Can someone review my comprehensive Domination Victory Guide?

[Civ_MD]

I recently beat a Domination Victory on Deity difficulty for all 58 civs as a marathon, with the intention of creating a general in-depth guide for beginner-intermediate players. I am trying to help my IRL civ group with this. Can someone give me some comments? I'm no world expert like you guys, but I do have +4000 hrs into the game and I think it will be a fun read for you.

Link is here:

CivMD's Domination Victory Guide to Civ VI (March 2023 Update)

docs.google.com

The contents are:
<Pretext>
<General Strategy Part 1- Regular Domination>
<General Strategy Part 2- Religion-boosted Domination>
<Civ-Specific strategies>
-I have paragraphs for all 58 civs.

 

[Noble Zarkon]

Really interesting, qq - if you're going work ethic and putting all that effort into religion why wouldn't you just go for a religious victory??

 

[Civ_MD]

You could. But assuming you want to win domination.