done in their new chamber. But that was lost, perhaps forever.

But now he knew what he had only suspected: This was not a place of Veritas.

Who had built it, then? The Zibonese were incapable of creating such amazing architecture, and they had never penetrated deep into the mountains. But the Zibonese, most scholars believed, migrated south, fleeing some great cataclysm, in -200 P.D. That was before the founding of Veritas!

If this chamber predated Veritas and Zibon alike, why the Spear and Tree? Was this some relic of the First Exile? No, that Paradise was lost forever, destroyed by the One in his anger at Mankind's sins!

Running his hands distractedly over the ancient runes, the Stratikrator stopped, over one word, carved into the marble like all the others. He translated, and retranslated, eyes widening in horror. A silent scream almost tore free from his lungs. A link in the chain had been made...and it was a horrible link.

In Valin runes, the name of God was written. But the runes did not spell "Eta," the ancient Valin name for the One.

The name written on the pillar was Eldos.
 
Great Story Wubba! Reminds me a lot of Helm's Deep. I look forward to more.

Orders deadline is anytime on Friday. I'm in the second-last timezone (only 1889 is further west).

I'm on the edge of my seat Thlayli!
 
OOC: Sure! SURE! Just give thlayli's stories more then one generic response! I'm so jealous :cry: Does anyone even care about my stories?!?!?!?!

Yes, I'm just being weird. :p
 
OOC: Alex, I would comment, but I'm still mad at the fact that I just walk around at school and you go "lol who will go on the throne" >:|
 
@Iggy: Thanks! I've been working on the lore of ancient Veritas for about a year now, the only difficult thing is transmuting it into story form. I've embedded lots of clues about the "truth" in stories that I've written over the past few months, on both this thread and the first one. For anyone really interested in discovering an important clue, find out what that book is.

I also started working on the Valin language, and there's an example on the prologue a couple pages back. It works...sort of, I just need to fine tune it a little. Tenses and stuff are hard to figure out.
 
Yeah. I've been working on the Theosist tongue for DNESER for quite some while now. If you think about what you need to say and how it should, it becomes easier to peg the tenses down.
 
Somewhat like I've done. I've tried to keep rid of the prefixes and use them in the middle, and few very suffixes. Meaning is also pretty fluid, as the word "Eos" alone has around four translations. Through the words pretty much stay the same unless indicated with a heavy vowel.

I'll be posting an example of it after Daft's update.
 
OOC: Thlayli, awesome story! Hurry up and finish, so we can go ahead and destroy the world! :p
 
Divotheism: Strength in Unity and Order

An earnest request has been issued to the following leaders of Azulia on behalf of High Chief Justok Nictuma of Sanx:

The Merchant Council of Chancotol
Chief Kenna One-Hand of Tir Tairgire
Emperor Jara of Syracia


Our peoples have seemingly been half-united and half-divided with our glorious worship of the Sky Gods, and now, in these modern times, our numbers dwindle, and I’m sure you can feel the anger of the skies as much as I can.
Unless we want our people to drown in the furious storms from which the Sky Gods certainly will create, this faith must be enhanced, formalized, and we must truly worship.
My prophet can only provide us with so much information.

I ask that a pact be created; An alliance of men and their undying, true faith.
The Divo League.

I ask that you all cooperate with me in the creation of this undoubtedly beautiful coalition to bring our peoples even closer together. Outside forces threaten not only our way of life, they threaten life as we know it.

With this league, our safety will be much more insured, bringing together the might of my Cloud Warriors with the might of all of the honorable warriors of Azulia. Together, as one force under the clouds.

Agree to this proposal, and you will have a place on the Sun Table, to decide on what decisions the Divo League will make.

Looks to the skies, and your heart will know what path you must take,
-Justok Nictuma, High Chief of Sanx
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To Kelios
From Sanx
We request that you aid us in reestablishment the true ways of Azulia to your people. Spread our faith, and you will be permitted to join into the great Divo League. Also, NAP?

To the Justiciar Council of Adar
From High Chief Justok Nictuma of Sanx
It our humble wish that you do not oppress my fellow Divotheists. Perhaps you could grant them an independent country on the southern coast? Or better yet, join into our faith yourself, and make Divotheism the official religion of Adar. Imagine what great things could be accomplished then!
 
TO: Sanx
FROM: Assistant Undersecretary to the Emperor Jara's Royal Letter-Opener


While we bemusedly tolerate the beliefs of those Divotheists under our rule, we discourage the spread of such superstition, and will neither force our citizens to follow such unfounded musings nor join in an alliance based solely upon them.

The Emperor does wish to assure you that any treaty not based in religion, he would most certainly be interested in. However, any agreement founded on supernatural folklore that an increasing majority of our populace scorns is unacceptable.
 
well my only orders can be to call all Aneyans to the Free city of Tigot :p
 
"Get down from there!"

