brandon.herren
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My first civ story! (and first post on this forum)
I'm going to do Earth 18 Civs as Mali, on Prince difficulty. Since I'm very new to this, any feedback on improvements would be appreciated.
Mansa: Time for the founding of the glorius nation of Mali!
Joe: Wait! I thought you agreed we were calling it Joeland, and how come we didn't stay in Carthage?
Mansa: Too bad! I'm the leader, your my servant!
Joe: Servant? I thought I was a Royal Duke of Timbuktu
Mansa: Fine, your a 'royal' servant. Happy? Now, hurry up! Go get Kris!
Kris: What is it sir?
Mansa: How is our starting position?
Kris: Not so good sir, we have but one hill, and a huge amount of flood plains and desert.
Mansa: Dang it! I knew we should have stayed in Carthage!
Joe: ...maybe if you'd listen to me...
Kris: ...we would be in a state of anarchy and destruction
Mansa: Very wise words Kris, you may just get a promotion soon...
Joe: What! I've been working for you for 30 years and I never got one!
Mansa: Servants can't be promoted. Stop complaining, and go over into the city, we are building a worker! Poor unlucky souls won't get a break for 6000 years.
Joe: Uh... who did you choose?
Mansa: You'll find out VERY soon...
Joe: Actually, it could be nicer than working as your "royal servant"
Mansa: Well, if you really are enjoying working with me, I suppose you can stay. We'll have so much fun!
Joe: NO! Send me to work with the slaves!
Mansa: Nah. You'd just laze around all day. Here, I'll be able to make sure your working a lot more than those slaves ever will!
Mansa: Now! You two go inform the warrior to explore, we need to find that tribal village we saw earlier next to Carthage! We're going to burn it to the ground!
Joe: *groans* Yes sir.
Kris: Will do.
Characters
Mansa Munsa- Leader- Official Title: Grand Super awesome leader who rules Mali
Joe- 'royal servant'- Official Title: "Royal Servant of Timbuktu who to Mansa's awesomness
Kris-Tech/Land advisor- Official Title: Secretary of Technology and Agriculture
Basil-Foriegn/Military advisor- Official Title: Secretary of Homeland Defense and Secretary of State
Hope you guys liked it, will update within a few days.
I'm going to do Earth 18 Civs as Mali, on Prince difficulty. Since I'm very new to this, any feedback on improvements would be appreciated.
Mansa: Time for the founding of the glorius nation of Mali!
Joe: Wait! I thought you agreed we were calling it Joeland, and how come we didn't stay in Carthage?
Mansa: Too bad! I'm the leader, your my servant!
Joe: Servant? I thought I was a Royal Duke of Timbuktu
Mansa: Fine, your a 'royal' servant. Happy? Now, hurry up! Go get Kris!
Kris: What is it sir?
Mansa: How is our starting position?
Kris: Not so good sir, we have but one hill, and a huge amount of flood plains and desert.
Mansa: Dang it! I knew we should have stayed in Carthage!
Joe: ...maybe if you'd listen to me...
Kris: ...we would be in a state of anarchy and destruction
Mansa: Very wise words Kris, you may just get a promotion soon...
Joe: What! I've been working for you for 30 years and I never got one!
Mansa: Servants can't be promoted. Stop complaining, and go over into the city, we are building a worker! Poor unlucky souls won't get a break for 6000 years.
Joe: Uh... who did you choose?
Mansa: You'll find out VERY soon...
Joe: Actually, it could be nicer than working as your "royal servant"
Mansa: Well, if you really are enjoying working with me, I suppose you can stay. We'll have so much fun!
Joe: NO! Send me to work with the slaves!
Mansa: Nah. You'd just laze around all day. Here, I'll be able to make sure your working a lot more than those slaves ever will!
Mansa: Now! You two go inform the warrior to explore, we need to find that tribal village we saw earlier next to Carthage! We're going to burn it to the ground!
Joe: *groans* Yes sir.
Kris: Will do.
Characters
Mansa Munsa- Leader- Official Title: Grand Super awesome leader who rules Mali
Joe- 'royal servant'- Official Title: "Royal Servant of Timbuktu who to Mansa's awesomness
Kris-Tech/Land advisor- Official Title: Secretary of Technology and Agriculture
Basil-Foriegn/Military advisor- Official Title: Secretary of Homeland Defense and Secretary of State
Hope you guys liked it, will update within a few days.