KrugerPritz
King
You'll recognize she's a female by her depilated legs 
New Unit: AmazonInfantry
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KrugerPritz
King
You'll find her at:
http://forums.civfanatics.com/uploads/61701/AmazonInfantry.zip
http://forums.civfanatics.com/uploads/61701/AmazonInfantry.zip
Stormrage
Ever Present Taskmaster
And we`ll see her at? Preview, c`mon man, you know how it works! 
KrugerPritz
King
Sorry ihad problems with my pc. As soon as possible I will post itStormrage said:And we`ll see her at? Preview, c`mon man, you know how it works!
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/9715/ssgirlci5.jpg
Thats what it looks like for the impatient, but it still needs a decent preveiw.
Thats what it looks like for the impatient, but it still needs a decent preveiw.
KrugerPritz
King
Theta said:
Thank You
Bjornlo
Deity
Is this your first unit? Is it a poser unit or ??
Here is a preview...
default -> fortify -> attack -> victory -> death -> run
Some advice:
It is missing the civilopedia icon and the units32icon.
It has multiple " run" sounds. It includes AMB sound files from other units.
Several of the animations are a bit slow.
Some of the animations don't loop quite right.
The fortify animation should be much faster. This animation is played before the attack begins as well as when the fortify command is given, it should be nice and quick.
The death is slightly too slow. She should fall down, not float down. Also, she bends her knee the wrong way during her float to the ground.
The run must loop with itself, it does not.
The attack must loop with itself, it does not.
The default must loop with itself, it does not.
The victory should loop in to the first frame of the default, it does not.
The fortify does loop correctly into the attack.
The attack is pretty good. Just slight rough with the posture.
There is no civ color. Something should be colored blue. Maybe give her a backpack... ammo belt. something.
Maybe have a pony tail coming out of the back of her helment (or lose the helmet)... this could be done fairly simply with just a couple of primitives.
All in all, a very good first effort (assuming it is your first).
Just remember to include the icons next time, and to fix the looping and lack of civ color.
Here is a preview...
default -> fortify -> attack -> victory -> death -> run
Some advice:
It is missing the civilopedia icon and the units32icon.
It has multiple " run" sounds. It includes AMB sound files from other units.
Several of the animations are a bit slow.
Some of the animations don't loop quite right.
The fortify animation should be much faster. This animation is played before the attack begins as well as when the fortify command is given, it should be nice and quick.
The death is slightly too slow. She should fall down, not float down. Also, she bends her knee the wrong way during her float to the ground.
The run must loop with itself, it does not.
The attack must loop with itself, it does not.
The default must loop with itself, it does not.
The victory should loop in to the first frame of the default, it does not.
The fortify does loop correctly into the attack.
The attack is pretty good. Just slight rough with the posture.
There is no civ color. Something should be colored blue. Maybe give her a backpack... ammo belt. something.
Maybe have a pony tail coming out of the back of her helment (or lose the helmet)... this could be done fairly simply with just a couple of primitives.
All in all, a very good first effort (assuming it is your first).
Just remember to include the icons next time, and to fix the looping and lack of civ color.
KrugerPritz
King
sorry is my second unit
there are several constructive criticism i'll consider in future
thank you.
sometimes i have some difficulties with english tutorials. It's not my primary language. And i haven't understood how to introduce civ palettes.
Krugerpritz.
And thanks for the preview.
there are several constructive criticism i'll consider in future
thank you.
sometimes i have some difficulties with english tutorials. It's not my primary language. And i haven't understood how to introduce civ palettes.
Krugerpritz.
And thanks for the preview.
Bjornlo said:Is this your first unit? Is it a poser unit or ??
Here is a preview...
default -> fortify -> attack -> victory -> death -> run
Some advice:
It is missing the civilopedia icon and the units32icon.
It has multiple " run" sounds. It includes AMB sound files from other units.
Several of the animations are a bit slow.
Some of the animations don't loop quite right.
The fortify animation should be much faster. This animation is played before the attack begins as well as when the fortify command is given, it should be nice and quick.
The death is slightly too slow. She should fall down, not float down. Also, she bends her knee the wrong way during her float to the ground.
The run must loop with itself, it does not.
The attack must loop with itself, it does not.
The default must loop with itself, it does not.
The victory should loop in to the first frame of the default, it does not.
The fortify does loop correctly into the attack.
The attack is pretty good. Just slight rough with the posture.
There is no civ color. Something should be colored blue. Maybe give her a backpack... ammo belt. something.
Maybe have a pony tail coming out of the back of her helment (or lose the helmet)... this could be done fairly simply with just a couple of primitives.
All in all, a very good first effort (assuming it is your first).
Just remember to include the icons next time, and to fix the looping and lack of civ color.
Doesn't look too bad, either. Somewhat gangly, I suppose.
