DRAW Your Own Story X: The Avatar Wars

Now to jump on the bandwagon!



It'd look better, but the only game I have on right nowis Empire: Total War.

Alright, fine, Methos. Here be my edited comic, with my unique way of editing out the swear words.

The fancy font, while fancy is hard to read.

Fine, for you vision-challenged folks, here's every line in the comic:

choxorn: Hey! You're Right!
choxorn: Narrator, you *censored by powers of mod*, give me my money back!
choxorn: What the... where the *censored* did you come from?
Methos: I am Moderator Methos, come from a strange realm somewhere in CFC to stop the swearing in this thread. Just use the %*^%*^@# characters to represent it that are usually seen in comics instead. Oh yeah, and here's an infraction point.
choxorn: But that ruins the whole *censored* point!
Methos: Too bad. Now stop before I ban you.
choxorn: Ban me? In case you haven't noticed, I'm in a *censored* void in the *censored* space-time continuum! This is worse than being banned!
Methos: Once we get our new server, the land of the banned will be upgraded to make this seem like paradise. Now stop! I'm running out of "*censored*" boards.
choxorn: Yeah, the new server. Could you hurry the [blank] up and get that? I'm tired of being trapped here. This void is a piece of [blank] It's blank, there's white blobs everywhere, I can't find a Taco Bell anywhere, and it doesn't even have cable. [blank] that [blank] bad guy that [blank] up the past!
I see you've run out of boards that have words on them.
Methos: Yeah, but I still have plenty left, so don't even think of trying to swear so much the censor overloads.
choxorn: Wait, I can overload the censor?
Methos: Wait... No... Forget I said that!
choxorn: Good! [random blanks inserted, no actual words here] Okay, why did you censor "cake?"
Methos: The censor got trigger happy. Well, I'm out of cards, I have to get more, so bye.
choxorn: Wait, you can leave? No! Not yet! Take me with yoooooouuuuuu...
*POOF*
choxorn: METHOS! YOU...

I can also add the words at the bottom if you really want me to.

Save as .png not .jpeg as well. .jpeg blurs it.

That was an accident, and changing to PNG won't help now.

Save it as a BMP just to be sure next time, then save the BMP as a PNG

Time for a

Minor correction... It's called "The Gem", not "The Crystal", but you may name it whatever you want

Great comic btw! Soon I'll make my entry.. two more comics will do it, I think.

I may even be able to finally jump in again! Expect a comic within a week.

lord_joakim said:

Minor correction... It's called "The Gem", not "The Crystal", but you may name it whatever you want

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I had the characters call it "The Crystal" due because they dont know the offical name of the object due to the mysteriousness and unknowness of Arrakis (And due to the fact that the only information the Republic of Coruscant has gotten about Arrakis came from lost spacers and smugglers). The offical name of it will come up in time when more information is encountered to the characters. Dont be surprised if my characters run into other smugglers and younger spacers calling "The Gem" something else . I plan to have older spacers calling it by it's official name in a Cantina scene I have brewing in my head.

CivGeneral said:

I had the characters call it "The Crystal" due because they dont know the offical name of the object due to the mysteriousness and unknowness of Arrakis (And due to the fact that the only information the Republic of Coruscant has gotten about Arrakis came from lost spacers and smugglers). The offical name of it will come up in time when more information is encountered to the characters. Dont be surprised if my characters run into other smugglers and younger spacers calling "The Gem" something else . I plan to have older spacers calling it by it's official name in a Cantina scene I have brewing in my head.

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Nice thinking. Me approve.

Last week, I thought I was going to get so much done here. And then.. a video contest I couldn't resist. Despite working almost every hour of the past 7-8 days, I mustered enough strength to get this out.

Hey, it could be worse. It's been three years and counting since I promised to write back to a contact in France.

"Heck no! I'm the hero!"

Nice to see DYOS active again.

Sorry for not posting much in this thread (or anywhere else). I have a very bad cold and school work is eroding my free time/sanity. Hopefully I'll get a comic up this week. Taillesskangaru will be heading to Arrakis by the way.

I was hoping I could continue with the theft of the DYOS thread subplot (from this comic). I'm trying to find a way to weave this into the main story somehow.

And Electric if you're reading I still need some feedback.

Reason for my inactivity: TAFE and drugs laziness

I'm a TAFE student myself. Just thought you'd be interested.

I vote E!

Seriously though, D.

Well-drawn.

E and D.