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Update 4:
Religion and War​

Landar uses its feast spell in a constructive manner again. By expending considerable magic, the quality of life rises for its tribesmen. This greater happyness means construction of another village can begin.Telak experiments with a very novel use of its magic. They noticed that fish were attracted to certain areas of the river and coasts. These areas are bordered by particular trees which produce a tiny fruit that insects seem to enjoy. The insects fly over the waters and become prey to the fish below. As well as this, these trees grow large roots directly into the waters and the fish like to hide amongst these roots. Using their Growth spell to grow seeds of these trees, they line the rivers and coasts of Telak land. Their roots no longer form hiding spots for the fish, but instead natural traps and nets that tribesmen can harvest with ease.

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Augmenting their magical powers, they sacrifice the village they recent captured from Carquas and construct a totem:

Immaculate said:
’The Garden’

OOC This tale is told from the point of view of Kibyan, the narrator of The Earth Thirsts. It has been approximately 8 months since she witnessed the Botono Il’man sacrifice Carquos warriors for the sake of the island’s orisha. Kibyan is now an apprentice priestess and Il’man’s personal assistant. She has learnt much of mysticism and the spirits but has yet to come to terms with blood sacrifices demanded by the island’s orishas.


The drummers beat out a faster and faster tempo and the warm humidity of the jungle air seemed to pulse with their beat and with something greater. Sweat poured from the senior Botono as she whirled and danced amongst the bound captive causing her naked black skin to shine like polished obsidian and to reflect the many bonfires’ orange glow. Kibyan could feel it. Something was coming. Faster and faster the drums beat out furiously. Hotter and hotter the air swam with mystical energy. The Carquos, again bound with vines and jungle life stared with wide eyes filled with fear, pain and even anticipation. They strained against the binding plants but the plants tightened, animated with the spirits of the local orishas and strained back; there was no escape. The whites of the captives’ eyes were huge and their breathing fast, no doubt partially due to the vision-inducing mushrooms they had been forced to consume.

Kibyan too was dancing and she too was beating a boar-skin drum. The magic of the mushroom orishas brought vivid visions to life all around her. She could see the orishas flying through the air, breathing complex moving geometric patterns into her tribesmen, the plants, the earth, the fire, everything.

The beat reached a thundering crescendo; the drummers were about to reach their limits when suddenly Botono Il’man straightened and stiffened- he whole body seeming to take on a different posture, a different mannerism, a different… spirit.

Kibyan could see the great orisha of Jeje had slipped into its favorite priestess. Others saw it too. The drums were silent now; it was obvious to everyone present that the summoning had succeeded.

Botono Il’man spoke in a loud, clear voice, “These men and women- these Carquos are creatures of the island, of the land… the beasts in their hearts are of another time. They are favoured of the fury and wolf orishas and I will not claim their lives.” The possessed priestess lifted an arm and pointed at the captives as they stood in groups of 5-6, their backs towards each other and suddenly great pillars of rock grew from the earth with a tremendous ripping sound. The flames of the bonfires flickered and waves chaotically and many a Telak man and woman were horribly burnt; some lost their lives. The jungle itself was set afire. People everywhere began to run and scream. Kibyan scowled at them; the greatest orisha of the island was not to be disturbed or doubted. Her fellow tribesmen had dishonored the spirit with their base fear.

The apprentice priestess watched with amazement as vines and grasses grew up the columns finally reaching the bound captives as they hung suspended near the tops of the stone columns. The vines grew into the wolf-creatures, in and out of their skin, along their bones in thick inch-wide pulsating tendrils of the island itself. As Kibyan watched the vines grew out of ears, noses, mouths and even eyes and the Carquos began to take on a sinister grey pallor. Even as their skin seemed to tighten over their features and they shrunk visibly, the vines however began to pulse with a vital crimson glow- the beating of a heart- the beating of the prisoner’s heart. The prisoners were wounded but alive. Their blood fed the forest, the ground and the island but they would not be killed. They would remain trapped, forever prisoners to the whim of the island’s greatest orisha.

