Corrections below:
Based on the incredibly popular former
mod Rise of Mankind
mod, A New Dawn transforms Civilization IV,
transcending reaching to new heights and giving the players the best Civilization experience of all time. It contains a powerful and vastly superior new AI, charismatic new leaders and a new revolt and revolutions system. The huge amount
s of new content also include
s an advanced and reworked diplomacy system, a myriad of new automation options, an adaptive difficulty, and many other enhancements.
1
In short, this is THE Civilization game of the future.
Its It's the work of
hundreds' hundreds of talented individuals
2 over many years. The result truly does feel like A New Dawn!
1: Remove the ellipsis in favour of a full stop
2: Remove the hyphen before 'over'.
Proper names, such as Rise of Mankind', should probably be italicised for clarity. I would generally not employ the use of the Oxford comma, but that's a matter of taste.
The text would appear thus:
Based on the incredibly popular former mod Rise of Mankind, A New Dawn transforms Civilization IV, reaching to new heights and giving the players the best Civilization experience of all time. It contains a powerful and vastly superior new AI, charismatic new leaders and a new revolt and revolutions system. The huge amount of new content also includes an advanced and reworked diplomacy system, a myriad of new automation options, an adaptive difficulty, and many other enhancements.
In short, this is THE Civilization game of the future. It's the work of hundreds of talented individuals over many years. The result truly does feel like A New Dawn!