Posted publically just so others can offer feedback as well (let me know if you prefer PM's hex).
I like it alot, the screens I didnt think were done as well were the leader compilations. The art style on the leaders is so different from each other that having them merged into one picture doesn't look right. Maybe have the leader pictures in seperate frames.
I would skip the spider text anf pic, its a lot of time for a minor mechanic.
1. The Age of Ice has ended,
- perfect, I love the slide and transition here
2. What of left of the empires of Erebus have formed into small tribes ready to rebuild and retake that which was lost.
- They need some fade here showing an advancing society. Ideally they would be in game screenshots of a new city in the wilderness, with a raw mana nearby. Then fade to a more advanced version of the city with some worked plots around it. Then fade to an advanced version of the same city full of buildings and wonders and with an improved version of the mana node.
3. But the world is not empty.
- No fade here is fine, breaks up the pattern which is good.
4. Hordes of barbarians, and darker creatures, await these new civilizations.
- I love the Jonus picture. It would be good to get some skeletons in the background, maybe a spider
5. There is great evil...
- Evil leader pics as seperate frames appearing around the words. Then all the pictures fade to grey as Hyborems picuture (full color) fades in
6. and selfless good
- Good leaders as seperate frames appearing around the words.
7. The first goal is survival
- Screenshot of barbarian hordes approaching a few human units
8. The second goal is power, for good or ill
- Split picture of powerful units, an angel and a balor (maybe a screenshot or those units put into a more crafted screen)
9. Will you pursue power through strength of arms or arcane studies, through piety or blasphemy?
- Pictures of an archmage, eater of dreams, paladin and a lich
10. On each path you will meet allies, and bitter foes, and the deeper you delve into the secrets of combat, or sorcery, or the divine, the harder it will be to turn back
- Hell picture covered with flames and demonic creatures
11. Choose carefully
- No picture here to break the pattern
12. Fall from Heaven II
- I LOVE this end screen, its awesome!