GenMarshall
High Elven ISB Capt & Ghost Agent
Ok, trash the idea, I'm going to go back to my original idea. This time, I will make it work, I am going to invest my efforts in crafting a good story instead of taking shortcuts. (Original as in going with the original plan before I posted up the idea, just to clarify).
I apologize for my actions because I sort of feel frustrated again with trying to make the plot better or more interesting.
But I want to prove to you that I can and will change.
I apologize for my actions because I sort of feel frustrated again with trying to make the plot better or more interesting.
Again, I was frustrated when I saw Choxorn's post saying that he's still lost with the plot. I guess that got the better of me. I will make it work to the best of my abilities, I will take the counsel seriously from now on. I still need help in regards to properly storytell.It's not about who's-who, it's about crafting a story people actually want to read. The fact that you're even saying you'll dumb it down to the lowest rung pretty much proves you've taken none of my counsel seriously. You won't make it work, because you're too lazy to make it work: I've told you a million times good storytelling is an investment, and once again you're leaping for the nearest shortcut instead of actually trying.
Thor, that really hurts .You want to know why Kan' ditched you? You want to know why tailless blocked you? They couldn't put up with this god-damned carousel any longer, and it really is a testament to masochism that I've held out to this point. I don't admit mistakes easily, but I'm finally ready to accept that you can't change, you won't change, and I was a fool for thinking I could actually help.
But I want to prove to you that I can and will change.
I'm ready to give a proper send off. I guess I still have some attachment issues with my character.That said, I hitched almost every consequential idea I had for XII to this plot, so you will understand when I carry it forward in your stead. DYOS is more than any single contributor, and I can still see the value in your ideas, especially when you can't. If XII really was to be CivGeneral's retirement, then he deserves a proper send-off, not a middle-finger cop-out, and I sincerely hope that I will do you proud.
Then who is going to critique my plots?Good luck in your future endeavours, but do not expect advice from me in future, as you are clearly intent on squandering the it
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