SmithRobloxian

Sorry, just saw your posts in the SilliNES II thread; are you going to continue the work you are doing there and would you mind if I posted as well?

SR, I like you and the way you think, but your ideas aren't meshing at all. Your basic concept is sound, but the details are rotten. Sorry, I gotta be blunt about this. Right now, the rot is so deep, it is nearing the bones. If you want to save your concept, drastic measures are necessary.

My suggestion is to dump everything about your Kaiju (maybe write them on notecards), and then take each individual card and consider how it fits the paradigm of your creature and this NES individually. After you weeded out the bad, consider any holes in the revised Kaiju and either patch it in with suggestions, or post the skeletonized Kaiju for us to help fill in. And I mean drop EVERYTHING. Japanese-ish? Reconsider it. Human+X creature? Reconsider it. Heck, even the Fast, or the Striker features, Reconsider it. Take the entire thing holistically and choose.

I know it is easy to get defensive. The only way to get through is to get serious and do it yourself.

Hey, Smith, just so you know, there's a Heroes of Hopeville mission tonight if you want to be there. Hopefully we didn't scare you away