“You will feed these men and women children of Telak and you will have my blessing.” These were the great orisha’s last words prior to abandoning Botono Il’man’s body. The priestess collapsed to the ground, her eyes rolling about in her head like marbles in a bowl. Kibyan ran to her and put an arm around her. She pointed to the pillars with their vines and their captives as they fed the forest, “Mistress, our sacrifice was accepted.”

The Botono priestess spoke, “Yes- I feel its magic in me. We must care for these children of the wolf. Henceforth this place shall be known as ‘the garden’ and we shall be its tenders.”

Carquas' Talkan finishes his training and the tribe learns to fling balls of fire. Tartes begin another shamans training; Deimos. He will learn the spell Puppet. When used against other person, it will force him or her to do anything the magic user wants them to do, as long as the user is within hearing range. The puppet need not to actually hear what the magic user says, as the orders can be given from the magic user's mind.

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Spotlight 1 Dogpile 1

The combined forces of Telak, Tartes and Carquas are in unison against Fangar. They trade spells between themselves, but Fangar's redirect spell means none use these new spells in anger. Fangar assembles a massive force to defends its lands. These troops are better trained than the invading forces, and on home turf. It seems the combined generals of Telak, Tartes and Carquas were considerably over-estimating their luck. Telak and Carquas attack from the South of Fangar, with Tartes invading from the West. Tartes forces drive deep into Fangar land before news reaches them that chills them to the core. Landar forces, relishing a Tartes absent of defenders or Shaman launch a measured attack. They quickly capture the outlying village (the one previously of Gaak Vur's last stand) and then dig in. With Tartes distracted and needing to withdraw their small forces home, Fangar adds insult to injury by raiding across the border and burning a Tartes village to the ground. All does not go well for Fangar however, The combined forces of Carquas and Telak inflict considerable losses on their army, as well as capturing the southern most village. The battle field is bloody and difficult. To make much progress from the current borders, a considerable advantage will be needed.

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Firas uses their impressive army to capture a village. The Army used is so vast the villagers don't even attempt to put up a fight. The first steps are taken towards understand Stone Mining and the benefits that will bring.

Imper's shamans travel throughout the nation, telling the Story of Imp, spreading his word to stop the fall of the world into Entropy.

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Spotlight 2 Dogpile 2

In this, the combined forces of Mesaqoo, Norwal and Jorise attempted to bloody the nose of Byzan. The slightly problem is that the only tribe that really goes for it is Norwal; Mesaqoo and Jorise give but token gestures. Of the two and a half thousand men that Norwal sends to capture one village, the combined forces of Jorise and Mesaqoo number just pass eight hundred. When attacking a force of four and a half thousand, you can guess what the results might be. Sure enough, while the various waves, Imps and Wolves causing trouble, and armies turning against each other, there are heavy loses, but you try and lead a war with some barely trained warriors in the middle of a dense tropical jungle and see how well you do! Byzan knows some of the spells it will face and is prepared. Their men run from the coast at the sight of Mesaqoo canoes, and avoid much damage from its waves. It is the Imps that cause the biggest problems, the duration of their summoning is what prevents the damage being far greater.


There are other developments in Mesaqoo. Using the funds they recieved, they can complete Stone Mining in one fell swoop. Quality of life improves and the rebel town is placated. Their cacique Kimtumeh is killed by Iptsima after the oppression of Kimtumeh's people is just too much for Iptsima to bear. However, most people believe the change was for the better, and that without Iptsima's courage, life would have been far worse for the Mesaqoo. Izawau has taken on the role of Cacique, strongly backed by the warriors of the Mesaqoo, as well as his apprentice Iptsima. Along with his recent policy of favoring the common man, Izawau has cemented his place in power. His cunning tactics have no set him, and the Mesaqoo up for domination.

Sefosé are peaceful and respectful towards their neighbours, this impresses the villages around them and while not joining them, trade is initiated. Sefosé's canoes are used in training exercises along the river and while diminutive, Sefosé's men progress in their military training. There is only one small accident when one canoe travels too far down river, and is pulled out into sea. The few men it contained are not seen again.
 