"Superstitious sot!"

"Pervert!"

"Fools!" the Divotheist preacher thundered as he was pelted with insults and the occasional overripe fruit in the market square of Ean Samhradh, though he remained steadfastly on his makeshift stage - an unwilling vendor's vegetable wagon. "The Sky Gods watch! The Sky Gods anger! The Sky Gods send storms to destroy us all!"

"Hogshyte!"

"Haven't lost a ship to storms in three months!"

"Never had a more fertile year!"

A small cordon of the faithful kept the mob back from reaching the priest physically, though taunts and rotting produce continued to fly. "Blasphemers! Unbelievers! The Sky Gods will bring you down for your heresy! They-"

A worshipper tugged at the hem of his robe, gesturing frantically. "Holy one! Look!" The firebrand priest followed the man's panicked eyes, and felt his stomach flip-flop. A large squad of spearmen were being led in his direction by the owner of the cart he had appropriated, bronze armor gleaming, and they appeared less than happy.

He swung his attention back to the crowd, speaking so rapidly they could barely make sense of his words. "TheSkyGodsdamnyouallandhaveagoodnightImustbegoing!" With no more warning than that, he leapt in an undignified manner from the wagon, robes flying, and with his followers drawn up about himself dashed for the far exit from the square-

And drew up just short of a dozen spearpoints from the small detachment sent to cut off that exact route.

The priest swallowed his fear and put on a front of righteous indignation. "How dare you block the way of one of the Sky God's speakers? Stand aside at once!"

The soldiers seemed largely unmoved, though one or two shifted uncomfortably. Before he could exploit the opportunity, however, the troublemaker found himself grabbed from behind, a strong voice speaking over his own. "You, you foolish old man, are guilty of stealing a vegetable cart and attempting to incite a riot. You're coming with us, and you're not leaving for a long, long time."


The exact exchange was too distant for the local governor to make out as he watched from a balcony of his palace, which fronted onto the square, but he could guess at the content of it. As the priest, struggling, and most of his followers were led away by the soldiers, he sighed. "We've been after that man for a month. He's not the only one around, though. Most people ignore them, some heckle them. An unfortunate few devoid of common sense actually believe them."

"Mmm." The disinterested response came from deeper in the room, the emissary from Jara hunched over taxation and profit figures. "Well, every time you think you've bred out the idiocy, people find a new way to be stupid."

The governor edged his way back into the room. "I've heard talk ... that the Emperor has plans. Plans to give every Syracian a chance to learn properly, and not just from the lessons passed from parent to child ... which can sometimes be lacking."

The emissary sighed, looking up from his work. "I know you've heard the talk, Ezekiah. We've all heard the talk, and the rumors, and the gossip. I'd imagine the Emperor has a great many plans ... but with the treasury the way it is, he's not likely to implement them."

"Perhaps," the governor responded. "But so long as you are here, you can give me the news direct from Jara." He grinned conspiratorially, and after a moment, the emissary did as well.
 
*****​

The dead were crying. The blank stares of the fallen stared into the pouring rain, asking a question that was both unheard and unanswered. The torrent of rain drops fell from their upturned faces, so much like tears upon the dead. It was a pitiable sight. The Lengel, once so fond of forcing the same fate upon their enemies, had the same fate befallen on them.

The wheel turns, and each injustice is turned against its makers. The sins of the past come full circle, and the hand that wrought is destroyed. Death, destruction, life, birth. A neverending circle, and perhaps, it was time for the Lengel to die.

The sound of metal upon metal. Smoke rising in the rain. A single soul remains in the scattered village of the dead. An obsidian masked was all that defined the man at the forge, the sound of his hammer crashing down upon the hot iron echoing in the empty air.

You are weak. You cannot even protect your own people...


I can! I will! I will gather my scattered people, and win against these monsters!

That is what they called your predecessors...

The man stopped his hammering, and watched the blade in the fire for many long moments, thinking upon the womanish voice echoing in his head. With an angry movement, he took the blade and placed it upon the iron anvil, and he pounded it into the bladed shape. The sound of iron smacking iron continued for many long hours, until he finally stopped and regarded his work.

A steel blade, mixed with gold and an obsidian hilt lay staring up at him, calling for him to take it. His armored hand grasped it as the rain outside began to cease. The famous golden blade of the Lengelzai's was rebuilt at last. Gold from the original blade, mixed into Merhai iron.

So, you have rebuilt that legacy...


Shut up! Your voice echoes in my head, and I have no need of it!

Ah, but this village awakened me, and I cannot so easily be put back to sleep...

I will rebuild my broken people, no matter what curse falls upon my head!

Ah, but I am not a curse, Khorchi. I can be your...guide. There is a location, not far from here, where the people that did these set up camp. Zealots, I believe their called...

