JalNES I: Quick and Easy

Sakura Blossoms​

The courtyard was quite pretty this time of year, the pink Sakura blossoms falling lightly to the ground in a gentle breeze. The light pink was quite pleasing to look at, and made many of the guards in the palace courtyard feel at peace with themselves. Such a gift had nature bestowed upon mortals, that such a tree existed.

The guards were completely at peace with the Sakura blossoms framing the silent courtyard, the center piece of the various mundane greens that otherwise were in the courtyard. The wide-open eyes of the guards regarded the Sakura tree with unblinking eyes, staring at the unchanging beauty of the Sakura tree.

The Emperor of the Toyama much enjoyed the Sakura blossoms, as he kneeled in front of the tree. He had not moved from his position since the wind first began to blow, and the silence of the courtyard was broken. Since his gaurds had attempted to fight off the attackers.

Since they too fell into silence.

In the shadow of the Sakura tree, red joined pink. It was a pleasant combination, the Toyama emperor supposed. The sound of footsteps from the barracks were coming closer. Perhaps they would be in time. But perhaps not.

The wind blew, and a single Sakura blossom fell to the ground, to be coated red.
 
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A statue of Naga Pahoda, dragon of the lower world, in a courtyard of the Imperial Palace of Palembang.

"Long, long ago, before the world was created, there existed two realms. There was the realm of Mula Jati, and Mula Jati’s three sons, Batara Guru, Soripada, and Mangalabulan. And, there was the realm of Naga Pahoda, a great dragon who breathed fire and floated through the air as a fish swam through water. For a long time, these five greater beings existed and lived together.

A rivalry began between Mula Jati and Naga Pahoda. Batara Guru, Soripada, and Mangalabulan sided with Mula Jati, of course. The cause of the rivalry was lost in time, and indeed it came that the cause was lost to them, but as time passed, the rivalry grew larger and larger. At first, the two sides began to ignore each other and not acknowledge each other. They demarcated the line between their respective territories in the heavens, and in the place of a line was a large barrier of stone. Very soon, this was not enough. Each party had to have all of the heavens. So began the war between Mula Jati and Naga Pahoda.

A great war then took place in the heavens. The two sides warred against each other, and space in the heavens constantly switched hands, but there was always a stalemate. Neither side dared to venture far into their opponent's territory, as they did not know it as well as their opponent. They would have surely become defeated. It continued on like this for millennia, until they finally decided upon something. To settle the war once and for all, they decided to create a battlefield, unfamiliar to all. They took the barrier and destroyed the stone, and Mula Jati used it to create a large planet, upon which they would decide the fate of the universe. The war continued on for a long time. Their battles were both constructive and destructive to the planet, and they created new and varied environments to fight their battles in. They fought and fought and fought, until finally the three sons weakened Naga Pahoda significantly enough to trap him. After they had crippled Naga Pahoda, Mula Jati opened up a deep crevice on the planet’s surface which extended down deep, to the centre of the planet. They then threw the dragon into the earth and Mula Jati once again sealed the stone.

Meanwhile, trapped inside the rocky sphere, Naga Pahoda was infuriated. He clawed and roared with fire, but he could not get out. He clawed and roared and clawed and roared until he could no more. His surroundings became horrid and everything caught inside with the dragon was on fire. So it came to be that he remained trapped, stuck inside a hell that he created.

On the outside, Mula Jati, Batara Guru, Soripada, and Mangalabulan declared the war over and won, and they celebrated. They moved back to the upper world and decided to populate the world which was trapping Naga Pahoda with humans, so that they could warn them of the dragon’s departure from the lower world, if it were to ever happen. So from that moment on, the world was fully created and inhabited by men, women, and all of life."
 
Nice stories guys (though yours was freaky, Contempt)...
 
Atyrian, City of Trade
The heart of the Atyrian Confederation, Atyrian is a true marvel. While it's population and size are small, compared to the other cities in Atyrian Confederation, it is still the heart of the confederation. It's population destiny is one of the highest know to us, possibly the highest in the world.
And on top of all that, half the city is built on top of the remains of the ancient harbor.
Long ago, out ancestors built three massive stone piers. While the eastern one has been kept clear, the land between the west and central pier has been filled in over the centuries. It is expected the gap between the central and east pier will be filled in soon also, as with the navy moving it's shipyards to the newly constructed City of Violin. This will free up even more space for land development.
On top of that, there are littierly thousands of boats floating in the harbor that have been converted to house the ever growing population of the city.
While the construction style of the houses is nothing to think twice about, the liveliness and the sheer energy that fill this city is truly something to behold.

Tronbone, City of Knowledge
Almost the complete opposite of Atyrian, the atmosphere of Tronbone has a more relaxed feel. The cultural heart of Atyrian, it's has a smooth, flowing style of construction. Built around it's university, and it's skyline dominated by the great library, it is a sight to behold. It lackS the energy of Blera or Atyrian, but exchanges it for a sense of purity. In addition To the education facilities, people often come here to relax.

Blera, City of Blades
Or as some have started calling it, the City of Forts. The three hills surrounding the city have become littered with small forts, large forts, experimental barricades, and a massive castle. Haphazardly built, the city is a literal maze. Constantly pushing the limits of warfare, it's become a sort of a game to them. One side will build a fort, or a section of wall, and the other will try to defeat the defenders. Using red and blue powder to determine when one side injures the other. These games can last weeks.
Recently, the entire city has shifted some it's focus and has cleared one of the hills of fortifications, allowing the construction fo dozens of new building. The purpose of these building is to develop what the Romans call iron. With it, we will no longer have to relly on the sporadic tin trade.