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So there we go. Everyone cool?

Religion and Culture added. Hope you like my pictures.. i'm not going too over the top am I?

What would people think to an audio file describing the update rather than a written one (or as well as)
 
I don't know what the above post means exactly, but I'm going to pretend I didn't read it.

-> Looking forward to the update :)
 
Uhm Ninja you umm.... Well... 2stories and religion for me :P


Ninja Dude said:
I think I messed up mine and Northen's stories, although I might still be right:

Charles: 3 stories
Ninja Dude 5 Stories and Religion (might be wrong)
Frozen In Ice: 1 Story
Northen: 1 Story (Maybe wrong)
Daftpanzer: 1 Story
Immaculate: 2 Stories and Religion
Milarqi: 3 Stories
thomas: 1 Story and Religion


Before last update (by Abaddons count)
Abaddon said:
Ninja Dude +++
Milarqui ++ [Religion+ (Triad of the Mother and the Fathers)]
Charles Li +
Immaculate +
thomas.berubeg [Religion + (Cult of Imp)]
Northen Wolf +
Lord_Joakim
Dreadnought
Vertinari118
Daftpanzer

I took this "data" since last update:

Ninja Dude:
Story
Story AND religion description


Immaculate
The Cult of Thirsty Orishas - Religion

(He has two posts with stories, but technically they are Same, one has added description of religion Count them as story and religion?).
Milarqui
Religion of "Triad of the Mother and the Fathers"
Small story


thomas.berubeg
Religion of Imp(cult of imp?)

Northen Wolf
Religion of Reign of the Godly five
Story
Story

Charles Li
Story About Rebellion in one of his villages
Story about helping Norwal tribe
Religion of Ancestors

Draftpanzer
Story or religion?

Frozen In Ice
Story and/or religion
 
Northen Wolf and Ninja Dude should get bonuses for all this hard work :)

BTW my little story wasn't really aimed at religion... I'm still thinking about that (would Space Hamsterism fit into this NES? :)).
 
Northen Wolf and Ninja Dude should get bonuses for all this hard work :)

BTW my little story wasn't really aimed at religion... I'm still thinking about that (would Space Hamsterism fit into this NES? :)).

I have enough bonuses from my stories. And besides, my tally was inaccurate. I didn't really help much. Northen did a superb job though. :goodjob:
 
Just 5 minutes scroll, look for bigger text, read diagonally, copy little number, press alt+tab, paste it. Took me only like 10 minutes, so nothing fatal happened.

Milarqui said:
In fact, I have two other stories apart from the ones you have pointed out. One from the moment my soldiers reach the southern totem and the other during the Gaakt Vur war.

I was counting from page 10, SINCE the LAST update, I did not count "old" stories before previous update. Since then you have 1 religion and 1 story (total 2).


Since begging:

Ninja Dude:
Story 'bout Reggar
Shaman as tribe leader.
Story
Story AND religion description

Total: 4 or 5

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Immaculate
The Cult of Thirsty Orishas - Religion

(He has two posts with stories, but technically they are Same, one has added description of religion Count them as story and religion?).

Total: 1 or 2

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Milarqui
I seemed to have missed this, since it was so small, I did not noticed, when I scrolled through pages. Sorry
Totem capture
Religion of "Triad of the Mother and the Fathers"
Small story

Total: 4

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thomas.berubeg
Religion of Imp(cult of imp?)

Total: 1

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Northen Wolf
First story
Religion of Reign of the Godly five
Story
Story

Total: 4

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Charles Li
Story About Rebellion in one of his villages
Story about helping Norwal tribe
Religion of Ancestors

Total: 3

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Draftpanzer
Story

Total: 1

Frozen In Ice
Story and/or religion

Total: 1 or 2

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Lord_Joakim
Dreadnought
Vertinari118
Total: 0

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I Did double check, but If I missed something, let me know so I could add ;)
 
Thankyou ever so much NW. This is helping no end :D
 
Doing what's best for the world...

Also, can I get my update, where Byzan pwns entire world???

