proofreading

Hey everybody, I'm new to Civ 5 modding and have been having trouble creating an actual working mod. I'm not concerned with it being the most amazing project or anything. My goal is small and personal. Make a mod that I can enjoy in singleplayer and mess around with. Been working on this...

I know this probably isn't the point of the forums, but... I just made this. I didn't do what I said I would at all, but I did use the assets to help with wording, and I was wondering if people could point out any potential flaws. I'm not able to test my mod because I know things aren't complete...