This is the story of the Jin dynasty

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This is the story of the Jin dynasty
 
great way of telling a story, but i think it'd be easier for readers if you crop out the pictures for storytelling.

maybe it's just me, but i find it much more interesting, literary wise for a civ story to consist of words, supported by pictures, instead of a story filling with pictures, coz i've like seen civ4 screenshots for ages already.
 
I was thinking of that myself it might make it easier on me.
 
I actually like this different from format. It surely is interesting. Thanks for enlarging the pictures, it makes it much easier to read.
 
Thanks Naruto, I think it does too, after reading it. It seems most stories you read don't have screenshots or the screenshots don't work. I am however, starting my game over. I was just getting my feet wet. I have this scenario it is on the 1100ad GEM mod. I added a galleas and a bombard cannon, and after doing that I cannot load my savegame for my jin warlord Taizu. I still may finish some of the story further I have some 60 or so screenshots left. But I might just start a new story and take what I have learned from the feedback I got on the first one and try to improve on the next one.
 
I am sorry this story ends. I am currently adding some units to my mod. But I will be back soon with a better story. I want to expand my tech tree a bit and make my mod more interesting and fit better into History. My mod will go from 1100 CE to 1860 CE. Thanks for everyone's input on my first story.
 
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