The extent to which the arrival of the Portugese impacted the Vijaynagar Empire

Very impressive Silver, I can say I definetely learned something to day about the culture of High Medieval India. So, since the were Vjaryangia the only remaining Hindu kingdom, did that mean other Hindu's were able to peacefully co-exist under Muslim regimes?
 
For the most part, it is a very well thought out paper. I think your introduction could use some work though. There are quite a few facts, while interesting, that have little to do with the subject at all. On top of that, the introduction should pull the reader in. As it stands, it just starts talking about the subject without any real transition, which could put the common reader off. Aside form that though, great paper!
 
You should say which sources provide which quotes, and you use quite a lot of casual idiom. Interesting presentation of the facts, though I would dispute short term gain/long term problems as 'balanced' which implies a concurrency of effects.
 
Congratulations for writing it but i can't offer an opinion until i read it all.
 
Aren't your quotes supposed to be embedded within the paragraphs for IB? <_<
 
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