Chronicles VIII: Dawn of the Philosopher Kings
- Thread starter Helmling
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omni_paul
Mr. Shambles
Quality start... can't wait to read more.
Fetch
When in doubt, reboot.
That was sweet! What a great start to an epic. Very novel of bringing a guy from the future back to 4000 BC to start a Civ. Is the worked tile to the SE of Claudia the village where Timareta lives?
IVZanIV said:
I'm flattered, but I really don't know how much time I'd have to spare for anything else. As a matter of fact, I've been having second thoughts about this story as it is. I really think I might have bitten off more than I can chew.
What did you have in mind?
Oh, I guess I should make a couple of notes:
One, I am paying no attention to the game year. If I was, my characters would already be three hundred years old.
Also, as you can tell, I have to run the game on low graphics, so sorry about the crappy screenshots.
One, I am paying no attention to the game year. If I was, my characters would already be three hundred years old.
Also, as you can tell, I have to run the game on low graphics, so sorry about the crappy screenshots.
Fetch
When in doubt, reboot.
This is really good, Helming. I think that Ektor's son will be the father of the barbarians in time. His wife was a nag... good riddance. I await tomorrow's installment.
Mr. Hyperbole
understated cynic
Another great story(though that should come as no great surprise).
I do hope you finish it.
I do hope you finish it.
Mr. Hyperbole said:
Ah, shucks...you shouldn't have.
But frankly, you guys better keep the encouragement coming, because I'm seriously tempted not to follow through.
Let's just say that if I do this how I'd planned, this is going to be a frickin' novel.
On the upside, though, it's very easy to write, so we'll see...
Fetch
When in doubt, reboot.
Helmling said:
Helming, you've gotta keep writing. This is what I read for my first 15 minutes of work each morning. It helps me drive an hour in the morining knowing that you've got me a couple of new posts to read. Clock? I see no clock.
So, I think you said that you did, but do you have this game 100% played already?
EDIT: (and welcome to page 2)
Fetch said:Helming, you've gotta keep writing. This is what I read for my first 15 minutes of work each morning. It helps me drive an hour in the morining knowing that you've got me a couple of new posts to read. Clock? I see no clock.
So, I think you said that you did, but do you have this game 100% played already?
EDIT: (and welcome to page 2)
Yeah, I know how it's going to end.
Mr. Hyperbole
understated cynic
Fetch said:Helming, you've gotta keep writing. This is what I read for my first 15 minutes of work each morning. It helps me drive an hour in the morining knowing that you've got me a couple of new posts to read. Clock? I see no clock.
So, I think you said that you did, but do you have this game 100% played already?
EDIT: (and welcome to page 2)
I whole-heartedly agree. It takes me over 30 min's to get to work and, like Fetch, I spend the first 15 min's here reading your stories. You have a real gift for story telling and I eagerly await your first novel.
So please continue this story...I'm already emotionally vested in the characters
