Some constructive criticism:
I would say that a crossbow should be mentioned as an anti-melee pillage-stack defender; especially if you use an outdated cavalry as a pillager, because then it is the best anti-crossbow.
Flanking only provides a chance to withdraw when attacking, not while defending. Although it opens up sentry, it would be worth noting that if the unit doesn't have enough experience to get sentry out of the gate, flanking isn't necessarily the best promotion. Although barracks + stable do give enough experience... Also, I usually would give the pillaging unit the medic promotion. I guess it's just a difference in style. I don't think sentry is all that useful, because it's hard to predict whether the ai will use that unit you see to attack your stack, and because there isn't much you can do to prevent it.
Also, Axemen have +50% vs melee (at least I thought they did?), and you have it as +25%.
As others have said, woodsman really isn't a useful promotion, unless the stack is badly wounded and needs to hole up and heal.
You should note that when pillaging metals, there is often a defender fortified there. Without a strong pillaging stack, I avoid confronting them and their +25% fortify bonus.
Even though you don't have Warlords, you should still mention trebuchets as city attackers.
I wouldn't say that axes/maces are the best anti-melee stack defenders, because what melee will they be defending against? Axes/maces. Crossbows are much better. I would combine that fourth paragraph under Stack Defenders on page 9 with the first, and mention that the melee commonly defended against are axes/maces.