Pouakai, why don't you have all that the label (The Chola and her..) in a single text box so it's properly centered?
My only other problems with the map are the placement of the labels and key (it looks awkward, and the key is too close to the edge IMHO), and the lack of the feel of parchment (it just feels like modern day printing paper ATM).
My only other problems with the map are the placement of the labels and key (it looks awkward, and the key is too close to the edge IMHO), and the lack of the feel of parchment (it just feels like modern day printing paper ATM).