The Empire of Sean Khan

[The Conquerer22]

It was horrible times,the tribes of what would be the empire of Crog were fighting amongest themselves. After the Clishnacob tribe was defeated at the battle of Tricnah, the leaders(of Clishnacob) son Sean was taken away by the Miscellanious tribe. There the tribe raised Sean for the better part of his childhood.He saw great leaders come and go, corrupt leaders become overthrown etc etc etc.

He later ran away from the Misscelaniouse tribe to meet his father. At night Sean would go out and take some slaves from enemy tribes and make the slaves become loyal to his father. The slaves did so in thanks for their freedom.

At one point he was at a party with his father. Everyone was drunk, Sean being the drunkest yelled at his father for being ungreatful for his contributions to the tribe. That night he murdered his father to make sure that he himself Sean could take the tribe up to glory. The first tribe he slaughtered (and enslaved the children and women) were the Miscellaniouse tribe. Beating them at the same place his father lost at 13 years before.

Some people were trying to rebel to start a new governament called a senate. The rebels were defeated and all were enslaved,excluding the ones that were dead of course.

Sean later changed his name to Sean Khan. Seans military were extremly well trained. He had horse archers he called Keshiks, he had spearmen otherwise known as Hoplites. He had warriors that wore pelts, later nicknamed Jaguar Warriors, he had archers on top of elephants. He kept on upgrading his boats from galley to bireme to trireme. He had swordsmen known as legionaries.

No body could stop his armies. Not even the most powerful Mikitikawagen Empire. Even mutual protection pacts could save people. Everyone later gave in. By the time he had finished coquering what he wanted to conquer his scientists had found a substance known as saltpepper, wich could be transformed into gunpowder. He got rid of his now obsolete military units and transformed his army into a now succesful gunpowder empire.

Seans capital of Croton has all the great wonders possible. The hanging gardens to the pyramids. Nobody could get as far as he could in the time he did.

Sean later died from a gun shot wound to one of his lungs. By the time he had finished his conquests he had taken over one third of the entire world. The next leader had taken over in his fathers footsteps. The son of Sean later gave his father the name Sean Genghis Khan the Great of Crog. Translated would mean Sean the great, great leader of Crog.

The story of Seans son Ivan, will later be told in the same thread.
I hope you continue reading the adventures of Seans descendants.

Feel free to add any comments about this story. All ideas will be tried to be put into any story.

 

[The Conquerer22]

Ivan was not the greatest ruler Crog had ever had, he was being tormented by evil spirits. Some people thought he wasnt supposed to be the true king, but his younger brother, Jacob. Jacob was the youngest of 11 brothers.

Ivans tormented soul lead to a civil war, those who were loyal to Ivan and the others who wanted a new king, named Jacob. Ivan had been able to hold the North part of the country but the South wanted cahnge. A new power was rising, nobody ever defeated The Crogan Army, now they might have a chance since they were at war with eachother.

When the North and South were battling, the Incarions were ready to invade. The Incarions were the people Ivan was going to attack befor the civil war started. The Incarions, of Course attacked when the north and south were battling but they attacked the capital, the stupidest thing to do. The capital was a fighting city, full of gangs, armed with guns and other weapons. When, the Incarions attacked, they all were mudered by sharpshoters that even werent part of the army.

The armies of Crog no matter how seperated by political leaders of there country joined together, to defeat the invading Incarions.

In the end the Incarions, lost and had surrendered their terretories. The Incarions were the only other threat left for The Crogans to defeat. Sean was to old and tired for conquering, to try and conquer the only other military superpower.

The end was nearing for the ruler Ivan. Crog was split into 2 thrones, the emporer and the king. Assasins tried attacking Ivan and Jacob to end the war, but Jacob survived and sadly Ivan died. Ivan left the rest of his throne, to his brother. The civil war had ended but the wars were just starting.

 

[The Conquerer22]

Jacob was king and ruler over his fathers kingdom. He defeated the invaders at the the capital of Incara. Once Jacob captured all of Incara,he had to deal at the homefront,trying to deal with thugs and gangs. As a law, the lawbreakers had to join the army unless proven to be a phsyco or have some problem that. He sent the former law breakers on missions he knew they could handle like a battle for the murderers,raids for thiefs so on and so forth,and frauders or con artists on spy missions since tose people are best at faking their personalities. This plotting help him let a few of his senior officers retire.

