Recent content by adarknight

I'm Not sure What "bridge thing" Your talking about. I assume you mean the water Mill. However I'm not sure, Thanks for the positive feedback. Next time I'm thinking of adding voice over so people know what they are watching.

Hey, What's going on guys and thanks for taking time out of your day to check us out. I'm Hans Lead Producer of CSFGgaming. Were just celebrating the restart of our channel and to kick it off I have been hard at working doing a single player Timelapse build! So far in the first episode we have...

Hey, What's going on guys and thanks for taking time out of your day to check us out. I'm Hans Lead Producer of CSFGgaming. Were just celebrating the restart of our channel and to kick it off I have been hard at working doing a single player Timelapse build! So far in the first episode we have...

I'll be adding a bit more today and tomorrow stay tuned! Also if you haven't done so already please check out my first three interments. Enjoy!

Haha okay. Well I just typed up another segment so I hope you enjoy! These next few were written before I started posting so they may not have all of your suggestions in them. Please go check it out!

Haha Okay. I hope you understand it means a lot that people will take time out of their day to read this.

I'm pretty young I'm only 15. I've never really cared for writing much before doing this I'm hoping that it will only get better and better and i hope you see that as i write and post more and more. If i have time ill post another part tonight. Again Thanks for the feedback. If you would like...

Okay. Sounds good. Do you like it though?

I agree with you on that. Like i said it's a work in progress so I hope you enjoy it though.

What you say makes a lot of sense. You are right if the reader does not understand anything about that line they are more than likely going to skip over it. I could leave that subject more "broad" and once he starts to understand Greek later in the book, we could talk about it more in depth...

Thanks! Will do. I'll work on that!

I'm Trying to work on that. It's hard because i feel that it certain spots different perspectives are needed. As for the rest of your suggestions thanks allot! I have already changed it! Thanks!

Hunter *** The past days his instincts had been really getting strong. He had been having this gut feeling telling him to go south. The night before he had another dream. This dream was one of the most vivid ones that he had had. This time it was of his cousin. She was running away from...

Hahaha. That might have just made my day. You are probably a way better writer than me. But through all of this I want to improve and so As i post increments you guys can critique. Tell me what i should change extra. I'll post the first increment at 7.

Some things are like Percy Jackson in the fact that they are demigods extra. I am trying to tie in my own story into his present time books however. Every idea that i have had so far is unique and my own. The plot line is different along with the weapons, ext. Im thinking about sending it in to...