Sure, no problem.I don't participate in this writing event but would it be possible to get my (very incomplete and equally rough) manuscript reviewed at CFC by somebody?
How long is it?
Sure, no problem.I don't participate in this writing event but would it be possible to get my (very incomplete and equally rough) manuscript reviewed at CFC by somebody?
My apologies. I got really sidetracked, writing-wise.you never got back to me, but I suppose it doesn't matter. New problem:
I've reached a point where I'm beginning to realize I'm pretty good at coming with an idea for a story and writing it down (first rough draft territory) but terrible at polishing or embellishing it past first rough draft stage. Any ideas on polishing a first rough draft? Or writing a second draft that is an improvement over the first?
Read through it and use the comments system in your word processor of choice to make notes on weak sections, things that need clarification, etc. You can also use a colour highlighting system to rank passages from weak to solid to [remove].
You might need to do that twice.
Then rewrite based on your draft and the notes. Specifically rewrite. From there you'll have a much better idea of what needs doing.
by "rewrite" you mean ditch the original rough draft entirely and just start over?
This is true, but you have to temper that with keeping in mind that while you are beginning to know your story really well, the audience is not inside your head and won't necessarily read between the same lines you do.Also, what goes unsaid: The more you write your story, the better you know it. Every rewrite lets you phrase things a little better than the last time. Again, depending on your first draft and how you write, that can differ. You'll get diminishing returns after a certain point.
Also, what goes unsaid: The more you write your story, the better you know it. Every rewrite lets you phrase things a little better than the last time. Again, depending on your first draft and how you write, that can differ. You'll get diminishing returns after a certain point.
Pretty much, yeah. Not everyone is going to like everything. I'm into fantasy, but not all kinds of fantasy. Zombies, for instance, are totally out. And while I'm not into Buffy the Vampire Slayer or Angel, I love The Crow: Stairway to Heaven and the Highlander series (along with the spinoff Highlander: The Raven). I'd actually started a crossover fanfic in which Amanda meets Eric Draven. I should see if I've still got the notes around somewhere and finish that - all the while keeping in mind that if/when it does get finished and edited to my satisfaction and posted somewhere, my target audience is going to be Crow and Highlander fans and people who aren't into those shows might not like it.Should I ignore the criticism entirely and say that she was just not the target audience?