Smellycowsquid
Chieftain
- Joined
- May 29, 2006
- Messages
- 54
The Clan Years
Sumusk perched himself on the top of the pine tree, and looked to the west, it was a plain which was flooded by the river each year, and past that, a hill with forests.
He looked back to the ground were the elders of the clan were still bickering in their usual ways. They had been here for hours, and no words from the elders, and the people were restless. He looked now to the south, where he could see cattle grazing along another river.
He turned back to the Clans elders to still see them bickering, he sighed, and dismounted from his beautiful perch. He jumped to the ground, bent down, and picked up some of the dark damp earth, and rubbed it between his fingers before he exclaimed,
Brothers, any decision?
The elders turned to him, and they seemed to scold him for this interruption to their bickering.
One started, This is obviously the final area which is the specified end to the Great Journey.
The very oldest, who was a short man, bent over and wrinkled, who was about seventy-five began to argue again, The Great Journey is meant to be endless, until He calls us home.
At this all of them began to quarrel again, and Sumusk, the Clan Chief had had enough.
Enough! his voice echoed throughout the endless wilderness. Everyone, including the villagers, turned to him.
This is the area specified by the Great Journey, we will settle here, and end our wanderings.
The old elder was taken back at this, but before he could utter a word, Sumusk gave him a scolding stare, which made him think twice.
Agreed. He distastefully stated.
The people began work instantly on the city of Tukkie named after their tribe. They began construction on fortifications, and on the Palace for the new position of King. Sumusk, which means Chief in the Tukkian language, was appointed King, and given the new name Sumemk, which means King.
The newly appointed King ordered the Men of the new nation to gather, and sent them and their leader, Zeiga, out into the wilderness to find other clans, and to train themselves in the arts of war, so they could defend Tukkie.
Zeiga took this task upon his shoulders, and when exploring for his Clan, they saw many sights, a small villa, The Great Ocean, and a curious sight, an Elephant, who was stuck in the plains mud.
Sumemk and the populace were equally busy at home in the Village. The towns influence expanded, and already more of the ung(young) men were being trained for the Kings service. Then, one day, when Sumemk was admiring the Eastern Lake, dropped dead at the age of eighty-nine. His funeral was a great one, and they ended up burring him in the Hills which surrounded the Village, and his son, Sumemk II succeeded him.
Sumemk the Second was like his father, interested in peace and research, but also in defense, the tribes young men were still being used as Military men. Zeiga returned home early in his reign, having traveled east to the coast, north, and then when they reached the river Virta as they called it, used it to return home to Tukkie. Zeiga was dismayed to find out his friend had died. But lived out the rest of his life instructing the ung men in war.
Sumemk IIs son was named Virta, after the river Zeiga had found. Unlike his fathers, Virta was focused on buildings and religion, first making the old Clan Myths of the Great Journey, or Haoism(Hinduism), into an official religion, and then starting construction on buildings called the great Pyramids. But Virtas life was cut short by a sudden death, and his son, Sumemk III took over the kingdom at a tender age.
Sumemk III was a combination of all the kings before him-Military, Building, Religion, but also Expansion. During his reign, he founded two cities, Port East, located on the great sea, and Virta, named after his late father, on the Virta River. He started to produce an Army in Virta- a defensive one. Sumemk the III lived a long and prosperous life, and the Tukkian Empire also was prosperous during his reign. But he, like his fathers before him, returned to the earth.
Virta IIs reign was a great time-but also a uncertain time-The great Pyramids, and the Great Wall were each finished in the Capital of Tukkie, and Stonehenge in Port East. Virta turned his attention to rumored technology of Iron Working when Cyrus came to him with an urgent plea, Virta II was gripped by Cyrus plea, and joined his crusade against the evil Chinese.
Would China attack? How would the Clans Ung men do in battle? Only time would tell. However, enemies were arising at home, Revolutionaries, inspired by the Great Pyramids, called for Revolution, change to the Government, how much longer would the absolute Monarchy rule?