You can show me this...?


And much more, my dear child...

Then what is your name, since you know mine already...

Yesui...

The young man, shaking off the voice inside his head, took the newly forged blade and left the smouldering village. The rain had stopped, and the dead no longer cried. The son of the Lengel, heir to his fathers rebellion was moving for vengance.

*****

Khorchi crouched low in the grassy steppe watched the far off camp fires of the Zealot Gorinese. Their black skin was hard to make out in the deep night, but they passed by the camp fire's occasionally, illuminating themselves.

They are too many, it would be suicide attempting to fight them all.

Poor child, so unsure of your own abilities that you would doubt yourself. A great destiny awaits you, and yet you doubt your power. Your father would be disappointed...

Don't talk about my father! It was his caution that caused this tradegy!

Then prove that you are better than he, child...


Khorchi spoke no words following the woman's challenge, and merely sped stealthily towards the camp fires, moving ever closer to the sentry waiting there. Squinted eyes made out the large muscled forearms, the man's eyes dipping downwards in weariness. Khorchi unstrapped his bow, and drew back.

A meaty twack, and the man fell to the ground, dead. No noise followed the lone sentry's death. The changing of the shift would happen at any moment, so Khorchi moved quickly. Darting quickly inside the camp, he hid in the shadows behind one of the tents, looking out the three men gathered around the camp fire, their banter drifting to his ears.

"Heh, I can't believe how easy this whole campaign is! Weak Lengel bastards, so easy to die, eh?" the man asked of his buddies, laughing as he took a swig of wine.

"At least their women are of a stocky sort, right mate? They last much longer than I expected them to!"

The three men laughed at this, and Khorchi began to see red.

Such vile men. Kill them! Kill them slowly!

A might scream, and Khorchi drew his golden blade and charged the startled men. One was felled in the first moments, reaching futilely for his sword. Another was kicked into the fire, and his screams of agnoy as his clothes caught fire was music to Khorchi's ears.

The air whistled as Khorchi dogded the third's mighty swings with his mace. Khorchi did not think, only reacted and fought against these 'supposed' monsters. The rest of the camp was stirring, and the alarm was raised in the midst of Khorchi's wild charge.

The large beast with the mace, however, did not last for his fellows to reinforce. An overextended swing, and Khorchi quickly darted inside the mace's reach to stick the newly forged blade deep within the man's gut. Shocked eyes looked at his smaller enemy, and the man tried to lift his arms to strike his enemy one last time.

The twang of arrows rang through the air, only to meet the back of their dying comrade. He would never know the sting of their mistake. With a mighty pull, and kick, the man was sent flying towards the two archers newly arrived. Surprised at the large man falling before them, they lost precious seconds in notching another bow. Khorchi closed the distance between him and them quickly, and beheaded one.

The other archer dropped his bow in fear, but did not get far before his back was pierced by his enemies blade. Two more zealots had arrived the meantime, and Khorchi turned to regard them.

Yes! Yes, my prince! Spill their unworthy blood!

Gladly.

Reacting quickly, Khorchi picked up a nearby barrel of wine, and threw it the two approaching warriors. Only one was hit with the wine, and his entire body was drenched with it. The other dived out the way, but he would not be able to save his helpless friend was Khorchi picked up a torch, and charged the men.

Realizing the danger quickly, the soaked man tried to strike first, but to no avail. The torch was thurst into gut, and the man was quickly consumed by flames. His friend moved to strike at Khorchi's back, but was skewered instead by the quick turnaround of Khorchi.

The armored Khorchi struck a fearsome sight, in the camp fire, his obsidian mask dripping in thick blood, and his whole body covered with it. The Zealot leader had finally arrived, flanked by two obviously scared servants.

"So," began the emotionless man, dressed in the standard blue garb of the Zealot order, "Marsa has seen fit to send me the highest ranking Lengel dog for slaughter. He will be pleased with my offerings tonight."

Khorchi took his bloody sword, and wiped away some the blood upon one of the fallen men. Pointing the golden sword at his enemy, he merely waited for the strike. The man laughed at his enemies audacity, and took of his cloak, revealing a large sword, and trunk like arms.

"Come, you'll meet your doom tonight."

Death, life, destruction, birth. All of these are part of the circle of life. They brought death and destruction in my lands. Now, I will bring it full circle.


"May 'Marsa'," said Khorchi, as if spiting the name, "grant you peace in the afterlife!"

Thus, the dance for life and death began. The swing and slash of the swords. All attempts were dodged or blocked, and around the camp fire it seemed the dance between masters would never end. A strike, a dodge, a thrust, a block. The echoing sound of metal upon metal rang out in camp.