EDIT: WHOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
 
Lol Soonish. Today I hope :D
 
Ta-daaaaaah!
 
Damn, damn, damn, DAMN!!!

From: Tartes
To: Landar

It's quite obvious that you don't really know what honour is! We fought together in the past, and we were expecting you to follow on that friendship! First you went back on the matter of the Gaakt Vur totem, which should have been ours according to the tenants we held, and now you backstab us! Prepare yourself for a long and painful death!

From: Tartes
To: Telak, Carquas

We shall meet in order to make sure our warplans are updated due to the entrance of the Landar tribe into our war.

From: Tartes
To: Fangar

You will pay for the destruction of our town!

@Abaddon: Can I have a totem out of the recently raided town?
 
@ Milarqui. Sadly not :( The villagers spirits, which you would need to bind to the totem (as part of its ritural construction) have long since been lost into the æther. All that is left is dead bodies and a few burnt out huts.

From Landar
To Tartes


You are a blood thirsty tribe, repeatedly you attack fellow Taino without provokation. Why do you need to wage war against the Fangar?

From Fangar
To Tartes


An unprovoked attack from three different tribes? What is the meaning of this? We wished you no harm, yet you slaughter and rape my village foke. Will nothing halt this war?
 
Is burned village rebuilding cheaper than building new one, for an example costing 2 EP instead of 3? It has some basic things left, not all fields and cleared areas can be destroyed...

From: Norwal
To: Jorise

Thank you for your help, friend! Once this, bloody war, will be over, we will reward you for your help.

From Norwal
To Mesaqoo
Where were your men, we did see only few them in action, did all of them get killed on the way there? Nontless, You shall get your EP this year(1year=1turn), if you stay in war with Byzan for this year too. I thank you for your help.

Or perhaps you could push this payment onwards for one year, this would help us fighting against Byzan, that would be useful to you too, as my forces do most fighting...

OOC: I said my allies let me do the dirty work and try to get "free land". I did not expect Charles to aid me tho, thanks for that!

My war:
5600-3100=2500 troops as Norwal losses
Byzan seem to have lost 3000 troops, as they drafted 3000 troops and lost them in battles.(correct?)


Abaddon said:
Religion and Culture added.

For what and how much culture will I get? I noticed I have "3" culture and Byzan got "2" culture.

Also I AM THE FIRST MULTI-RELIGION TRIBE!!! Expect religious uprisings, ethnic cleansing with massive unrests, soon...

Abaddon said:
What would people think to an audio file describing the update rather than a written one (or as well as)

No thanks, I prefer to read, as I use multiple computers, also I prefer not to download/listen radio/discussions.

Abaddon said:
Hope you like my pictures.. i'm not going too over the top am I?

Updates are fine for me, Could be even more detaily :P

EDIT: How does my edited/labeled map feel to others? To err cheap?
 
To Imper:
From Telak:


We would like to negotiate the current border between our people. We would like to ask you to withdraw your borders on the coast to match our current borders inland. This is so that we can have a bit of ‘buffer’ around our precious easternmost village. Otherwise the villages cannot help but feel insecure and worry for their safety.

Should you agree to this we will sign a 5 turn NAP as well as agree to not expand any futher eastwards.

Your response to this missive will do doubt set the tone for our future relations


EDIT: OOC:

nice picture of the fish in the roots.
i like written more then audio also.
 
Should my stats show that i have learnt fireball also? I was supposed to get fireball from Carquas once they had learnt the spell. does that happen this turn instead? is it just a minor correction that needs to be made?

i.
 
To Imper:
From Telak:


We would like to negotiate the current border between our people. We would like to ask you to withdraw your borders on the coast to match our current borders inland. This is so that we can have a bit of ‘buffer’ around our precious easternmost village. Otherwise the villages cannot help but feel insecure and worry for their safety.

Should you agree to this we will sign a 5 turn NAP as well as agree to not expand any futher eastwards.

Your response to this missive will do doubt set the tone for our future relations


EDIT: OOC:

nice picture of the fish in the roots.
i like written more then audio also.


We accept.
 
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