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As always comments appreciated, I hope to get more detailed later, no resaves will be done now, let's hope for the best!
Sumusk perched himself on the top of the pine tree, and looked to the west, it was a plain which was flooded by the river each year, and past that, a hill with forests.
He looked back to the ground were the elders of the clan were still bickering in their usual ways. They had been here for hours, and no words from the elders, and the people were restless. He looked now to the south, where he could see cattle grazing along another river.
He turned back to the Clans elders to still see them bickering, he sighed, and dismounted from his beautiful perch. He jumped to the ground, bent down, and picked up some of the dark damp earth, and rubbed it between his fingers before he exclaimed,
Brothers, any decision?
The elders turned to him, and they seemed to scold him for this interruption to their bickering.
One started, This is obviously the final area which is the specified end to the Great Journey.
The very oldest, who was a short man, bent over and wrinkled, who was about seventy-five began to argue again, The Great Journey is meant to be endless, until He calls us home.
At this all of them began to quarrel again, and Sumusk, the Clan Chief had had enough.
Enough! his voice echoed throughout the endless wilderness. Everyone, including the villagers, turned to him.
This is the area specified by the Great Journey, we will settle here, and end our wanderings.
The old elder was taken back at this, but before he could utter a word, Sumusk gave him a scolding stare, which made him think twice.
Agreed. He distastefully stated.
The people began work instantly on the city of Tukkie named after their tribe. They began construction on fortifications, and on the Palace for the new position of King. Sumusk, which means Chief in the Tukkian language, was appointed King, and given the new name Sumemk, which means King.
The newly appointed King ordered the Men of the new nation to gather, and sent them and their leader, Zeiga, out into the wilderness to find other clans, and to train themselves in the arts of war, so they could defend Tukkie.
Zeiga took this task upon his shoulders, and when exploring for his Clan, they saw many sights, a small villa, The Great Ocean, and a curious sight, an Elephant, who was stuck in the plains mud.
Sumemk and the populace were equally busy at home in the Village. The towns influence expanded, and already more of the ung(young) men were being trained for the Kings service. Then, one day, when Sumemk was admiring the Eastern Lake, dropped dead at the age of eighty-nine. His funeral was a great one, and they ended up burring him in the Hills which surrounded the Village, and his son, Sumemk II succeeded him.
Sumemk the Second was like his father, interested in peace and research, but also in defense, the tribes young men were still being used as Military men. Zeiga returned home early in his reign, having traveled east to the coast, north, and then when they reached the river Virta as they called it, used it to return home to Tukkie. Zeiga was dismayed to find out his friend had died. But lived out the rest of his life instructing the ung men in war.
Sumemk IIs son was named Virta, after the river Zeiga had found. Unlike his fathers, Virta was focused on buildings and religion, first making the old Clan Myths of the Great Journey, or Haoism(Hinduism), into an official religion, and then starting construction on buildings called the great Pyramids. But Virtas life was cut short by a sudden death, and his son, Sumemk III took over the kingdom at a tender age.
Sumemk III was a combination of all the kings before him-Military, Building, Religion, but also Expansion. During his reign, he founded two cities, Port East, located on the great sea, and Virta, named after his late father, on the Virta River. He started to produce an Army in Virta- a defensive one. Sumemk the III lived a long and prosperous life, and the Tukkian Empire also was prosperous during his reign. But he, like his fathers before him, returned to the earth.
Virta IIs reign was a great time-but also a uncertain time-The great Pyramids, and the Great Wall were each finished in the Capital of Tukkie, and Stonehenge in Port East. Virta turned his attention to rumored technology of Iron Working when Cyrus came to him with an urgent plea, Virta II was gripped by Cyrus plea, and joined his crusade against the evil Chinese.
Would China attack? How would the Clans Ung men do in battle? Only time would tell. However, enemies were arising at home, Revolutionaries, inspired by the Great Pyramids, called for Revolution, change to the Government, how much longer would the absolute Monarchy rule?
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As always comments appreciated, I hope to get more detailed later, no resaves will be done now, let's hope for the best!