"Enough of this, dog! Kill him now!" screamed the tired man, and his sevants nodded. Taking up their bows, they each fired at Khorchi. Two arrows found their marks, one in his leg, and the other in his side. Wounded, Khorchi took his sword like and javelin, and threw it with all his might at the Zealot camp leader. It pierced his blue robes, and felled the giant man where he stood.

His vision blurring, Khorchi took pleasure in his enemies defeat as the two sevants notched two new arrows to their bows. He had avenged the village, and he would meet Tengri at long last...

Not yet, my prince. There are still many battles to fight, and you have yet to meet me face to face...

Not yet...


The sound of hoof beats echoed in the night, rising together with the crackling fires of the Zealot camp. It began to rain once more on the steppe, and the Zealot dead cried. But no Lengel cried that night...

*****
 
"The relations of Myocaca and Swade have been laid with oil and kindling. All it will take is one spark to set the whole land aflame." General Ishmael Swithrine

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Rogalius and Sunez stood in the court of the King. Rogalius still remembered guiding the Swade army across the border. Disarmed they had been disbanded into Swade territory. TAken of their weapons they were sent off. The crazed captain Calamie had stared at Rogalius as he guided his men. There had been no words spoken. But as if on a telepathic level they both knew that as soon as Calamie stepped over that line, he would no longer be the old friend of Dorn.

The King had awoken from his sleep only two weeks ago. He had awoken in the middle of the night. When he received news of the actions in place he sent a massive militia accompanying Swithrine's troops to head to aid Rogalius and secure the border. The other Generals stayed to counsel the King. General Aaron and Seth had been sent out to do prepare defenses.

When Sunez and Rogalius returned Thranduil was elated. The King embraced his brothers of war. When counseled with Sunez and Rogalius, King Thranduil realized action had to be taken further.

Calling forth his personal guard and 600 swordsmen, he marched on the Swade embassy. With Sunez and Rogalius by his side Thranduil marched towards the building.

As the doors clanged everyone suddenly turned their attention to the King in his shining gold plated armor and intricate spear, of Fasra the first King.

"What is the meaning of this? This is technically Swade territory, you have no right to bring armed guards into this palace."

"Do I ambassador? Or have you grown so feeble you cannot even remember your own country's acts." The guards began to move forward seizing Swade foreign official. Some tried to flee, but found the building was surrounded.

Men soon began to resist, but any who did found themselves quickly subdued by sharp eyed Yu-Yan. The Ambassador seeing one of his officials fall screaming to the floor as an arrow protruded from his back panicked.

But he quickly calmed himself, "You insolent fool, you are Swade's adopted child, we took you in while you were young when we could have conquered your lands right then and there. And now once more we have saved your nation by purifying it of these heretics."

Thranduil walked up the steps to the top where the Swade maps of the lands were laid out. "Your people would have been over run in the Lengel invasion if it was not for Myocaca."

"I should have killed you as you lay asleep on your thrown. The drug worked well enough to knock you out and keep you out of the picture, just a little more and you would be dead now!"

Drawing his sword Thranduil held the blade to the ambassador's neck.

"You mad man, you will bring down all we have sought to create. This is madness!"

"Madness! Was it madness when you broke my sovereignty and march legions of armed troops across my land? Was it madness when you marched into my very palace and violated guests of my home? Was it madness when you broke the honor of hospitality of the Bladeist nations? Was it madness when you slaughtered my own people? Was it madness when your king stopped being a protector and became a murderer? Was it madness when 2000 Myocacans gave their lives for freedom when I could not be there to help them? Was it madness when Swade forgot its way, and turned its face from the Blademaster?" The King was now in tears. "MAdness? You do not know what madness is. You have not the feeblest grip on what it means." Crying in tears now the king dropped his blade as the terrified ambassador began to slowly back away.

"I will not kill you ambassador, nor will any of your men face death. You are guests of my house, and it would be dishonorable of me to violate that trust. But punishment you will have."

Walking down the step the Ambassador was seized by guards. The injured men were brought before doctors as the began to bandage and surgically remove the arrows and cuts.

Turning to Sunez Rogalius spoke, "Tell one of your riders to send a message to Swade."

As Thranduil walked out to the steps of the embassy he looked out at Sanctus Tutela. "So the sun burns over the sea. What will become of us now?"

Rogalius came out to meet his lord. "Who knows, but it seems common sense has been cast to the wind, we must now face a new challenge. Darkness has set over our lands, And when it clears either Swade or Myocaca will be in ruin."

Thranduil stared out at the sea. His generals were some of the best trained. But to win a war, you cannot conquer through defense. Offense must be taken.

"And so will soon begin a new war..."

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To: Swade Ascendancy
From: The Royal Kingdom of Myocaca

You have defiled our lands. Your Bladeist games mock the dead upon the walls of Herim. War will come, it shall bring stars down to earth and brake the backs of legends and heroes will be made. Draw your sword Iv, for you have broken our covenant.
 
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