And if and of his new troops die the enemy had been killed and the enemie at home had been killed. It was a win win cituation.

 

[wiseguy101]

Keep the story up, it sounds good so far!

 

[The Conquerer22]

Jacob had died,the last of the great kings had died the next streak of leaders were mainly dictators.Militaristic but had no interest in economies culture or what the people wanted so they had only a corrupt governament.Great unemployment raged across the empire the once great trading marketplace of Nachnahama was just a shadow figure of itself. The people had no education so they could not succesfully revolt. The people became deeply religious.They prayed that the Gods would send The Great leaders back to save them from this mess. The Banahana(The religious book) said that only if the people believed that the Great Sean Khan would come back and finish some unfinished business from when he was the leader. 50 years later a boy was born to the King and Queen,King Jaun and Queen Isonia. They named him after their ancestor Sean Khan,Sean.When Sean was 19, his father had been making a speach,then King Jaun had been murdered,they never found the murderer,but Sean was crowned King.

Because of all of the bad kings, All of the Allies had turned their backs on Crog.

 

[The Conquerer22]

The Reincarnation was here,Sean Khan had conquered all of his former allies lands exept one,the one who had never been defeated in a war. This was the most famous war in Crogan history.

Neither of the countries were ever defeated in a war.Sean had requested that the scientists and engineers start up working on new weaponry and ways that they could defend themselves from the fire power. Sean didnt just want cannons or other things that could be made obsolete by the newly engineered things. Some unknown fashion designer had come up with a new line of fashion he called Camouflouge that blends in with different enviroments, like mixed green colours for forests,sand coloured camouflouge for desert places and beaches so on and so forth.

Some hunter had broken his binoculars on his gun and noticed that if you close one eye you could see farther. Sean had expanded on this Idea and attached the unocular(half a binocular) to the gun. This helped expand upon warfare distance techniques.

Two other people had come up with this deranged way of how people could fly. They said if we attached a gun(preferabley an automatic) we could shoot at the people from above.Sean later approved of this idea and the Plane as the friends called it was built.

Someone else had built a vehicle and decided too spend some more of his money on putting a lot of steel on his truck and plow combination. This was called a tank and was painted with the same camouflouge as the fashion designer suggested go on clothes. The tank needed 4 people to operate it.

As soon as all of this technology was approved into the mainstream part of the army,Crog attacked its former allie,the Terians.

 

[The Conquerer22]

As the Crogans attacked the beachs of Teronia the planes rising above every other object attacking with machine guns, the tanks driving past the beachs with people riding on the back for protection. It seemed that neither would give up any time soon, but the technological advances the Crogans had made improved their chances 110%, because the Terians didnt have tanks or planes,and their military was small in numbers. So the Terians invented a submarine,a ship that "lived" under water wich gave them a better chance at winning the war,but 3 days later the Crogans sent out divers to take over a sub and take it to the closest Crogan port,to create replicas. The mission was successfull. it seemed that no body could beet the Crogans so the Terians surrendered. The leader of the Terians digested a sionide pill,and well quite obviously died. But not soon after the war, the world was at peace and entered a golden age for there was no war,but only peace,and not war technological advances but economical advances wich made everyone happy. Crog became known as the Country that will never die.Everyone was happy with the Hereditary rule but nobody knew what would happen when the reincarnation of on of Crogs most hated sons rose again to power.

 

[The Conquerer22]

Please tell me what you think of my story and what could be fixed or whatever

 

[biggamer132]

Screenshots would make a good addition.

 

[The Conquerer22]

Good point,any others?

 

[Zerpent]

Maybe splitting the text up in sections, giving each a title named from a greater event during that section of time? It would give the text a nice touch.

 

[The Conquerer22]

alright
people please keep commenting!

 

[The Conquerer22]

Screenshots would make a good addition.

how can I get screen shots?

 

[The Conquerer22]

Haha I remember this, anybody else like it?