KingMorgan- four cities by 1AD, two without granaries, gold ignored. Total amount of three workers, building Maoi in city with unimproved pigs. Tech trading - not done. May be not.
RJM - Old sarai is interesting thing, well again i would prefer having gold with city Borissipa or whatever it is called. Besides that was barb city? 4workers per 5 cities, cap at size two, not a single granary (they are what? Out of fashion?), pigs in capital still mined. Did i said we are lossing money on zero percent? Skipping this.
Gumbolt - -15 gold is not that bad. Put workers to mine gems instead of building cottage. You should built some lighthouses as some citizens will have to work water to cover bills. Horse city is so badly misplaced
If you could extort CoL from Zara...
I do not get you build orders in general - temple before granary?
And i would have burned Dur-Ki.. Yeah, that holy city.
Conclusion - playable despite being 25AD save
Raskolnikov - central part has one city to much. Without New Sarai it would look better. Tabriz can't eben be irrigated via CS (hills and mountains lock him). Tiflis is beyound my understanding. We can't keep ten percent slider and have no Mids. We only hope is culturaly destroy barb city and gain some money. The worst part is crapy cties will remain crappy in future. Did i voted for this first time?
Plako- I've seen at least four unimroved grassland tiles being worked. Well having four workers per six cities is a reason. I would not build farm over forest when it can instantly be chopped ionto GL. Overall very reasonable.
Chromium - some nice wonders, although i do not like great spy polution I guess you would have settled southern horse, due to unscouted fish. Building all the wonders without marble
You also left clams in near unclaimable position. The good thing about Turfan is it allows Keshiks do one turn strike on Babylon. Bad thing very is no real production city besides capitol.
I also would not have built a single swordsman while teching HBR.
Turkis - I do not understand why both Srai were settled. settled GSpy. Unluckily Aesthetics already teched by Zara so marble wonders are in big question. Still chance of GL probably exists. At least gives slightly alternative tech path.