[BNW] Grammatical errors

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Chieftain
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I'm not sure if this is the best place to report this, but I've noticed a few minor grammatical errors introduced by the new expansion:


  • Select Civilization -- Enrico Dandolo -- Venice:
    "Cannot gain settlers nor annex cities."

    This should be something like "Cannot gain settlers or annex cities," or "Can neither
    gain settlers nor annex cities."


  • Gold tooltip:
    "n from Trade Routes between your cities and other civilization's cities."

    "Civilization's" should be "civilizations'." Also, "civilizations'" should
    probably be capitalized to conform to other uses of the word in tooltips.


  • Great Merchant -- Conduct Trade Mission button tooltip:
    "Unit must be in a City State's territory that you're not at war with."

    This is a misplaced modifier. It should read "Unit must be in the territory of a City State that you're not at war with," or something similar.
 
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