Freina, the City of Canals
The agricultural heart of Atyrian, Freina had a rustic feel to it. It has that same, energetic feel most other cities have, but it's beat is slower, almost mellow. And every where, there are canals. Small boats are the method of preferred for the citizens of Freina.

Iggiland, City of Horses
The smallest of the cities of Atyrian, it is surrounded by dozens of small villages. As it's main focus is on the domestication of various animals, and the mounted divisions of the Atyrian army, there is not much to do here.

Violin, City of Ships
The eastern most city of Atyrian, the navy has recently moved it's shipyards here, vastly increasing the traffic flowing through it and putting it on the map. The city is dominated by the shipyards, which have taken over for the old shipyards of Atyrian harbor.

Guitar, City of Cattle
As we all know, the river land to the north east is not very suitable for farming, being to rocky. But it is excellent grazing ground, hence the large population of grazing animals in the area. Guitar rose from this fact, taking advantage of this increased trade in the region, serving as a hub for the trade of meat for the entire Atyrian Confederation.
 
Did contempts dude just commit seppuku or what?

@ JD, will the update be here tonight? can't wait for it...
 
That's pretty much what I feel for yours :(

We should get a mob and attack azale and darkening!
 
andis-1 said:
Did contempts dude just commit seppuku or what?

@ JD, will the update be here tonight? can't wait for it...
No, Contempt just assasinated the enemy leader.

Nice story TerrisH!

I have all the orders I'm going to get--I think Azale quit again.

Update will almost certainly come tonight!
 
Starting update, but don't expect it for 6-7.5 hours...
 
That big eh?I guess I'll work on the rules for my nes then.

Edit: This NES has been going 1 month and has 10 updates.Good job.
 
OOC: I was working on the update, but I wanted to do a summary, and it grew. I will try to do these every 10 updates.

Hopefully this will tide you over for the five or so hours it takes for me to update!

Summary I: A Time for War​

2000-1000 BC​

1000 years have now passed since we began observing this puny human society. Not much has changed. Humanity is still disunited, and still kills each other often. Most of the population is uneducated and underfed, and without a voice. Pathetic metals are the highest level of technology any civilization has yet attained. The vast majority of the world is free from any civilizing influence. Diseases still ravage the world. Only the most primitive mathematics has been developed, and there is no biology, chemistry, or physics at all.

Still, things have changed enough to require a summary of the last millenium.

In northern Europe, Prussia has grown from a mere tribe to a massive empire, subjugating all other tribes under them and trading with their neighbors--Noricum to the south and the island civilizations to the west. They are currently trying to expand into Denmark and working on a revolutionary road system.

The British Isles have become both civilized and pacified. Brittania has conquered their entire island, destroying the Tin Route in the process. Eirehann has changed name and government structure several times, becoming a nationalistic centralized monarchy after centuries of war. The two countries have formed an unofficial alliance.

In recent centuries, Iberia has become a home to civilization. On the Atlantic coast are the seafaring Maar. The important trade state of Tartessos is located at Gibraltar. And the Iberian Confederacy is rapidly unifying the interior of the peninsula.

The central Mediterranean is home to a trio of relatively powerful but unique states. Carthage finally managed to replace the Berbers and is beginning to embrace trade, while working on becoming a republic. Syracuse still controls most trade in the central Mediterranean after the demise of Minoa, and is beginning to found colonies. And the Roman republic has recently discovered iron, rendering irrelevant the lack of tin.

The eastern Mediterranean has the most nations and the most complex relationships. Sparta managed to destroy the first Athens and is currently attacking the Byzantine attempt to found a new one, as tensions rise with The League of the Sea Peoples after they founded a colony on Sparta's border. The League fought a centuries-long war with Egypt which recently ended in a stalemate, but was more successful in its other war against the Hittites and managed to annex all of former Troy. To the north is the peaceful trading state of Atyria, which has prospered while its neighbors fight.

Southeast of Atyria are Medea and Ur, who originally teamed up to conquer Elam and Babylon, but are now bitter enemies. Although still stalemated, the war between them has come to a head in the last century, as Ur has conquered all of the former Hittite lands, while the Medes have succeeded in splitting Ur in two.

South of the Fertile Crescent are three Arabian trading states. Dilmun is an ally of Ur, and The Hedjaz is a major trading partner with Egypt, but Magan is still unalligned and growing in power.

Skipping over the as-yet unknown states of India and China, we come to Japan. Japan is a mess of patchwork states, but most noteworthy are Toyama, by far the largest and most powerful Japanese state, and Yamato, the small state which has managed to resist invasion thus far by use of clever tactics.

Finally, in the far south is the isolated state of Srivijaya, which is slowly spreading within their island, and thus far is alone in the world.

Spoiler World in 2000 BC :
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Spoiler World in 1000 BC :
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~Darkening~ said:
My orders have long been in, thank you.
I pointed that out...
 
Nice Summary.How far into the main update are you?

I've done Atyria, Rome, and Carthage, and am taking a break to watch the Daily Show and Colbert Report.
 
Why is Carthage's sentence longer then Rome's sentence :cry: ;)

Who exactly is writing the report?
 
alex994 said:
Why is Carthage's sentence longer then Rome's sentence :cry: ;)

Who exactly is writing the report?
Your sentence is just denser. ;)

And the Vegetable Overlords are, obviously. Just like they've been writing the updates. :p
 
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